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DCKool
#14155217Saturday, September 12, 2009 8:27 PM GMT

Chapter 1: A Foggy Start GoldenStatue woke up. His eyes felt heavy. His arms and legs we're aching. He had a headache. He slowly crawled out of bed and scampered over to the door. He twisted the knob and crept inside the hall. He felt...Strange. Puzzled, he walked down to the kitchen and grabbed some blox-flakes. He slowly ate them. There wasn't a sound coming from the city he lived in. Something was wrong, very wrong. He leaped over to his window and stared, hard, through the misty glass. Still nothing. He couldn't see any signs of life. He quickly shoved the last few blox-flakes down his throat, grabbed his h.at and ge.ar and rushed out of the door. What was happening? Nothing, by the looks of things, he thought to himself. But then, he noticed a grey-ish green fog slowly emerge from the house a few hundred studs down from his house, which was sat in the middle of a large oblong-shaped field. Without giving it a second thought, he rushed inside a huge skyscraper. Or, to be more exact, Roblox HQ. Part 2 coming soon...
qunuu
#14155267Saturday, September 12, 2009 8:28 PM GMT

DONT MAKE PART 2 UNLESS THE POEPLE APPROVE
DCKool
#14155280Saturday, September 12, 2009 8:29 PM GMT

That's what I was going to do.
ScaryWeegee
#14155300Saturday, September 12, 2009 8:29 PM GMT

:I
snickers3600
#14155309Saturday, September 12, 2009 8:29 PM GMT

Sorry but wrong forum go to Roleplay.
DCKool
#14155327Saturday, September 12, 2009 8:30 PM GMT

It will get switched to roleplay anyway.
stklord101
#14155346Saturday, September 12, 2009 8:30 PM GMT

Good!(I WANNA BE IN IT)
vMamba
#14155503Saturday, September 12, 2009 8:33 PM GMT

Great so far!
DCKool
#14155723Saturday, September 12, 2009 8:37 PM GMT

Chapter 2: Trouble in the HQ Golden crashed through the open door. He scanned the room. Nothing really out-of-the-ordinary, he thought. He rocketed up the stairs, putting his tiredness aside, and to his surprise, he saw Madrak slumped on his computer desk, eyes half-open. His mouth hit the floor in astonishment, and he ran over to Madrak. "Maaaaaaaaadrak! Wake up!" he cooed. He knew it wouldn't work, something sinister was happening. He noticed ReeseMcBlox hiding behind her desk, cowering, shaking like a leaf. That was the last thing he saw before the destruction struck the HQ.
troywwe
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#14155755Saturday, September 12, 2009 8:38 PM GMT

o-o
DCKool
#14155777Saturday, September 12, 2009 8:38 PM GMT

>:O bad boi! No eating reply buttons!
cyberkiller
#14155785Saturday, September 12, 2009 8:39 PM GMT

I dun approve unless I am in it, pl0x?
DCKool
#14155831Saturday, September 12, 2009 8:40 PM GMT

O rly nao. You will be in as a guest star :/ same with sktlord.
cyberkiller
#14155867Saturday, September 12, 2009 8:40 PM GMT

Wewt :D
stklord101
#14155891Saturday, September 12, 2009 8:41 PM GMT

Very good.
kopaka
#14156062Saturday, September 12, 2009 8:44 PM GMT

Pu me in, plox?
snickers3600
#14156093Saturday, September 12, 2009 8:44 PM GMT

Moar!
vvein
#14156095Saturday, September 12, 2009 8:44 PM GMT

Awesome! M0DERATI0N... :P
HoundOfNines
#14156117Saturday, September 12, 2009 8:45 PM GMT

it's either gonna have a giant zombie attack a horde of zombies attack a nuke or a guest flying a plane while randomly pressing buttons
Plad
#14156170Saturday, September 12, 2009 8:46 PM GMT

Can I be the Co-Star?
DCKool
#14156197Saturday, September 12, 2009 8:46 PM GMT

Chapter 3: Complete Madness ReeseMcBlox got up, and raised the alarm. Madrak started to move, but when he got to his feet, he fell over into the elavator. Golden rushed to his aid, but the door slammed shut, nearly trapping Golden between the door and the elavator like a robloxian sandwich. He swiftly sidestepped out of the way, but the glass beside him suddenly shattered into a thousand pieces. Reese zoomed down the stairs, and entered the basement. She screamed at the admins and mods to evacuate, but something odd happened. The robloxians got to their feet. Their skin was pale, their clothes were torn...But the worst part was, they had jagged teeth...This could only mean one thing. They were posessed. The people that want to be in it will have to wait til I can fit them into the story.
Plad
#14156212Saturday, September 12, 2009 8:46 PM GMT

Like Golden's buddeh, but I'm loaded with a ton of freaking gear >:D
papaya255
#14156253Saturday, September 12, 2009 8:47 PM GMT

First off, start sentences interestingly, not with he, or she, or a name ALL the time. Be more descriptive! I couldn't picture any of the settings, all I saw was madrak slumped in a chair and a desk with reese behind it. I knew nothing of what the rest of the room, office or whatever. The concept is great.
Plad
#14156272Saturday, September 12, 2009 8:47 PM GMT

I'll pay you 5000 tickets :D
kopaka
#14156334Saturday, September 12, 2009 8:49 PM GMT

Ill pay you Life if you Put me in As a Main Character.

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