MovementxJoin Date: 2013-07-31
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Yeah, pass the mic before I jack it like gortex, bust like raw s x, rappers bust like vortex, the life of a dawn. We livin' like kings and ki**ing like pawns, Boy the second is on, yo we going to flow low from dusk till' dawn, the life of a dawn. Just had s x with a middle eastern girl bomb, that last line made no sense like these rappers careers, but I make dollars, cause I'm all about the fisco years. Yeah, you don't like me? I'll conjour up and summon all yours fears, you wanna fight me? I'll beat my own azz before you get here, you wanna write me, and tell me that my rhymes are bad? Man I don't give a f*k, I'll stab you in the stomache call dat a tummy tuck. You can ask my Ex, I bust quicker then two text. Yet I killer harder then category 5 terrets. In other words, I squeeze with ease, doubt my eyes and cross my tees, cause I'm a perfectionist, defectionist, just like everyone assessing this, however for this not to be taken literally, yet on a lighter note I stay on bills like Hillary, my flow convects, better send a little respect, best protect your neck before you play my tape, yet better yet. Inspect the debt. Sc**w the other rapper foreva, and eva, since the dawn of time. Sike, I'm not that much of a d*k when I rhyme. On another level like duplex, split sh** like suplex, sl**ghter MC's like' who's next? |
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EponymousJoin Date: 2013-08-06
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what a loser |
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I'm sorry, it's just not good. ALSO: Put each line on different lines. |
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MovementxJoin Date: 2013-07-31
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cries |
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MovementxJoin Date: 2013-07-31
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But I mean, it was a freestyle. I thought of it on the spot, consider that and tell me your thoughts. |
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ChichlandJoin Date: 2011-02-21
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I "freestyle" too but my raps aren't as bad as this |
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MovementxJoin Date: 2013-07-31
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"Aren't as bad as this" Yeah, cool. Let's see how well you can look up a song on youtube and copy it on the fourms, nice job bud. |
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circirakJoin Date: 2014-12-22
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ro rap is awful
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ChichlandJoin Date: 2011-02-21
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Hey look you dumbf()ck, I don't know when you stuck your whole head up your arse, but try to overcome your severe ADD and read this.
I don't copy my lyrics. I make them up myself. Ask anybody. If you search my lyrics, all you see is the thread on Roblox's link.
You just got here, haven't seen any of my threads, and are judging me because I told the truth about your "rap"
What a loser [x2]
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circirakJoin Date: 2014-12-22
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hell, i have ADHD and could be more original than this idiot |
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ChichlandJoin Date: 2011-02-21
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Ikr. |
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ChichlandJoin Date: 2011-02-21
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Wait was that directed to me? Lol. About the originality |
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circirakJoin Date: 2014-12-22
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@cheech
no it was to OP |
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ChichlandJoin Date: 2011-02-21
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Why'd you spell my name like that |
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circirakJoin Date: 2014-12-22
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because thats how i say it for some weird reason.
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ChichlandJoin Date: 2011-02-21
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Oh,. |
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MovementxJoin Date: 2013-07-31
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"search a thread only one u will see is my lyrics" okay kid, your calling mine awful. okay, I can highly doubt you can make a somewhat decent "freestyle" discluding the fact I did this for the fun of it. please get a life man. |
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circirakJoin Date: 2014-12-22
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when someone says "get a life" 9 times out of a 10, they don't have one themselves.
choose different word usage. |
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EponymousJoin Date: 2013-08-06
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this song sucks like ur mom |
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ChichlandJoin Date: 2011-02-21
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Lol do you want me to create a vote? |
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ay movement its preston9911
but this is aight... could be a lot better though cause theres no metaphors and sht |
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MovementxJoin Date: 2013-07-31
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no literally get a life i did this for fun and i dont practice rapping or anything, like jeez you guys must really enjoy yourselves to come on here and rant >thumbs up |
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Really bad and I didn't even read it |
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