Can anyone look into this kingdom?

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#149891404Sunday, November 16, 2014 7:29 PM GMT

I've been making this for my game's next update and I want some opinions about it. Check it and thank you! http://www.roblox.com/Test-2-place?id=165814511

ImFarley

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#149894603Sunday, November 16, 2014 8:10 PM GMT

Too many sparkles; The water looks stupid. Maybe change it to terrain water blocks? If you lower the ambience, the lighting would probably look pretty cool; Needs more detail. At parts, it's just a few blocks; Give the tower an interior; A lot of your designs repeat too much, such as the circular items on the walls at spawn. Might want to change them up.

Compounds

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#149895219Sunday, November 16, 2014 8:18 PM GMT

not much of a kingdom, more like a crossroad and a big castle you cant go inside and some lights. Maybe add some stalls or something small details like that

punkymonkies

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#149895976Sunday, November 16, 2014 8:28 PM GMT

-3-... There are rooms, I just haven't put them up yet. This isn't just some random building... This is suppose to be a fantasy kingdom for an RPG i'm making but there's more to it, their just in separate servers. I will change the towers I guess... I don't use terrain building... Too much lag. I repeat stuff but I place them in different areas to make them unique or combine them with different stuff and make them even more unique. I still have a lot of work to do :p!!!

Compounds

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#149897287Sunday, November 16, 2014 8:44 PM GMT

I disagree with the comment on repetitiveness, I think if you're using the same shapes colours and things in a certain area it adds a big impact that you associate with a certain place, but yes good luck.