of     1   

Jakob_Kane
#14830194Wednesday, September 30, 2009 10:46 PM GMT

(This is a story. Not a RPG) Prolouge: There it was,the vampire of the night,staring right at me. I've heard the legends,but I didn't completely think it was real. But now that I'm seeing it,I don't know how I can handle it.... ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Story-I'm a twelve year old kid named Zeke. I live in a small,strange town named Kilony Xeua. (Kyl-on-i Zay) We moved here from California after an earthquake and decided to move here .It's just a little town right outside of New Mexico right near the border of Texas. But at midnight,strange and weird things start happening. I've heard all the tales of vampires at night and zombies roaming around,but I havn't really gotten to believe them. But now,I think I am... ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ (Chapter 1 will begin in an hour or so)
DecalDragon
#14830280Wednesday, September 30, 2009 10:48 PM GMT

??? WHATS GOING ON IS THIS TWILIGHT! WTH YOUR A GUY IT BETTER NOT BE TWILIGHT!!!
DecalDragon
#14830408Wednesday, September 30, 2009 10:50 PM GMT

I NEW IT IT IS TWILIGHT!!! VAMPIRES RULE!!! :D you thought i hated twilight stories I GOT YOU!!!
Jakob_Kane
#14846600Thursday, October 01, 2009 12:08 PM GMT

No,this isn't Twilight. This has much more than vampires. In the prolouge I just used a vampire for an example.
rachetandclank2
#14846621Thursday, October 01, 2009 12:09 PM GMT

Let's hopw you dont use the sparkly vampires. THEY DONT SPARKLE.
Jakob_Kane
#14846829Thursday, October 01, 2009 12:25 PM GMT

Chapter 1: Going to school I was shivering in my bed from the cold Fall air. I was dreaming about zombies and werewolves trying to get me. I was relieved when my mom woke me up. "C'mon Zeke! Time for school!" My mom shouted. I wanted to get up because of the dream,but I just kept dreaming and crumpling into a little ball. Then my mom walked in and saw me on the floor shivering. "Honey,you ok?" She asked me in a quiet whisper. My eyes shot open,"Yeah,I think I'm fine". I said yawning,still thinking about the dream."Tired though". "I can imagine you are!" My mom said with a little giggle. I ate breakfast with my dad when he woke up. We were eating waffles and sausage when the phone rang. My mom picked up the phone,"Hello?" "Yes,may I speak to Zeke?" "Uh...sure." My mom said walking over to me. She handed me the phone. "Hello?" "Hey Zeke." "Oh,hey Kyle." Kyle is my friend. Uh...best friend actually. The only friend. Since I moved,the only friend that moved with me is Kyle. And since I moved here just a few weeks ago,we havn't gotten to meet any new people. "You ready for school?" Kyle asked. "Yeah,I think I'm ready." I said enthustiasticly. "Meet ya at the bus stop."
Jakob_Kane
#14862291Thursday, October 01, 2009 10:39 PM GMT

Chapter 2: Bad News.... I have always rode the bus to school ever since I was in kindergarden. I walked outside and before I just the door,I said bye to my parents and walked toward the bus stop. "Hey dude!" I said to Kyle. "What's going on?" "Nothin' much." He said frowning. "My girlfriend Jennifer passed away last night." "How?" I asked shockingly. "While she was riding her bike a dump truck accediently ran over her. I found out on the news this morning." "I'm sorry dude. You'll get another girl though." "I don't wanna another girlfriend. Jennifer was perfect. No one at the school likes me anyway." I never liked seeing Kyle sad because if he's sad,I'm sad. Jennifer was just the perfect girl for him. A shy,sweet normal girl that will make anyone smile. She's fun too be around with. We've hung out a few times also. I've seen here nice smile,make anyone laugh. And her shiny brown hair just below her shoulders. It was perfect. "Well,maybe I can find someone else" he said with a smile appearing. "See,thats the spirit!" I said cheering my friend on. The bus roared down the road and stopped with a screech. Kyle and I hopped on the bus and went inside the middle area seat. "When are you gonna get a girlfriend?" Kyle asked curiously. I looked at him. He looked back at me without even a little grin. "Dude,I'm serious." He looked deep in my blue eyes with his hazel ones. I thought about this for a second. I thought about Molly. I liked her,and I've been hearing rumors that she liked me,but I don't believe them. Then I thought about the vampires and zombies chasing me,trying to hunt me down. Then a tingle cold shiver went down my spine. And just then,I suddenly yell,"MOLLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" I cover my mouth and move to the back.Kyle moved back with me. "I didn't want you to tell everybody!" Kyle said giving me a little nudge. "Sorry", I said uncovering my mouth smiling."It's just this dream I had last night." "Hmmm....well ok. But you really wanna go out with Molly Dertny? Because if you do,I...I think I could probaly hook you up." Kyle said. I thought again. I wasn't really sure. I mean I really like her,but I'm not sure if it was exactly right. "I'll....I'll,I'll think about it." I said closing my eyes. I'm not sure if I could open them back up. Because,I just felt miserable.
Jakob_Kane
#14862345Thursday, October 01, 2009 10:40 PM GMT

(Second sentence,shut not just)
eyrie991
#14862616Thursday, October 01, 2009 10:44 PM GMT

nice story :D
Jakob_Kane
#14862773Thursday, October 01, 2009 10:47 PM GMT

Thanks. I try to make as many stories as I can in my spare time. If I like them enough I'll put them on Role playing.
Jakob_Kane
#14863622Thursday, October 01, 2009 11:00 PM GMT

Ok,I'll post the next chapter after while. If you wanna join,PM me. First,I need 2 vampires,1 werewolf,and 5 zombies. Make your name realitstic and suitable for a vampire,werewolf,or zombies. Suggestions for vampires. Alyuir Kenper Juter Mawq Jr. Copted Shtrakke Bendyt Mujiet Doufgh Jukile Suggestions for werewolf Dead Eye Killer Mega Track Boom Suggestions for zombie...ehhh....they used to be people right? Please use those names besides for zombies. Thanks. I'll stop letting people join after 5th chapter.
Jakob_Kane
#14903013Friday, October 02, 2009 11:41 PM GMT

Chapter 3: Mr.Gyser? It seemed to take forever to get to school. I felt my face get real hot from embaressment since everyone was looking at me. I was just lucky Molly doesn't ride our bus. When the bus came to a stop,we all scratched and clawed our way off the bus. "Well Kyle,I'll see you in Science class", I told Kyle. The only classes I get to see him in are Geography,Science,Exploritory,and of course lunch. I truffled over to my locker and saw that the combonation lock was torn off. I tried opening the hatch,but it didn't work. "What's wrong with my dumb locker?!!" I said still trying to open it. Finally I gave up and punched my locker. "Is everything ok Mister Thompson?" A british voice said behind me. I opened my eyes wide and turned around. I saw it was Principle Gyser. "Uh....everything is just fine Mr.Gyser. Just can't get my locker open." I said looking back at it. "Huh. Someone torn the combonation lock off." He said glaring me in the eye. "Follow me and I will get you new books. You can set them outside each of your classes." "Thank you soooooo much Mr.Gyser. But I swear,I didn't tear off the lock." "Don't worry. I know you didn't." Mr.Gyser said with a frown. Mr.Gyser took me to the Special Ed. room and went to get me new books. I looked around worrying about why Mr.Gyser didn't give me detention,and suspend me,even expell me. Something didn't feel right. And right when I felt a knot tightning in my stomach,I saw him grin. His british grin. I didn't feel at all comfortable about this. I ran out of the classroom and Mr.Gyser chased after me with a gun in his hand. "YOU MADE THE BIGGEST MISTAKE OF YOUR LIFE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" He yelled. I just kept looking forward and running as fast as I could. A 6th grader running away from school. Kids these days. My head spinned,my stomach knot became tighter,and I was running from the principle. What an exciting day,and the school bell is just about to ring. Oh boy...
Jakob_Kane
#14903587Friday, October 02, 2009 11:53 PM GMT

You know,I don't like this story anymore. Game over...
DecalDragon
#14920587Saturday, October 03, 2009 5:49 AM GMT

:D! STORY FAIL! AWWWW!
Kyundi
#14921323Saturday, October 03, 2009 6:26 AM GMT

What is wrong with you Decal? You seem to thrive when a good story to some, but not to you doesn't get any reviews or replys...

    of     1