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rockmax2112alt
#140820784Saturday, July 19, 2014 5:02 AM GMT

Out in the quiet streams of Illinois, and large cornfields lies a town known as "Greenfield", a small, bustling community. The town was first built in 1905 by a wealthy man named David Anderson. The town prospered, and had a good community bustling, with Farms, General Stores, Etc. During World war II, it industrialized into an aircraft factory, and as so an airfield was built to train pilots for the war front. After that, Greenfield was hit by a devastating tornado in 1958, which left many businesses crippled. So the town kept rebuilding, until it got to it's former self. There are many things to do here, such as Take a walk in the nearby Forrest, or visit the historical fort, Fort Anderson, which was the first part of the city to be built. But it doesn't stop there. Indians lived in the Forrest, and there are tales of treasure and curses. ----AREAS---- 1. Fort Anderson: You can take a stroll here or learn about the historical record here. 2. Forrest: Here you can take a hike or go fishing. Or you can hunt for so called "Treasures.". 3. Main housing area: Where most houses are. You might live here. 4. Old airfield: This is old and abandoned, but RC planes are occasionally flown here. 5. Sporting Goods store: Here you can buy fishing equipment or hunting equipment as well. (PM me for area ideas. ) ----CHARACTER SHEET---- Name: Age: Race: (You can go supernatural if you want...) Personality: Appearance: Bio: Other: ---RULES--- 1. No godmodding. 2. No Mary/Gary Sues. 3. Standard Roblox rules. 4. Standard RP rules. 5. I'll give your character a quest, just PM me if you want a quest. (Quests are adventures you can take on with friends, such as finding Indian artifacts, Etc. Treasures, however I limit treasure quests.) ---OTHER---- What will you do in this town of Greenfield, the town of adventure, stories, and mysteries? (P.S., I will add more town history if anyone goes to the fort.)
rockmax2112alt
#140820989Saturday, July 19, 2014 5:04 AM GMT

I will post my CS tomorrow.
rockmax2112alt
#140823283Saturday, July 19, 2014 5:33 AM GMT

No one? Sigh... This had potential, darnit. Criticism, please?
rockmax2112alt
#140824073Saturday, July 19, 2014 5:45 AM GMT

Please, anyone? How do other RP's get people...
sweetlillyrose
#140824833Saturday, July 19, 2014 5:55 AM GMT

Well, I see potential, but you need a better organized (And long) plot. Plus, their is no main problem that us role-players have to try to accomplish.
3km
#140824838Saturday, July 19, 2014 5:55 AM GMT

no one likes regular life when they already have one
zadfad
#140825074Saturday, July 19, 2014 6:00 AM GMT

"Long and has potential" "Long and has" "Long and" "Long" Lold
rockmax2112alt
#140842205Saturday, July 19, 2014 1:33 PM GMT

I did say I would expand the history of the town if someone went to the fort.
rockmax2112alt
#140842348Saturday, July 19, 2014 1:36 PM GMT

(Bump)
mageofpower
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#140842408Saturday, July 19, 2014 1:38 PM GMT

An overarching plot would be nice.
rockmax2112alt
#140842632Saturday, July 19, 2014 1:43 PM GMT

Fine. I'll add more when I get the chance. Thank you for giving me some criticism, it helps me improve.
hwen4
#140842836Saturday, July 19, 2014 1:47 PM GMT

----CHARACTER SHEET---- Name: Epuaz (John Doe is his "Human" name.) Age: Several Millennium's have passed since his birth Race: Thal Personality: To humanity "John Doe," is awkward, strange, far-off, alien, yet very friendly. Appearance: John Doe is a very husked creature, both tall and slender (As he stands 7,1.) His skin is tinted green, and his ears are cut long and curved (He excuses that as a "Green-Land" thing.) His face is also shallow, and he has lush brownish/grey hair, and deep red eyes. John Doe wears a variety of, "Trendy," clothing from the early 90's. Bio: Born on the planet Epoch 9 in the Gargantuian Cluster, Epuaz was sent out among thousands of other Thal babies to preserve the race after its extinction due to over-pollution, and constant in-fighting. Landing on Earth, many, many, many years later, Epuaz aged to the point he would be a "Teen" in the eyes of humanity. Though his fellow students find him very strange, the strength he brings to simple games like base-ball or basket-ball makes him a popular student (Even though he hangs with the more intelligent kind. Something his "Popular" friends find very strange.) Other: John Doe's main focus is to stay hidden, and learn about this new civilization this, "Earth," Even so, the military has found his capsule, and are out searching for him.
hwen4
#140842873Saturday, July 19, 2014 1:48 PM GMT

(How I see this Mage is that we'll be focusing on individual plots that the Op will use to create an over-arching one.)
rockmax2112alt
#140844155Saturday, July 19, 2014 2:17 PM GMT

(Sigh... by "Supernatural" I meant like, Werewolves or Vampires, not aliens... and a John Doe is military slang for an unidentified male corpse... Just change your name, bio, and Race, and we'll be set. If you don't want to go supernatural, then put american, Russian, etc. As a race...)
hwen4
#140844366Saturday, July 19, 2014 2:21 PM GMT

(... Welp, I'm outie. I used "John Doe," because it is a name put on just about anyone who has yet to recognized 'think when you go to a hospital for an emergency, they tag you as John Doe' Second, I think the character is put together well.)
mageofpower
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#140844469Saturday, July 19, 2014 2:23 PM GMT

(Sigh... by "Supernatural" I meant like, Werewolves or Vampires, not aliens... Then make that clear in the op.
hwen4
#140844833Saturday, July 19, 2014 2:29 PM GMT

To be fair, aliens cannot be truly classified as "Supernatural," however, I thought the intrigue of having an alien in the plot-line would influence players to join.
rockmax2112alt
#140844979Saturday, July 19, 2014 2:32 PM GMT

Name: Frank Robertson Age: 40's Race: American Personality: Frank likes to Fish and hike in the nearby forrest. He is Kind, Patient (A lot of fishing taught hum this ) And angry when pushing his buttons. Appearance: Frank is 6'9, and often wears hiking boots. He also has a beard and blue eyes. Frank also likes tree o wear Khaki shorts and a T-shirt. Bio: Frank was born here, and is proud to be a resident of the town. His father taught him fishing, and when he had free time, he would take a hike in the woods to sightsee. Other: Accepted by meh
rockmax2112alt
#140845058Saturday, July 19, 2014 2:34 PM GMT

(Alright, fine. Just change the name and you are accepted. I know I didn't make it clear in the OP, so that's on me.)
hwen4
#140845155Saturday, July 19, 2014 2:36 PM GMT

What's wrong with Epuaz!?
rockmax2112alt
#140845466Saturday, July 19, 2014 2:42 PM GMT

I meant John Doe. It makes me feel as if I have an unidentified male corpse here. Just change the last name.
hwen4
#140845699Saturday, July 19, 2014 2:47 PM GMT

"John Doe/Jane Doe, originally a term in law, has expanded in North America to be used colloquially for any person or for a hypothetical average person." Reason why he has this name, because it is often referred to an average person, and he wants to be "Average."
rockmax2112alt
#140846291Saturday, July 19, 2014 2:57 PM GMT

Oh. Accepted.
rockmax2112alt
#140846364Saturday, July 19, 2014 2:58 PM GMT

We'll start when four more people join. (I also forgot to add Gender, lol.)
rockmax2112alt
#140847138Saturday, July 19, 2014 3:10 PM GMT

And could someone spread the word about this? I want to get many people as possible to join.

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