ErenedJoin Date: 2014-08-21 Post Count: 1267 |
Verse:
Lyrically killing these verses
Like I'm exponentially destroying
The curses from others, that currently engulf me
In this rhyme sensational massacre
Like St. Bartholomew's day, my goal is to annihilate the inferior
Both the exterior and interior, deface their rep, make the world cheerier
I'm Orange crushing these verses my rhymes are full of citrus
Making all of my enemies seem quite witless, like they don't have a mind
Step aside, give me the torch, it's my time, jailbreaking these rhymes like it's crime
People think I'm sick, but in reality I am cured, while these other people sit and whine
About their lives, refusing to see how blessed they are, dissing random people
Trying to ruin their lives, I'm trying to change that, through thick and thin all people are actually fine
In spirit, they can never fail, haters try to bring me down but no I never ail
Using the excuse of politics like they are the new Dan Quayle
My rhymes are steel, bars are like rails
Say that I'm weak, but in reality I'm as tough as the strongest nails
I'm done
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Rates?
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ErenedJoin Date: 2014-08-21 Post Count: 1267 |
I was bored. Anyone any feedback? |
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TruH4WK13Join Date: 2013-12-21 Post Count: 1635 |
Dam son where'd you find this
8/10 |
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ErenedJoin Date: 2014-08-21 Post Count: 1267 |
I made it up myself lol thanks |
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TruH4WK13Join Date: 2013-12-21 Post Count: 1635 |
😊 |
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ErenedJoin Date: 2014-08-21 Post Count: 1267 |
^ ??? |
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ErenedJoin Date: 2014-08-21 Post Count: 1267 |
I'll rename this song "Interlude" because it's my first song |
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5/10.
Big words don't make a song better imo
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'Big words don't make a song better imo'
In my opinion it does? He has a bigger vocabulary. |
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Orange crush you have Kik? |
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ErenedJoin Date: 2014-08-21 Post Count: 1267 |
No.. Why? |
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ErenedJoin Date: 2014-08-21 Post Count: 1267 |
Bump. |
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ErenedJoin Date: 2014-08-21 Post Count: 1267 |
I'm probably gonna write another.
@kidvigi
I understand. |
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ErenedJoin Date: 2014-08-21 Post Count: 1267 |
Thanks ^ |
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ErenedJoin Date: 2014-08-21 Post Count: 1267 |
Y? |
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ChichlandJoin Date: 2011-02-21 Post Count: 2442 |
Bump |
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ChichlandJoin Date: 2011-02-21 Post Count: 2442 |
Much obliged |
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ErenedJoin Date: 2014-08-21 Post Count: 1267 |
Bump my first song ;( |
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DigitsGodJoin Date: 2011-04-29 Post Count: 9540 |
"i'm as tough as the strongest nails"
the strongest nails still break with human force. |
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ErenedJoin Date: 2014-08-21 Post Count: 1267 |
Thanks, amiga.
I realize that. |
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DigitsGodJoin Date: 2011-04-29 Post Count: 9540 |
Amiga is what you'd call girls in spanish. Amigo is what you'd call guys in spanish. |
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ErenedJoin Date: 2014-08-21 Post Count: 1267 |
Amiga is a female friend in Spanish.
I believe I've accurately described you.
I know my Spanish. |
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