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Zombieslayer4848
#16926491Sunday, November 22, 2009 2:31 AM GMT

A mutated man who works for an assasin company ( goes around killing ppl ), who finds out that someone killed the mayor. As he invesitgates, his best friend Brandon is continously talking about it and he suspects something.. He is later assigned to hunt down Yuslif Amerif, a big terrorist. As he gets on flight 102, he notices a man in a dark mask on the plane with a gun. They start to fight, then he kills him, unmasks him, and realizes Brandon killed the mayor. His brother Jake has been kidnapped by Yusilf, because he got away on a different plane. So, he hunts Yuslif down in a foreign country, trying to save Jake. On his journey, Mark, the guy who gave him his assignments told him there was another assasin after him. He panics, and quickly retreats back to his office. 6 Years later, he finally goes out and tries to find Jake. He easily finds the clues and follows Yusilf to his hideout. There, they have a big fight, and there is 1 winner.... How's it sound?
WhiteFang872
#16930737Sunday, November 22, 2009 4:10 AM GMT

Sounds great. Aren't you tired of noobs who don't read it just because it's long? I read it.
Zombieslayer4848
#16937469Sunday, November 22, 2009 11:28 AM GMT

Yeah. Thanks! :D

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