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Santeeisweird9
#179558037Sunday, December 13, 2015 8:01 AM GMT

Dues to the SOO many insults, i tried to make it better, enjoy! It's 19:23 PM... Alone in space... Just 4 astronauts in space trying to save the humans. "Mary, we made it to Halley's planet" Halley's planet is a watery planet, with a incoming huge wave the size of a 11- story house every 10 minutes, but they didn't know... "Let's go!" They go into the watery world, the water is not soo deep... but the wave will arrive soon... "Farquad, Let's go see if this planet is habitable." "Roger that Steve" They explore for a little bit, finding nothing but water, FRESH water, they bring 2 huge barrels just incase "Mary, This place has too much water... Mary?" Mary sees something in the distance "I see something in the distance Andrew" It was the wave, THE WAVE! "Oh shoot!" "Everyone back to the ship, NOW!" "Roger that!" They head back "Oh no! THE WAVE" The wave crashes down on the ship and someone who didn't escape, there is now 3... 10 earth years pass from the planet The planet did manage to get some water and food, but will end in a few 50 years. 20:00 PM. They made it to Conner's planet, a icy world with no water or anything, yet again they never knew... Was this good enough? NEXT PART SOON!
BunnehBroDoesROBLOX
#179558144Sunday, December 13, 2015 8:06 AM GMT

w-what?
Santeeisweird9
#179558158Sunday, December 13, 2015 8:07 AM GMT

See the movie relation?
MrStilts
#179558229Sunday, December 13, 2015 8:11 AM GMT

no
BunnehBroDoesROBLOX
#179565864Sunday, December 13, 2015 1:58 PM GMT

idk what the shell is happening
coIdplayy
#179566062Sunday, December 13, 2015 2:04 PM GMT

interstellar [2014]
MrStilts
#179567303Sunday, December 13, 2015 2:37 PM GMT

Ohhh, well in that case the story still sucks!
Santeeisweird9
#179586640Sunday, December 13, 2015 7:45 PM GMT

Lol, I will change the story a bit, making that icy planet like idk, It will be filled with ammonia though, still.
BunnehBroDoesROBLOX
#179650941Monday, December 14, 2015 10:24 PM GMT

how about u start all over again just better
simsf1
#179652943Monday, December 14, 2015 10:52 PM GMT

Or you could be like Not a terrible writer And you could NOT plagiarize the work of others Seriously this is sad You're absolute shi te at writing git gud
BunnehBroDoesROBLOX
#179653195Monday, December 14, 2015 10:55 PM GMT

@above X2

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