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DreamVille
#158750348Friday, March 27, 2015 10:20 PM GMT

Respect, everyone starts out as a prospect/ My concepts complex/ Prophets from the projects/ Selling fake jesus pieces for a profit/ Stacks sky rocket/ Win a contest, saw the trophy in my hands like im Optic/ Remember the good times back then like a locket/ I wont stop until the coffin closes/ Being written down like im Moses/ When i was hopeless, they told me i was chosen/ I turned golden like DeRozan/ The crowd froze and i saw the omen/ Suddenly came the explosion/ And my name was turned into a slogan The ankle was locked, made for motion/ The judges lines were spoken/ Sentence worse than a broken Trojan/ My devotion was to the pen and the paper/ But i had to take the blade out the razor/ [K]ing old school like a pager/ Friends turned into traitors/ Looked up and turned into a savior/ Imposters copying me so i turned creator/ Fought my whole life, crusader/ Coming out a tank like vapor/ Wiz got the taylors/ Connor got the Bape/ Kim got the tape/ Im tired but wide awake Press the start button now im gonna end the game/
UniversalDanger
#158762232Saturday, March 28, 2015 12:51 AM GMT

9/10 I like your rhyme scheme in this.
Sonicjr723
#158762677Saturday, March 28, 2015 12:57 AM GMT

Very weak bars. At most you should pat yourself on the back for having some multis.
OsirinKing
#164331717Friday, June 12, 2015 6:46 AM GMT

This was great! Signed undergroubd I want full work from you , expecting to see a full song with a hook and everything!
lunafanplace
#164331864Friday, June 12, 2015 6:50 AM GMT

'Have to agree with Sonic. lol
XxKingOfWhackXx
#164336347Friday, June 12, 2015 9:33 AM GMT

2/10 For almost stealing my bars formation. 7.4/10 In the others.
TheUnknownZodiac
#164339039Friday, June 12, 2015 11:24 AM GMT

Agreeing with Sonic. also. "2/10 For almost stealing my bars formation. 7.4/10 In the others." Lmao, he dosen't have your "bars formation" he just puts "/" to mark where the bar ends like you, stop trying to act smart when a week ago you begged me to teach you what punchlines are.
XxKingOfWhackXx
#164339195Friday, June 12, 2015 11:30 AM GMT

Nosy [A] Nigguhs this days.
XxKingOfWhackXx
#164339204Friday, June 12, 2015 11:31 AM GMT

These*
TheUnknownZodiac
#164339265Friday, June 12, 2015 11:33 AM GMT

Not really nosy, just stating out the obivous
MrGrimmer
#164341914Friday, June 12, 2015 1:11 PM GMT

you misspelled easy
XxKingOfWhackXx
#164341969Friday, June 12, 2015 1:13 PM GMT

I use it in a dope way,dumbass.
Earlko
#164360963Friday, June 12, 2015 7:22 PM GMT

How is your use of "/" dope, but his is bad? People been splitting bars with that forever, quit tripping.

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