iNOSCOURGE(Luna diss)- Cannibus

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#152029621Saturday, December 20, 2014 9:19 AM GMT

Let me tell a story of a kid named iNOSCOURGE It ended in a gory seen of what may've been a mirage He met someone named Chaotic, Chaotic spit for him He spit flawless tamed rhymes that were brolic and too much to fathom The kid got Jealous and faced Chaotic in a challenge And so Chaotic was overzealous and spit rhymes by the gallons Hoping that this Stallion could keep up with flow Coping with a level that he'd never thought he'd show And so it was iNOSCOURGEs turn and he began to get nervous He tried matching Chaotics churning words but it was worthless He began crashing and burning slurs that made him wordless On purpose, Chaotic took a match and burned him down without a purpose The nurses, took him to the furthest ER that they could search for So I began searchin, sure enough he was headed to the third floor Pulled the curtain, Saw him and then beheaded him merciless Feeling remorseless, left him final words 'cause im a verbalist Doctor walked in and looked frightened at the thing that he ignited The air was silent, the mood ripened and I sighted An innocent woman that just sat whining and crying In a quick moment, I grabbed her neck and squeezed as if applying, Pressure to your [d], but ten times harder for the pleasure I measured, how much blood poured out from her sweater After I stabbed her, feeling no remorse or compassion She didn't take action so I felt no satisfaction I also killed the doctor so that he wouldn't blow my cover But when I looked at the news report of the whole murder I learned that I ended up killing the little boys mother Haha..

DigitsGod

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#152029631Saturday, December 20, 2014 9:20 AM GMT

Told you

lunafanplace

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#152029949Saturday, December 20, 2014 9:40 AM GMT

The original song is actually Slick Rick - Children's Story not Eminem - Canni[B]... Make something original when you diss me.

llPreston9911ll

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#152032025Saturday, December 20, 2014 11:52 AM GMT

^true at above but "That's not a E that's a A this motherfckker wants to gimme a massage hes gehhh"

Zokulzoh

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#152033429Saturday, December 20, 2014 1:00 PM GMT

canibus is already a rapper though right? he pulled out the notebook while battling someone

DigitsGod

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#152040342Saturday, December 20, 2014 3:54 PM GMT

Just because Eminem made a song based around a story of murdering someone doesn't mean it's not original. If that was true, then there would only be a small handful of original work. Thats like saying Tupac isn't original because he didn't make the first rap song based on dissing someone, or saying Eminem isn't original because he didn't make the first horror song. Don't make an excuse as to why my lyrics are good. If you're going to make one, atleast make a good one.

DigitsGod

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#152040398Saturday, December 20, 2014 3:55 PM GMT

Cannibus is a rapper but it's also a word. Just because a rapper takes the name doesn't mean he owns the word lol

DigitsGod

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#152040509Saturday, December 20, 2014 3:57 PM GMT

Btw I never listened to that song. Shows that the theme can be common. And the little boy isn't really a child unless you consider yourself to be a child. Feel stupid about ur life

lunafanplace

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#152043727Saturday, December 20, 2014 5:00 PM GMT

"Cannibus is a rapper but it's also a word. Just because a rapper takes the name doesn't mean he owns the word lol" It's actually not a word. It's three. 'Cann-I-Bus(t)' "Just because Eminem made a song based around a story of murdering someone doesn't mean it's not original. If that was true, then there would only be a small handful of original work. Thats like saying Tupac isn't original because he didn't make the first rap song based on dissing someone, or saying Eminem isn't original because he didn't make the first horror song. Don't make an excuse as to why my lyrics are good. If you're going to make one, atleast make a good one." Not my point at all. "Btw I never listened to that song." Listen to that whole album then, otherwise you aren't 'head.

Indiella

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#152046249Saturday, December 20, 2014 5:53 PM GMT

I'm glad somebody dissed him. 7.5/10.

Sonicjr723

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#152047455Saturday, December 20, 2014 6:15 PM GMT

"canibus is already a rapper though right? he pulled out the notebook while battling someone" But who really would have smoked the Dizaster that showed up that day? Bis' first round was flames.

147_StainBaby

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#152048863Saturday, December 20, 2014 6:40 PM GMT

10/10

DigitsGod

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#152089122Sunday, December 21, 2014 5:21 AM GMT

"It's actually not a word. It's three. 'Cann-I-Bus(t)'" The song could've been based on Cannibus. Some people call their songs people who they respect. "Not my point at all." Yes it is. "Listen to that whole album then, otherwise you aren't 'head." So since I didn't listen to that album im not "'head"

lunafanplace

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#152090641Sunday, December 21, 2014 5:54 AM GMT

"The song could've been based on Cannibus. Some people call their songs people who they respect." You'd have to be pretty autistic to believe Eminem did that song out of the love in his heart. "Yes it is." Sure it is, bud. Want to read my mind more? "So since I didn't listen to that album im not "'head" " No, you aren't a 'head if you haven't listened to Slick Rick's first album (Along with his other ones.) .

DigitsGod

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#152140200Monday, December 22, 2014 12:47 AM GMT

"You'd have to be pretty autistic to believe Eminem did that song out of the love in his heart." Yeah but im not Eminem now am I "/No, you aren't a 'head if you haven't listened to Slick Rick's first album (Along with his other ones.)" Yes because slick rick is the only good rapper

lunafanplace

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#152143668Monday, December 22, 2014 1:36 AM GMT

"Yeah but im not Eminem now am I" 3muchAutism5me!It's 5Stronk! "Yes because slick rick is the only good rapper" No, not what i said at all. He's a legend of Hip-Hop though, he's considered the god of storytelling within rap. If you seriously got "Yes because slick rick is the only good rapper" out of what i said, you really need to get a better education, because you obviously don't have a good one in this current moment in time, and also somehow couldn't comprehend a really simple sentence.