The Frost By Master Pilot Chapter

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#147107929Wednesday, October 01, 2014 1:55 AM GMT

Noooooo

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#147108621Wednesday, October 01, 2014 2:04 AM GMT

Master, you get like a b+ for effort, but this story is so badly written (not even counting the grammatical issues) I think this story gets an F. Please try to learn descriptive paragraphs before trying to write a story.

Metricals

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#147108644Wednesday, October 01, 2014 2:04 AM GMT

Master make me a guy that takes out enemies with a sniper.

mastergyroosandwich

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#147109293Wednesday, October 01, 2014 2:12 AM GMT

One I have damickey for that, and two as of right now, most of the known world thats not FC is dead. So .-.

Metricals

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#147138976Wednesday, October 01, 2014 8:49 PM GMT

Just put me in -.-

mastergyroosandwich

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#147141398Wednesday, October 01, 2014 9:27 PM GMT

I will not shoehorn anyone in just for the sake of having them see themselves in the book. I did it for Yumori because there was potiental plot wise soooo ye.

Huskieboy

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#147141784Wednesday, October 01, 2014 9:34 PM GMT

wrong forum.

Metricals

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#147165372Thursday, October 02, 2014 3:12 AM GMT

Ow. After all we went through together... shots fired