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sassygirl770
#159304364Friday, April 03, 2015 10:32 PM GMT

Story: You are living your normal life. Life was very hard but it isn't that bad. It could be worse... Sadly. One day a group of trade ships arrived. Soon after... There were random deaths. We had no idea what was going on. We tried to ignore it but It became as clear as day, the Plague has arrived. Your home in London was soon quarantined up to keep the disease out... Too bad that won't work... Too bad that you are are doomed to die Rules: 1: Be kind to each other 2: The setting is Late Middle Ages London 3: There is no cure to the Plague 4: Be realistic 5: Obey the laws of physics 6: I suggest you to have a Christian character because that was the realigon back then 7: Don't make too many characters 8: This is not a Fantasy RP 9: Don't think about pink elephants 10: Have fun I guess Name: Age: Gender: Occupation (It must be a Middle Ages job): Personality: Appearance: Attire: Bio (Be brief if you like):
sk8erkiller900
#159304643Friday, April 03, 2015 10:36 PM GMT

Well, this has a weak, underdeveloped plot.
sassygirl770
#159305193Friday, April 03, 2015 10:42 PM GMT

(My only excuse is that I was trying to make it kind of shady and realistic. In real life they didn't have an idea what was going on.)
sk8erkiller900
#159305645Friday, April 03, 2015 10:48 PM GMT

Oh, well you still could have done a bit more with it.
sassygirl770
#159305971Friday, April 03, 2015 10:52 PM GMT

Sorry,
sk8erkiller900
#159306232Friday, April 03, 2015 10:55 PM GMT

Well, you should just work on a new one for a couple of days, then make it a repost.
birm123
#159312057Saturday, April 04, 2015 12:07 AM GMT

AHHH IT BURNS
sk8erkiller900
#159312270Saturday, April 04, 2015 12:10 AM GMT

You must be sick or tired
birm123
#159312334Saturday, April 04, 2015 12:11 AM GMT

YOU MUST BE METALLY ILL
sk8erkiller900
#159312598Saturday, April 04, 2015 12:13 AM GMT

Original, how DID you come up with that
birm123
#159313009Saturday, April 04, 2015 12:17 AM GMT

THE SAME WAY YOU CAME UP WITH THAT COME BACK
sk8erkiller900
#159313286Saturday, April 04, 2015 12:20 AM GMT

That was a use of sarcasm to say that that comment was REALLY the best you could come up with
birm123
#159313480Saturday, April 04, 2015 12:22 AM GMT

NO, REALLY? I'VE BEEN LIVING FOR TWELVE YEARS NOW, CLOSING IN ON THIRTEEN. I CAN DETECT SARCASM, EVEN OVER THE INTERNET. PERHAPS YOU SHOULD GO SEE A MENTAL THER A PIST, BECAUSE THAT POST WAS A WASTE OF MY TIME AND YOURS.
sk8erkiller900
#159314008Saturday, April 04, 2015 12:27 AM GMT

So can most just making sure you could
birm123
#159314323Saturday, April 04, 2015 12:30 AM GMT

DEAR GOD
sk8erkiller900
#159314568Saturday, April 04, 2015 12:33 AM GMT

And my mind is in above average state considering both my age and where I live
sassygirl770
#159334910Saturday, April 04, 2015 4:41 AM GMT

Enough with the caps, Birm.
IsabellaMcKenzie
#159336674Saturday, April 04, 2015 5:06 AM GMT

This post has given me the black death AND cancer. OH DEAR GOD
IsabellaMcKenzie
#159336797Saturday, April 04, 2015 5:07 AM GMT

OH MY GOD I'M DYING.
IsabellaMcKenzie
#159336894Saturday, April 04, 2015 5:09 AM GMT

KILL ME PLEASE
BrandonS677
#159341314Saturday, April 04, 2015 6:23 AM GMT

I can make a better one like this Life was simple in the middle ages. But a man that showed sickness appeared, he had rashes that looked much like rose. He coughed and asked for help. An aura of death was cast upon the city that day. He touched someones arm who had a cut after the man died the guy who was touched. Started showing signs of the sickness. It started tearing the kingdom apart a lot of people dying per day. The smell of rotting corpses and ashes fill the air. You are lucky that you don't have it...YET. You go to church looking for answers. The priest comes out and shouts "THE DEVIL IS UPON US!". This sends a cold feeling down your spine. Are you next? Why is this happening? A once great kingdom is on its knees only few remain that are not sick. This hell of a kingdom all because of a disease I came up with it as I went
MrStilts
#159341694Saturday, April 04, 2015 6:31 AM GMT

Yeah, no. The writing there is actually worser than the OP's.
IsabellaMcKenzie
#159341789Saturday, April 04, 2015 6:33 AM GMT

Wow. It looks like someone wants to get into an argument :D
MrStilts
#159341956Saturday, April 04, 2015 6:37 AM GMT

thats right, boi! ima lookin fer a scufl! fi8 meh, wouldja!
IsabellaMcKenzie
#159342070Saturday, April 04, 2015 6:39 AM GMT

no thankyou. also Im not a boi am a leide

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