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[Intro]
Forget intros cuhz.
What happened to ro-rap?
Rap now is just "yap yap yap"
Rappers don't have their thinking caps,
on their cradle caps.
but i'm to save this crap.
People think they're so bad,
Because they use words like
[F] [B] [N] and that.
You all are just Kangaroo rats.
Speaking of that, I found bare in
Metrix's shack.
My man was like "Keep back!"
He was scared as [F]
He was like a cat, getting attacked.
I can't lie, I got a panic attack.
I ran right away back to my shack,
Unpacked, and stayed inside.
But on the far side,
MC,s we making groups so they can save this crap'
But admit it, This industry is dead
It's like its non existing,
But I'll get defibrillator,
And get this sht alive and kicking.
[outro]
I don't care what you man say
Say whatever you say.
Toxic plum is dead.
Chico is rising.
Am out.
Khem | Rapper, SFer, Roleplayer. Turn up. |
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Rate whatever.
Reach God Khem | Best sfer since day juan |
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xabiJoin Date: 2008-08-31
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Man like Chico Time |
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ArdethaJoin Date: 2011-10-19
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hey look another "savior of x genre"
amazing
damned fool |
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Making another one tomorrow.
Reach God Khem | Best sfer since day juan |
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JunJoeJoin Date: 2013-04-01
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>Because they use words like
>[F] [B] [N] and that.
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>He was scared as [F]
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lol
also, awful 0/10 |
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I love my haters. :D
Reach God Khem | Best sfer since day juan |
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DigitsGodJoin Date: 2011-04-29
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worst song ever |
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ConsalJoin Date: 2009-11-01
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this lil [b] cant even rap. srs no1 here but me can rap smh |
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I'm not gonna spam. that's dumb :P
Reach God Khem | Best sfer since day juan |
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attack doesn't rhyme with attacked
nothing rhymes with defibrillator
you used the same word twice in like every other line
billy is my child |
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release it now
the world needs more chico |
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1Riblock1Join Date: 2011-05-02
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dude consal gonna teach u kid lol |
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rap doesnt need to rhyme.
Reach God Khem | Best sfer since day juan |
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1991HeroJoin Date: 2011-05-19
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"rap doesnt need to rhyme."
since when did rhythm and poetry become poorly sequenced text? |
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Idk. but it doesnt HAVE to. you all are getting made over a few lines that dont rhyme. fix up.
Reach God Khem | Best sfer since day juan |
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1991HeroJoin Date: 2011-05-19
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the thing is, while lyrics don't have to rhyme, your song does need meter; on roblox nobody understands what meter is though, so the bar is measured by rhymes
now if your song had a nice meter it would be wrong of everyone to accuse this of not even being rap, but this is really just text
reading it i can't imagine it being rapped or sung; while i don't usually use a mental reading voice, i tried it here and i read it like a script, without emotion or emphasis; this is just text |
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xabiJoin Date: 2008-08-31
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don't be that guy who acts like he feeds off hate, it's not a good look |
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stop. just stop. none of you ro-rap kids probably have the audacity to record your voice. we're sick and tired of looking at such text.
we recognize your sentiment for such foul activity.
but for god's sake, show your other talent of singing - oh, wait, you probably don't have the balls to do that. i shouldn't have asked, lol.
everyone here will just execrate your text. this isn't music, nor is it rap, but it's trash. and quite frankly, trash must be dismissed. |
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CyriluxJoin Date: 2014-10-21
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-0/10
Am I supposed to say something inspirational or something? |
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In my opinion, thats the best thing about ro rap. Your not supposed to make an audio. Your supposed to rap it out yourself. |
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JunJoeJoin Date: 2013-04-01
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In my opinion, thats the best thing about ro rap. Your not supposed to make an audio. Your supposed to rap it out yourself.
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no its probably because youre a squeaker and dont want people hearing your squeaky voice and bad flow. |
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