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Cybertro
#160615017Tuesday, April 21, 2015 3:11 AM GMT

[Hook] It’s been awhile since I, been here, but I, Wanna make sure, this is, sincere, Hiatus, yeah, yeah, Hiatus Haven’t written in what feels like a year, But you better buckle your seatbelts cause I’m changin’ gears, Throwing away an old image, in with the new, Focusing on my currency, drop an album or two, Two for two, how would that look to you? Homeboy from the west coast puttin’ a waste to his talents, Signed a few contracts now I’m in financial balance, Forget a home I got me a palace, but maybe I should think temples, Because why be a king if you feel like a God in your temple, thoughts clouding your mental, And I don’t try to be gentle, where is that gonna get you? Like all Gods, you need to strike fear because it’s essential, So I strive to the top, underrated for days, I’ve been studying english to change my ways, How to get a message across, how to be lyrically stable, Make sure I never have another have a failure like Untitled, Because I’m a blank canvas, and my future is untitled, yeah. [Hook] It’s been awhile since I, been here, but I, Wanna make sure, this is, sincere, Hiatus, yeah, yeah, Hiatus
ChaseIsNotDead
#160615116Tuesday, April 21, 2015 3:13 AM GMT

Some rhymes seem forced to me. Other than that is was good 6.5/10
Cybertro
#160615192Tuesday, April 21, 2015 3:15 AM GMT

@kid thanks m8
Cybertro
#160615458Tuesday, April 21, 2015 3:19 AM GMT

b1
LonelyTree
#160615501Tuesday, April 21, 2015 3:20 AM GMT

nice copied name
Cybertro
#160615618Tuesday, April 21, 2015 3:22 AM GMT

@lone nice same insult.
LonelyTree
#160615689Tuesday, April 21, 2015 3:23 AM GMT

nice filth rap
Cybertro
#160615859Tuesday, April 21, 2015 3:25 AM GMT

@lonely k.
LonelyTree
#160615926Tuesday, April 21, 2015 3:27 AM GMT

every1 will be like dza wtf name stealer thrs only 1 dza not fake wanna be
Cybertro
#160616042Tuesday, April 21, 2015 3:29 AM GMT

@lonely k
calirolls
#160616420Tuesday, April 21, 2015 3:37 AM GMT

dammit i thought this song meant ro rappers were going on hiatus permanently -1/17.57 ruined my dreams -i had hobbies until the RT nation attacked-
Cybertro
#160617619Tuesday, April 21, 2015 4:01 AM GMT

@cali illegitimate criticism, but thanks!
Cybertro
#160617855Tuesday, April 21, 2015 4:07 AM GMT

b1
ToledoTyger
#160730547Wednesday, April 22, 2015 11:56 PM GMT

Focused way to hard on trying to spit rhymes but you're claiming to be lyrically stable, tyr to add more of a vocab to your raps, don't be afriad to research words and add them to your verses 6.5/10
Cybertro
#160730725Wednesday, April 22, 2015 11:58 PM GMT

@toled thanks b2
kenzie12345555
#160734346Thursday, April 23, 2015 12:46 AM GMT

High vocabulary n isn't being lyrical lmaoooo
Cybertro
#160739323Thursday, April 23, 2015 1:51 AM GMT

@ken is that directed to toledo?
kenzie12345555
#160746093Thursday, April 23, 2015 3:31 AM GMT

Both of you, being lyrical is like multis, metaphors, word play, punchlines and flow. high vocab is cool and all but you dont need it... not everyone gotta be like AZ
Cybertro
#160748295Thursday, April 23, 2015 4:14 AM GMT

@kenzi I never said I wanted high vocab lololololololol.
kenzie12345555
#160748802Thursday, April 23, 2015 4:23 AM GMT

Jsing.
Erened
#160758547Thursday, April 23, 2015 12:25 PM GMT

I use vocabulary in my songs with rhyme
kenzie12345555
#160760515Thursday, April 23, 2015 1:34 PM GMT

^You don't have to... It makes you look stupid,tryhard (who would try hard ona kids site?), makes you have poor delivery if you ask me
BLUEDREAMDEATH
#165448671Wednesday, June 24, 2015 6:19 PM GMT

...6/10

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