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UniversalDanger
#160538873Monday, April 20, 2015 12:50 AM GMT

I'm not mentally correct My intellect is often checked Every and every set Is to push me up a step Until I make it to the next Overlapping double text and I'm letting out the rest until I'm coming up the best I'm not the one that you would guess but I'll make it in this breath To prove myself If God can't even guess then show me who can tell Cause I'm losing time at the instant the clocks strike twelve I'll inform you when it's raining hell, when the sun itself begins to melt Pure energy falling from the sky The plant life dies and you can't believe your eyes Disasters and that's why, life is filled with stated lies It just isn't worth these tries I don't understand this game they play Why do they play where all this lays but nothing stays And today is the day that they become the thane and start abundant reigns and just ain't the same But it can't go on forever It just can't be put together It's further under the weather than zero without a sweater But I'm telling you however that if you just pull that lever you can live without the pressure Living life again and again your it's, rightful possessor With all the pleasure that is welcome to your life in adventure I should view you as an enemy with all this pent up jealousy because your living merrily and never play it warily I'm changing that with knives because of my lack of therapy Hoping that you die but never inside prosperity
UniversalDanger
#160539209Monday, April 20, 2015 12:53 AM GMT

Every rep and every set*
UniversalDanger
#160539602Monday, April 20, 2015 12:58 AM GMT

Tell me what you think about this. Rates, constructive criticism, or just overall thoughts.
CombatChampion123GM
#160540099Monday, April 20, 2015 1:04 AM GMT

Keep my name out cho mouth before I have dem guys run up in ya house
UniversalDanger
#160540348Monday, April 20, 2015 1:08 AM GMT

No idea why you're showing hostility but okay. I don't see your name in there in any bar or any line.
CombatChampion123GM
#160540518Monday, April 20, 2015 1:10 AM GMT

U sneak dissin
UniversalDanger
#160540709Monday, April 20, 2015 1:13 AM GMT

Where
kenzie12345555
#160541484Monday, April 20, 2015 1:22 AM GMT

7/10 Not your best bro.
UniversalDanger
#160541900Monday, April 20, 2015 1:28 AM GMT

Thank you. I'll try to tilt back on my next one tomorrow.
ExDa
#160542289Monday, April 20, 2015 1:32 AM GMT

I felt like it was still in your ballpark or a little bit better than you usually produce. 9.3/10, only because I believe this was intentionally made to be like a medium between fast and slow paced. That's why you should record though, just saying.
UniversalDanger
#160542582Monday, April 20, 2015 1:36 AM GMT

Thank you, and I'm already taking that into thought.

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