[NEW SINGLE] KingJoe - Achieve ft xXJordanxJordanXx

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#155515850Saturday, February 07, 2015 9:36 PM GMT

cover: http://www.roblox.com/SINGLE-KingJoe-Achieve-ft-xXjordanxJordanXx-item?id=213051970 Beat: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6mAlsiAiREg 0.09 [Chorus] (Kingjoe) I hope to achieve something when I’m done, Don’t wanna be the guy without a great run, I got rhymes in my head But struggling to show it Aint gonna be the first rapper to blow it, 0.19 [Verse 1] (Kingjoe) I’ll admit I’ve been a slave to this music Somehow ill end up in the grave coz this music, Always had the talent But afraid to use it Now im gonna abuse it Haters aint gon do sh[]t, Ive done 2 albums none of them did well “Aim to entertain” does it ring bell? I don’t rely on gangs Rappers should rely on fans Don’t use a gun Come on fight with your hands [Chorus] 0.39 (Kingjoe) I hope to achieve something when I’m done, Don’t wanna be the guy without a great run, I got rhymes in my head But struggling to show it Aint gonna be the first rapper to blow it, [Verse 2] 0.49 (xXJordanxJordanXx) so many rappers sayin they the official dis and dat when they see this song they be like I should have been on that, their more dumb then playing baseball without a bat, funny how they call themselves the king of rap, Walkin past fake hittas they look so brainless, i just think theyre fameless, you know we're all the same not everyone is the biggest rapper in the game. like, if your real, u dont do it for the fame. reppin chiraq bl00ds homie we got racks. This hitta lookin like young chop, widdout the snacks. No discussion, mess with me and there will be a repercussion, You can’t stop my progression Or else I’ll give you a lesson, [kingjoe] agitated depression, rhymes releasing my true expression, Me being successful makes haters turn hateful, [jordan] cmon guys just show me who you really are. ima end it like this, thats how you become a star. [chorus] (kingjoe) 1.28 I hope to achieve something when I’m done, Don’t wanna be the guy without a great run, I got rhymes in my head But struggling to show it Aint gonna be the first rapper to blow it, x2 [verse 3] (Kingjoe) 1.57 I desire to inspire millions and trillions, Starting from England I'll end up translating for Brazilians, Back and forth rappers dissing each other You can't say your better coz we came from our mother, I have the capability to see through you like a transparent photo Speak the truth is the king's motto, "I like to paint a picture for [N]s that can't see it" rappers say they are the best but till they beat me No one will believe it, One guy said my rhymes are wack I wrote a hit song saying the king is back Now I'm searching around, where he at? I was gonna end his career with a f0king bat, Since the new era Rappers are becoming more clever Great songs lasting for weeks and weeks Sick beats, less talking bout being from the streets For any hater who wants ro rap to be gone Stop hating coz you'll be waiting for long. [chorus] I hope to achieve something when I’m done, Don’t wanna be the guy without a great run, I got rhymes in my head But struggling to show it Aint gonna be the first rapper to blow it, x3 [song done. 03.05]

tiedude12

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#155516662Saturday, February 07, 2015 9:47 PM GMT

YAS.. 10/10

kingjonas42

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#155517497Saturday, February 07, 2015 9:58 PM GMT

thanks

drake17dude

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#155518637Saturday, February 07, 2015 10:13 PM GMT

8/10

kingjonas42

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#155522475Saturday, February 07, 2015 11:03 PM GMT

thanks! anymore rates??

OsirinKing

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#155523847Saturday, February 07, 2015 11:21 PM GMT

9/10. Great job with the mixture of verses , you putting 2 or so lines in Jordans verse was genius!

kingjonas42

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#155574409Sunday, February 08, 2015 5:12 PM GMT

thanks

DashaDD

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#155576333Sunday, February 08, 2015 5:39 PM GMT

7/10

kingjonas42

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#155581300Sunday, February 08, 2015 6:46 PM GMT

thanks

neepbeepbop123

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#155588665Sunday, February 08, 2015 8:29 PM GMT

I can picture it on this beat: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y2_g3LPQe1A

kingjonas42

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#155592250Sunday, February 08, 2015 9:14 PM GMT

yea just heard the beat, I might remix this song! btw can you get the single cover? link at the top of song

Mroccky1

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#155594831Sunday, February 08, 2015 9:48 PM GMT

9.5/10 bro. That's inspiring, like you're telling a story

kingjonas42

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#155596581Sunday, February 08, 2015 10:12 PM GMT

Thanks man! I've waited so long for people to like me and this is my last album but I'm glad finally my songs r doing great!

kingjonas42

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#155652898Monday, February 09, 2015 9:01 PM GMT

Last bump

TixxTheRapper

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#155793209Thursday, February 12, 2015 3:07 AM GMT

This is really good! Nice rap.

kingjonas42

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#155816969Thursday, February 12, 2015 6:17 PM GMT

Tixx

kingjonas42

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#155816987Thursday, February 12, 2015 6:18 PM GMT

*thanks Tixx

xabi

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#155817227Thursday, February 12, 2015 6:24 PM GMT

I'm not big on the Ro-Rap scene rn but I've looked into it and this is probably one of the best I've seen. A lot of the Ro-Rap scene is rather disappointing but this is actually pretty sick.