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CrimsonPact

Join Date: 2010-01-02
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#130074218Monday, April 07, 2014 2:55 AM GMT

http://www.roblox.com/-----place?id=71800635 you know you want to still WIP [ CrimsonPact | Dynamite2787 ]

Phrixys

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#130074332Monday, April 07, 2014 2:57 AM GMT

7/10 would steal and edit

CrimsonPact

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#130074449Monday, April 07, 2014 2:58 AM GMT

"would steal and edit" nicest thing anyone has ever said to me :') [ CrimsonPact | Dynamite2787 ]

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#130074515Monday, April 07, 2014 2:59 AM GMT

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Dr_Protato

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#130074545Monday, April 07, 2014 2:59 AM GMT

terrible, it barely has anything

b3njam1n

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#130074590Monday, April 07, 2014 3:00 AM GMT

Yeah not bad at all, obviously it's empty though, and that stuff is where it's most important

b3njam1n

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#130074665Monday, April 07, 2014 3:01 AM GMT

Proscate, how about you learn to read you dimwit. It says "still WIP", if it was a finished product he was presenting I'd say the same thing, but he didn't. For what it is, just the terrain, it's far from terrible.

OmniscientRam

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#130074697Monday, April 07, 2014 3:01 AM GMT

2/10 would barf

Komnenos

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#130074784Monday, April 07, 2014 3:02 AM GMT

I'd add stuff to it, yeah, but it's nice and dainty

iSaverous

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#130075002Monday, April 07, 2014 3:06 AM GMT

ummmm

Phrixys

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#130075018Monday, April 07, 2014 3:06 AM GMT

Try adding barricades to fill up the empty space :)

CrimsonPact

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#130075321Monday, April 07, 2014 3:10 AM GMT

no not barricades [ CrimsonPact | Dynamite2787 ]

CrimsonPact

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#130075408Monday, April 07, 2014 3:11 AM GMT

"terrible, it barely has anything how about you build something better as opposed to the things on your profile [ CrimsonPact | Dynamite2787 ]

MissCloud

Join Date: 2009-07-03
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#130075416Monday, April 07, 2014 3:11 AM GMT

if there was tools at hand i would delete it all

MissCloud

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#130075477Monday, April 07, 2014 3:12 AM GMT

sooo I could see u build it again out of pure coolness plottwist

CrimsonPact

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#130075496Monday, April 07, 2014 3:12 AM GMT

"already better than the spc standards" not really "2/10 would barf" B-eautifully A-mazing R-eally F-antastic [ CrimsonPact | Dynamite2787 ]

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#130075549Monday, April 07, 2014 3:13 AM GMT

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CrimsonPact

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#130075563Monday, April 07, 2014 3:13 AM GMT

"if there was tools at hand i would delete it all" "sooo I could see u build it again out of pure coolness plottwist" <3 [ CrimsonPact | Dynamite2787 ]

FriendlyBiscuit

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#130075654Monday, April 07, 2014 3:14 AM GMT

I personally think that your style is really nice. :)

CrimsonPact

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#130075688Monday, April 07, 2014 3:14 AM GMT

"also the 1-stud-layer of grass on the cliffs is extremely generic so i suggest you resize it like 0.5 stud on the side and make it higher too" what do you mean [ CrimsonPact | Dynamite2787 ]