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Hah,Orange Crush,More Like I Crushed Competition Kid
Your Average Like Everyone Eles,Don't Talk [S]
Saying You Flammed Tyga And All,Please,REAL Votes
Copying Off On Google,And Them Quotes
Thought You'd Diss Me,Trying To Dodge Every Move
But You Don't Care What I Say Or Prove
Game On,Lets See If You Can Compete With Me
Hunt You Down,Hang You Up On That Tree
Your [F]'ed Up,G[3]y,And Stupid,Wasting Time On Tyga
"Unwanted Beef" What You Mean?You Dissing My Homies
You Create That Fire,I Spit The Fire
Now What Kid?"Orange Crush"?
Nope,Your Crushed And You Went Down The Toilet,
And Get Flushed
You And Your 2.0 [S],[F] Off Kiddo
Oh And When You Comment On This,
This Is An Alt Pxddo
I Shipped Off Metrix,Now's You To Go
You're Average Like Everyone Eles,
But Nah,Your "THE BEST",But Your Slow
But You Made Gold,Platnium Or Diamond?NO
Ya,Bias Votes Cuz You Think Orange Won
He Didn't Won,But I Don't Do This For Fun
I Don't Care If I Get Haters,Go Ahead And Hate On Me
After You're Done,Your Gunna Cry Like A Little Creep
Nope,No Bias Votes,Its Either Who Have The Best Disses Between Us
But The Bias Votes Again.I Don't Trust
You're Confused About Who You Going To Face
But Your Angry Right Now,I Rest My Case
Reply This.Ik This Isn't The Best I Try
But I'll Keep Reply. |
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zepher32Join Date: 2008-04-27
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I like how your rhyming scheme is off
and how you don't put spaces after your punctuation,
it really allows for an interesting reading. |
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I'm gonna give honest and hard criticism on this. But, why get in this beef that isn't yours? If its because Tyga's your buddy, I can somewhat see that. Anyways...
"Hah,Orange Crush,More Like I Crushed Competition Kid
Your Average Like Everyone Eles,Don't Talk [S]"
You can't really either.
"Saying You Flammed Tyga And All,Please,REAL Votes
Copying Off On Google,And Them Quotes"
The REAL Votes said he won. Damn, EVERY voting poll and thread said Orange won. Also, I haven't seen any copied quotes.
"Thought You'd Diss Me,Trying To Dodge Every Move
But You Don't Care What I Say Or Prove"
You actually said you'd diss him, he said "Ok".
"Game On,Lets See If You Can Compete With Me
Hunt You Down,Hang You Up On That Tree"
That was a struggle bar.
"Your [F]'ed Up,G[3]y,And Stupid,Wasting Time On Tyga
"Unwanted Beef" What You Mean?You Dissing My Homies"
Well, your homie is freaking annoying. Everyone is dissing him.
"You Create That Fire,I Spit The Fire"
Now, this line actually confused me. You said he copies bar, and you just said he makes fire, but you spit that fire, meaning he made the good lyrics and you copied him. Unless, I mean, your admiring him as a source for another plot?
"Now What Kid?"Orange Crush"?"
No, not another plot.
"Nope,Your Crushed And You Went Down The Toilet,
And Get Flushed"
That was a struggle bar [2]
"You And Your 2.0 [S],[F] Off Kiddo"
Whats the problem if he wears 2.0? Are you really judging people's ROBLOX clothing? I mean, I can see Tyga doing that, but I thought you were smart!
(Now I'm just going after parts I had something to say about)
"I Shipped Off Metrix,Now's You To Go"
You always mention Metrix for some reason. Like, move on. I've beat alot of people, do I walk around saying "Ha, I won, you lost". Stop bragging.
"Ya,Bias Votes Cuz You Think Orange Won"
There were atleast 3 threads for voting, all of them said Orange won. I've made on, I think Chich made one, and that Ro-Rap News thingy made one, everyone agreed Chich won. Thats facts.
"Nope,No Bias Votes,Its Either Who Have The Best Disses Between Us"
In that case, you better be ready.
"But The Bias Votes Again.I Don't Trust"
Oh, because you and DZA voting for Tyga isn't bias? His 2 "homies"? Chich actually won.
Anyways, 2/10 for me. Could of been better, and alot of the stuff you typed here wasn't actually true, and it seems like you don't know what your talking about (not trying to sound cocky). |
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^ That's Why Stated "Reply This.Ik This Isn't The Best I Try
But I'll Keep Reply." |
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Relax it's just Dx's bias opinions |
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@CJ alright
@Young Yeah, but this isn't bias:
You cant rap |
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What you need to learn is how to shut your mouth and not talk a whole lot of sht. I'm being real with you right now. You wouldn't be in all this mess if you stopped talking. |
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I'm not gonna get to your level, but seems like King Hurricane was wrong. Your about to get bodied 4 times if you keep up with that tone. |
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Plus, I was just giving you advice on how to get your head out the dirt, and moving out of the beef. |
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Don't say sht about me I won't say sht about you |
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Alrighty then. I was just trying to help you. |
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CybertroJoin Date: 2011-07-02
Post Count: 1818 |
@DX
"Oh, because you and DZA voting for Tyga isn't bias? His 2 "homies"? Chich actually won."
>lol, stfu. i wasn't involved so why is my name leaving your mouth. |
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You were.
''PhD in Internet Retarhrdation |
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ZokulzohJoin Date: 2009-11-11
Post Count: 4843 |
"Relax it's just Dx's bias opinions"
I'm gonna diss tyga right now, you ready?
Your bars are rehearsed, and they're still crap, you should just walk away
because
you can't rap.
also the opinion was pretty legit and well thought out |
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stardashJoin Date: 2008-09-29
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I stopped reading when I saw your grammar. |
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Star Can't Rap,She Just A Fan. |
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ErenedJoin Date: 2014-08-21
Post Count: 1267 |
This was garbage. Terrible. Not sure if I should even reply to this trash. |
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ErenedJoin Date: 2014-08-21
Post Count: 1267 |
And what do you mean ride? You g3y, sir?
Also, your grammar was beyond terrible. |
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CybertroJoin Date: 2011-07-02
Post Count: 1818 |
Chich, he still beat you. |
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ErenedJoin Date: 2014-08-21
Post Count: 1267 |
Who? |
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