"??? OT, do you like My poem? 18-

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#183654978Monday, February 15, 2016 7:20 AM GMT

oh bqaby i like it raw ohg baby i like it RAW Oh puppyMOnkey Baby I like it RRRRAAAAWWW! i guess i dont KILELR! and BAM hhhh The The The Oh baby i like it RAW!!! op yeah baby I like it RAQW!! yeah baby I like it Raw 11 11 111 11 Oh baby i like it raw house Yeah esnay Terrific Clown Plan April is the cruelest Month SHIMY SIMMY YA pass me the mic so i can take it away Wu tang clan killa Wu tang in the SWARM KILLER BEE!! pass it all around lyrics get hard meet the ground i guess KILLAH!! one to SLAM alike BLAM!! RRRRR BRRAPH! shim shim shim Chimmichanga RAW! Yeh! Y OH BABY I LIKE IT RAW!!!!!!!!!!!!!! shimmy sihimmy shimmyshimmy ya give me the mic so i can pass it away.... [END SCENE]

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#183655005Monday, February 15, 2016 7:21 AM GMT

yes im 18-

crazymadwalf

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#183655038Monday, February 15, 2016 7:22 AM GMT

nice poem bro but I think yuo could try adding a bit more... you know,