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royaltoeJoin Date: 2011-09-14
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Like I said before in game look at logitech's places |
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PsiTwosonJoin Date: 2010-05-31
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A purpose. |
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un-cancolide the tree leaves. |
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KadiosJoin Date: 2013-12-15
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Make the sign rotate and add like red lights on wall. |
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put effort in it
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It's quite nice already, I like it c;
The place right now is a little dark, though, so I suggest turning up the ambient and/or adding more lights.
The walls are quite plain. Try adding a little detail to them. You've already made some effort to do that by adding black lines, but it's still a little flat. Try breaking it up by making the walls from multiple parts and creating a bit of a pattern with them.
Minor annoyance, but trees growing on black plastic seems a bit odd. Try using more of a dark brown color and using the Slate or Grass material, and lift the border around the soil up a bit so it's higher than the soil itself.
The GUI might look a bit better if it actually has some color to it. Try transparent light blue and make the part white and more transparent. |
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It looks quite cool.
Try removing any unneeded outlines; add some cool clamps to the window (or some other kinda mechanical stuff, that looks cool on space stations); perhaps add some stuff flying around the planet. |
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I tried scripting an AI
Failed miserably
Flys for a second and explodes
so i'm just removing the planet and adding cool lights |
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Yea, just remove the un-needed lines and you're basically good.
✯ RSF Private First Class ✯ |
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Those random wires that are sticking out at odd places. They're kind of pointless.
It's a path that has no destination... I would make another storage/information/control/whatever room beyond it.
But that's just me.
~Win |
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gonna add a bit to the wires |
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Greak5245Join Date: 2013-06-15
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Make the text on the signs more natural.
Add somthing to the wall.
Maybe add one or more roms. |
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Greak5245Join Date: 2013-06-15
Post Count: 235 |
And maybe make the lights wires 90* to the wall, then follow the wall a bit before it goes trough a hole. (I said maybe) |
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