IndiellaJoin Date: 2011-07-15
Post Count: 2603 |
My come-back song, which is a partial remix to the song Bonfire by Childish Gambino. I annotated each line, so if any of the lines is unclear or doesn't make sense, feel free to comment and I'll explain the meaning behind it, since a lot of this song is hidden meaning. Obviously not my best work since it was made within an hour, but enjoy. :)
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[Verse 1]
On the down low for a while, now I'm back up unlike your salary
More challenging than before but unlike you, I made it to the galaxy
Gonna paint an album better than the last, see the cover in a gallery
Album will make you say OMG like the first letter in the first three [lines]
About to be the woman on top, won't get cheated of my title like Hillary
Was killing the rap game in 2014, 2015 it's time I commit a felony
Said things about me being a feminist, sorry I have a peanut allergy
Some of y'all have been sleeping on my raps, wake you up like Avicii
Wake up feeling energized, lookin like the pink bunny for the battery
Been slept on like a bad mattress, top of the world, don't need an atlas
It's time for you to check out social media, 'cause I'm high status
My friends list are all allies, I've defeated y'all like you been Axis
Call me Britain, because I'm about to make y'all pay my taxes
[Hook]
It's a bonfire, I turn the lights out
I'm burnin' everything you [MF]s talk about
It's a bonfire, I turn the lights out
I'm burnin' everything you [MF]s talk about
[Verse 2]
Have a harder time concentrating than the people who judged OJ
All your albums combined had less sells than my no. 1, Pay Day
Maybe you should stick to what your clothing says and Obey
Flick of the wrist and I dust you [n]s off in an ashtray - cigar
I called you [n]s because you'll both be ending in the ER
[F] the other paintings in the room, my album will be real art
Blow more minds than the ones standing next to Jahar (Too soon....)
Had a bad case of writers block but took medicine and got better
Lyrics caused more tragedies than Kurt Cobain's su[ici]de letter
Everybody talks [s], I have more words with 'em than Miriam Webster
Y'all experiment with each other more than Lab owned by Dexter
Sure, my head may be in the stars but at least I know my zodiac
Diss left your career bloodier than a [b] on her period lookin for Tampax
How did you even get signed? Must've begged the owner for a contract
I miss the days you were never relevant, aha, #throwback
[Hook]
It's a bonfire, turn the lights out
I'm burnin' everything you [MF]s talk about
It's a bonfire, turn the lights out
I'm burnin' everything you [MF]s talk about |
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Rate some of my songs and I'll rate yours. this seems good, the vibe is okay.... |
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IndiellaJoin Date: 2011-07-15
Post Count: 2603 |
Thank you, I'll check out your songs. |
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IndiellaJoin Date: 2011-07-15
Post Count: 2603 |
Thanks guys! :) |
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#LongLiveXponent My main was terminated. |
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Btw i got a new skype acc, Add xponentvevo to the ro rap chat
thanks. |
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Lul how did that happen m8 |
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Told some h(oe to kill herself and she reported me
#FreeLilXp |
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sold her soul for fame[2] |
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whos selling souls I need a pair of shoes.
lul whats going on with the soul selling thing though. |
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Can I throw these digital worthless massacres of the English language into my digital bonfire? I wanna burn "copies" of all your songs, can I borrow your bonfire for the purpose of this burning? |
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IndiellaJoin Date: 2011-07-15
Post Count: 2603 |
Instead of calling my song a "worthless massacres of the English language", why don't you actually post a meaningful response and tell me how to improve instead of shutting down all my songs, which I am POSITIVE you have not read them all. Thanks. |
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7/10
This is the best I seen from you. that second verse is dope as'f.
(Rate my song as well?
http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=164072745 ) |
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IndiellaJoin Date: 2011-07-15
Post Count: 2603 |
Thanks luna! |
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Nice Comeback Song!
Glad you're back.
9/10 |
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How long did it take for you to write this song? Seems very detailed and didn't take 45 minutes to write. |
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7.2/10 I think this is best i've seen from you, though, a little choppy in first verse in my opinion (Btw. its Dev.) |
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IndiellaJoin Date: 2011-07-15
Post Count: 2603 |
Thanks for the rates. |
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IndiellaJoin Date: 2011-07-15
Post Count: 2603 |
"How long did it take for you to write this song? Seems very detailed and didn't take 45 minutes to write."
Oh, I wrote the basic structure of the song within and hour and edited it for 30 - 45 minutes or so. The song itself to write was about an hour but the editing part takes time. |
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