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Erened
#160416551Saturday, April 18, 2015 5:37 PM GMT

Verse: Lyrically killing these verses Like I'm exponentially destroying The curses from others, that currently engulf me In this rhyme sensational massacre Like St. Bartholomew's day, my goal is to annihilate the inferior Both the exterior and interior, deface their rep, make the world cheerier I'm Orange crushing these verses my rhymes are full of citrus Making all of my enemies seem quite witless, like they don't have a mind Step aside, give me the torch, it's my time, jailbreaking these rhymes like it's crime People think I'm sick, but in reality I am cured, while these other people sit and whine About their lives, refusing to see how blessed they are, dissing random people Trying to ruin their lives, I'm trying to change that, through thick and thin all people are actually fine In spirit, they can never fail, haters try to bring me down but no I never ail Using the excuse of politics like they are the new Dan Quayle My rhymes are steel, bars are like rails Say that I'm weak, but in reality I'm as tough as the strongest nails I'm done ------------------- Rates?
Erened
#160416952Saturday, April 18, 2015 5:42 PM GMT

I was bored. Anyone any feedback?
TruH4WK13
#160417966Saturday, April 18, 2015 5:57 PM GMT

Dam son where'd you find this 8/10
Erened
#160417989Saturday, April 18, 2015 5:57 PM GMT

I made it up myself lol thanks
TruH4WK13
#160418103Saturday, April 18, 2015 5:59 PM GMT

😊
Erened
#160418280Saturday, April 18, 2015 6:01 PM GMT

^ ???
Erened
#160418337Saturday, April 18, 2015 6:02 PM GMT

I'll rename this song "Interlude" because it's my first song
ChaseIsNotDead
#160419235Saturday, April 18, 2015 6:14 PM GMT

5/10. Big words don't make a song better imo
DraggedIntoSunlight
#160422065Saturday, April 18, 2015 6:53 PM GMT

'Big words don't make a song better imo' In my opinion it does? He has a bigger vocabulary.
KinqNovaXL
#160426386Saturday, April 18, 2015 7:48 PM GMT

Orange crush you have Kik?
Erened
#160429808Saturday, April 18, 2015 8:33 PM GMT

No.. Why?
Erened
#160430855Saturday, April 18, 2015 8:46 PM GMT

Bump.
Erened
#160431710Saturday, April 18, 2015 8:57 PM GMT

I'm probably gonna write another. @kidvigi I understand.
OsirinKing
#160431755Saturday, April 18, 2015 8:57 PM GMT

8/10
Erened
#160431824Saturday, April 18, 2015 8:58 PM GMT

Thanks ^
DXZ0MBI3117
#160432089Saturday, April 18, 2015 9:01 PM GMT

OC party me
Erened
#160440807Saturday, April 18, 2015 11:00 PM GMT

Y?
Chichland
#160442197Saturday, April 18, 2015 11:21 PM GMT

Bump
UniversalDanger
#160442699Saturday, April 18, 2015 11:29 PM GMT

8/10
Chichland
#160442817Saturday, April 18, 2015 11:30 PM GMT

Much obliged
Erened
#162530457Wednesday, May 20, 2015 9:53 PM GMT

Bump my first song ;(
DigitsGod
#162532808Wednesday, May 20, 2015 10:30 PM GMT

"i'm as tough as the strongest nails" the strongest nails still break with human force.
Erened
#162533292Wednesday, May 20, 2015 10:39 PM GMT

Thanks, amiga. I realize that.
DigitsGod
#162533465Wednesday, May 20, 2015 10:41 PM GMT

Amiga is what you'd call girls in spanish. Amigo is what you'd call guys in spanish.
Erened
#162533554Wednesday, May 20, 2015 10:43 PM GMT

Amiga is a female friend in Spanish. I believe I've accurately described you. I know my Spanish.

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