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Strike them, body flowing with venom, you've been struck by a serpent....
I'm burning hot in my flames, I'm extremely fervent.....
Mind is exploding in to different ways it's divergent....
To one day see it dominate as it's emerging....
Exquisite rhymes will leave them wanting another batch...
Make you blow out your death wish candles, light up the match...
While critics judging me, like glue they seem to attach....
Try to destroy my pride, you didn't even make a scratch....
The ground rips apart as i uprise from the ashes....
Cause a tidal wave, I'm at the peak while the tsunamis are smashing....
Struck down but you'll never find me collapsing.....
My soul is feeling empty like a box within a mansion....
Feeling like I've done nothing to improve....
I'm not a leader, but I'm trying to find the right steps too choose....
Endurance is the key, just get up and never lose.....
They say that words hurt you but I don't see a bruise.....
And since I'm new, do I have let my opinions stay in?
It's got me feeling like a wild animal caged in....
Now this is what I Think of the rappers in the Ro Rap game....
I have too let these feelings out so my mind won't go insane....
RedNation is the dopest street artist,
Xximmortalfrost sucs, he's probably my next target,
Altar is a great lyricist but he's way too dang cocky!
Drake is also a beast but his flow is sometimes sloppy,
But don't get it wrong he's my boss and I'm his artist,
And just to make it proud I will always work my hardest,
But I felt kinda left out when Radical didn't mention my name....
I guess I'm really not at that level of fame....
Confusing as it is, it's hard to understand the rap game...
But hey, R.E.D, is for Rap Eventually Dies anyway....
(Outro)
And we are just here to revive it. |
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I had to let what I thought out.
But all of the artist i included on the list are dope,
Except for xximmortalfrostxx |
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Everyone is dope on the list. Except xximmortalfrost, |
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Ok how could I have done better? |
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Your obviously not a fan of Ro rap so gtfo... |
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Well that's just ur opinion. |
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It's not a fact if not everyone agrees. |
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This is good.
c;
Swiggity Swag You're Bad |
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china's right
Just a scratch upon the skin, a drop of blood to welcome them. |
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Thanks :D. It means a lot coming from my boss. |
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altar30Join Date: 2010-11-26 Post Count: 1925 |
You call it cocky, I call it confidence
Dope song tho. |
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Thanks. XD. You're part of the reason I have decided to improve my lyrical ability. |
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altar30Join Date: 2010-11-26 Post Count: 1925 |
Glad to hear that man |
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I better be the reason too.
lol
Swiggity Swag You're Bad |
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altar30Join Date: 2010-11-26 Post Count: 1925 |
False |
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YlndyJoin Date: 2013-03-15 Post Count: 1765 |
bad, nobody like ur bad poetry lyrics. |
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ripping on ro rap is getting old tbh |
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