IndiellaJoin Date: 2011-07-15
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Pre-Order my next album, Lights Out, which will be released April 15th!
http://www.roblox.com/Lights-Out-ALBUM-item?id=227737530
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BEAT: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4tJZ0au_vG8
The hook is just the instrumental since it kinda sounds like the beat is saying "Role models".
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[Hook] 0:13 - 0:38
R-o-o-ole models,
R-o-o-ole models,
R-o-o-ole models,
R-o-o-ole models
[Verse 1 - Indiella] 0:39 - 1:44
These [n]s so influenced, anybody can shake 'em
These [n]s turned soft, looks like somebody Drake'd 'em
These [n]s make albums but nobody wants to take 'em,
These [n]s fake Muslims, J has 'em sayin' "Salam Aleikum"
They want to say no, but all these girls taught is yes
Guys all up on her p[uss]y, cameras under her dress
Grow up givin' to men, but all she want is respect
How she gon' get it if she's told she'll be always oppressed?
These [n]s wishin' to see girls, I'm wishin' to see my grandma
Role models now-a-days got little kids twerkin' on camera,
Got girls paintin' they faces, cause it's all about the glamour
Lookin' like you belong in an art museum, where's Cleopatra?
Everybody sees a problem, but they sway from the subject
They take the trials to court, but all they say is "Object"
[B]es tried hoppin' on that cruise, but became shipwrecked
These [n]s so fake they think they're real - Placebo Effect
Little girls lookin' up to they favorite pop stars,
Next thing you know, that singer being locked up behind bars
Next thing you know, they breakin' into stores with crowbars
Next thing you know, they be pullin' a Tam and Dzhokhar
[Hook] 1:45 - 2:10
R-o-o-ole models,
R-o-o-ole models,
R-o-o-ole models,
R-o-o-ole models
[Verse 2 - JubrilMD] 2:11 - 3:16
It's sad to say we live in an era when
Boys here thinking it's dope to stick your arm with [H]eroin
Girls getting exposed, is this how it feels to be Marilyn?
These [n]s say they're inspired by 50 cent
Then please explain to me why you act like Thugnificent
These [n]s think dissing everyone will make you significant
Ridiculing others while you living by arrogance
They hate us cause they ain't us, and they don't know what they're against
Try to knock my walls down but there's still a fence
These [N]s so simple minded
Said I lost my flow, man I'm tryna find it
I was watching MTV, all those rappers rocking bling
Claiming themselves Role Models - aint no such thing
It's became disapointing, lil boys trying to be thugs
They know less about math, and more about drugs
Calling girls a thot, not giving a thought about her
Then shaming her in public, saying you're better off without her
Least to say I'm not impressed
Never rest, I'm on a quest, to find only the best
Was gone for a minute but I'm back now
Stop harassing others for their background
Speak up, don't be silenced
Fight with your words, no resulting to violence
[Bridge - Indiella & (JubrilMD)] x3 3:17 - 3:55
Got these little kids poppin' lids off pill bottles
(Now they thinkin' they can spit but all they do is swallow)
Tell them [b]es to get reloaded 'cause their chamber hollow
(Quit actin' like you from the streets, [F] you and your role model)
[Hook] 3:56 - 4:19
R-o-o-ole models,
R-o-o-ole models,
R-o-o-ole models,
R-o-o-ole models |
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" Thugnificent"
Is that even a word? |
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WobullJoin Date: 2014-04-07
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>These [n]s fake Muslims, J has 'em sayin' "Salam Aleikum"
ALLAHU AKBAR |
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Kids watch out , Wobull's going religious again. |
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Wobull, can I jihad with you? |
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"R-o-o-ole models" When cheerleaders can't spell their words. |
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@Luna , you just made my day. |
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Also, I was told by Jubril to put my same opinion that I put in the skype group you're both in in the comments of this thread so to quote myself non egotistically:
"crap
[5:06:06 PM] KreaminahoKeemopatientScourge: no offense
[5:06:26 PM] KreaminahoKeemopatientScourge: Indiella been slacking recently.
[5:06:31 PM] KreaminahoKeemopatientScourge: She on that Kendrick Lamar.
[5:06:33 PM] KreaminahoKeemopatientScourge: start out good
[5:06:36 PM] KreaminahoKeemopatientScourge: and then fade to crap"
;D |
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TruH4WK13Join Date: 2013-12-21
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Worse then burnt fried chicken
Waiting for her response like http://i.4cdn.org/b/1427237459408.gif |
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"@Luna , you just made my day."
That's what I'm here for bro.
Glad I made your day.
*fistbump* |
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@Tru , fried chicken is good no matter. |
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IndiellaJoin Date: 2011-07-15
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""R-o-o-ole models" When cheerleaders can't spell their words."
It's not spelling, it's stressing out the vowel.
"[5:06:06 PM] KreaminahoKeemopatientScourge: no offense
[5:06:26 PM] KreaminahoKeemopatientScourge: Indiella been slacking recently.
[5:06:31 PM] KreaminahoKeemopatientScourge: She on that Kendrick Lamar.
[5:06:33 PM] KreaminahoKeemopatientScourge: start out good
[5:06:36 PM] KreaminahoKeemopatientScourge: and then fade to crap"
I honestly don't really care, I personally think every song on this album so far was good except for Old School considering they all got good ratings. |
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TruH4WK13Join Date: 2013-12-21
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Your used to it burnt #MommaCantCook
http://i.4cdn.org/b/1427237459408.gif |
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"It's not spelling, it's stressing out the vowel."
You could of easily added a actual musical note that would of continued it.
It looks like you're spelling, yeah obviously you're not, I was just making the joke because it presented itself.
"I honestly don't really care, I personally think every song on this album so far was good except for Old School considering they all got good ratings."
That's cool - I was just stating my opinion.
Don't tell a critic you don't care about their opinion though - that's not something you do.
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TruH4WK13Join Date: 2013-12-21
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@luna
PREACH |
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JubrilMDJoin Date: 2011-03-30
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Would anyone like to actually share some collective criticism? |
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@Jubril , first answer what " Thugnificent" means. |
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SxperiorJoin Date: 2012-09-14
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Thugnificent is a rapper off boondocks. |
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JubrilMDJoin Date: 2011-03-30
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Thugnificent is a fictional character from the tv show, "The Boondocks"...He is a rapper, and basically all he does is rap about money, guns, and the rear ends of girls |
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@Jubril , K. I only watched Boondocks once and that was the episode when the one with french braids opened a candy stand to get money.
8.9/10 |
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TruH4WK13Join Date: 2013-12-21
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"Rear ends of girls"
http://i.4cdn.org/b/1427237459408.gifAss? |
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This is bad honestly ,
The flow is all over the place , Too much ngga is used , Metaphors are weak , Vocabulary is looking tryhard-ish |
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IndiellaJoin Date: 2011-07-15
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Thanks Preston, I'll take your advice into consideration. :) |
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@Indiella
Here's some advice
Rap like you used to,
your new stuff has a very simple flow,
decent vocabulary
and very corny lyrics - And no, I don't say that cuz their "real" I say that cuz they carry more corn than a cornfield.
And no, don't take offense to this, this is legitimate criticism. |
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