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Wobull
#145413078Friday, September 05, 2014 11:16 PM GMT

Beat : https://soundcloud.com/yungkream/sad Intro: I think about it Yeah, you know I do this for y'all Love it too Everyday write Let's get it Mhmm It's Yung Kream Verse 1: I grew and listen, had ideas so I withdrew my Christian But it's true, I'm a new edition, but I still reminiscence Does this world make sense, expense the suspense, faith was a fence I took deep offense, I started becoming a little against And no I ain't a twelve year old rebel Just near bold, I brought my thoughts to another level Age eleven, more mature than seven Parents gave me sessions, then I doubted a heaven Think about my future, but they said my possessions were nothing Where are these treasures from above, I don't see something They put me in a lot of pressure, ain't look what I'm becoming Brain is numbing, gun cocking, and now my knife is cunning Life's stunning, while I have my own heart pumping Is it worth a tall building jumping Would I go clubbing when I'm older, crushing Cussing a lot more, and I'm grudging Do I have to believe, in Genesis and Revelations I blemish the beginning, but also spinning in speculation Only some connection, relation, just like emulation We control it, patrol our own life but we really never enrolled And sadly that's just how it has always been Chorus: Said I couldn't make it, but I reflect Neglect your responses and hate but I reflect Keep all your criticism up to date but I reflect When I do this I never be late but I reflect Verse 2: I had to be more skeptic about a lot of opinions Don't care if it made me cry like onion, a lie worth a billion I had to admit, what these adults commit was worth trillions I was all civilian, and guess my mind was on a million Sum it up, I was stupid like I was hit by cupid Feel putrid, spit on, sh[]tted, conned and so much more Barely even believe these people, this my wounded sequel Illegal and I ain't regal, check it mama Now all people think about, drama forget their papa Never really met mine, but others are there in their kids dine Feel like I'm dying, crying, but I don't think it's worth fighting The fire is sparking though, still hanging low but it's igniting I see the sighting, dad is seeking and I'm hiding Recycling the love every day like a wheel, love's providing We would always have fun, outsider or insider But he was never my provider, but family divider Sh[]t is fake like fiber, and the material is the soul I was always told that my father was a hero But where's the scroll, did he sold something now it's zero Maybe he and I'll know tomorrow, the sorrow, it will still follow Hollow meaning and vanity, sanity fading, shallow If there was an inferno, he'd be burning and I know (Bridge) I just know I just know I just know I just know I know it, I know it, I know it, I know it Chorus: Said I couldn't make it, but I reflect Neglect your responses and hate but I reflect Keep all your criticism up to date but I reflect When I do this I never be late but I reflect
Wobull
#145416036Friday, September 05, 2014 11:51 PM GMT

rate :(
Wobull
#145419023Saturday, September 06, 2014 12:28 AM GMT

bump
Yadoking
#145425946Saturday, September 06, 2014 1:56 AM GMT

Will check it out tomorrow
Wobull
#145430898Saturday, September 06, 2014 2:54 AM GMT

Oh no it's not recorded I have no time for that atm
mynameisidiot14
#145431232Saturday, September 06, 2014 2:59 AM GMT

"It's Yung Kream" I died
Wobull
#145431763Saturday, September 06, 2014 3:05 AM GMT

I am starting the Starbucks Iced Boys
retartedwiz
#145443471Saturday, September 06, 2014 6:11 AM GMT

i like this. record yourself rapping it b a man
DigitsGod
#145444038Saturday, September 06, 2014 6:22 AM GMT

watch out guys we got a 12 year old bad ass over here
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#145445332Saturday, September 06, 2014 6:51 AM GMT

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ducky980
#145445817Saturday, September 06, 2014 7:04 AM GMT

syllables are getting better, dont be lazy on that chorus tho
Wobull
#145454879Saturday, September 06, 2014 12:48 PM GMT

Thanks for the comments y'all! Ducky, I honestly can't really make a good chorus. I just put something that can possibly relate, then I make it the hook/chorus
Wobull
#145467652Saturday, September 06, 2014 3:53 PM GMT

bububump
Wobull
#145480711Saturday, September 06, 2014 6:37 PM GMT

bump
ducky980
#145480908Saturday, September 06, 2014 6:39 PM GMT

the chorus needs to be a killer to make/break a track make sure you dont wimp out on them
Wobull
#145480976Saturday, September 06, 2014 6:40 PM GMT

can you give me tips? i'm new to choruses i usually have someone else do it for me
ducky980
#145481454Saturday, September 06, 2014 6:45 PM GMT

the chorus is the part of your song you want everyone to remember so normally it just needs to be very melodic and catchy if you want specifics just ask me and ill pm it to you
kenzie12345555
#145571274Sunday, September 07, 2014 4:57 PM GMT

Not gonna lie at all. This was one of the best raps/song I've seen sine I've been in ro-rap. I've been in ro-rap since April...
Wobull
#145669111Monday, September 08, 2014 11:15 PM GMT

thanks kenzie
Wobull
#145685220Tuesday, September 09, 2014 2:08 AM GMT

Rhymes weren't on point, still focusing on syllables.
Wobull
#145981750Saturday, September 13, 2014 7:00 PM GMT

bump
Wobull
#145994757Saturday, September 13, 2014 9:54 PM GMT

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