The Titanic - Roblox Forum Archive

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#158468994Monday, March 23, 2015 1:19 AM GMT

In April 1912, you get ready for a voyage across the atlantic ocean to New York. They say the ship is unsinkable, but is it? Fill RP info here: ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬ஜ۩۞۩ஜ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬ |Born: Fill| |Age: Fill| |Birthplace: Fill| |Religion: Fill| |Children: Fill| ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬ஜ۩۞۩ஜ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬ My RP info: ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬ஜ۩۞۩ஜ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬ |Born: 4th September, 1871| |Age: 43| |Birthplace: Belfast, United Kingdom| |Religion: Christian| |Children: N/A| ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬ஜ۩۞۩ஜ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬ [RP] John Stirling, a 1st class passenger, was the 20th person to board the Titanic. He disliked poor people. He especially liked 1st class passengers and he owns a luxury suite. On the first night, he would have dinner and make friends with 1st class passengers. After that, he would go to the top deck for a while.

rockmax2112alt

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#158469477Monday, March 23, 2015 1:25 AM GMT

Rocks reviews, yeyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy no Plot: 1/10, nothing. Expects rper/reader to know about the Titanic. No explanation of the ship itself. Grammar: 10/10, excellent for a newbie. CS: 5/10, bare essentials. Rules: 0/10, NOTHING. Other: "Disliked poor people/" "Religion: Christianity" Aren't you supposed to do the opposite? Totals: 16/40, clearly needs expansion.

TaiWolf1234

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#158470116Monday, March 23, 2015 1:33 AM GMT

@Rock- ""Disliked poor people/" "Religion: Christianity" Aren't you supposed to do the opposite?" Well, I imagine this is according to historical context. I could be wrong - I wouldn't know - but I'm assuming that Christians held a different attitude at the time. Just look at the division of classes aboard the Titanic.

rockmax2112alt

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#158470173Monday, March 23, 2015 1:33 AM GMT

Hm. Makes sense. Thanks for pointing that out, my mistake.

rockmax2112alt

Join Date: 2012-09-22
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#158470227Monday, March 23, 2015 1:34 AM GMT

Oh yes, of course OP, don't let my review get in the way of your RP. Rather, take it as advice.