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Pyracel
#184897097Sunday, March 06, 2016 11:28 PM GMT

Hello! I need some feedback on my current project. (http://www.roblox.com/games/358193441/Void-Pre-Alpha) The game is called Void, a round based game. PLEASE RESPOND WITH PROS AND CONS ONLY! Example : Pros: -Blah Cons- -Bleh Things I know and will change: -More and Better Guns -Different Types Of Enemies -Better Soundscape -Remove Neon cuz it hurts ur eyes Things I wanna know: -How can I make the map better? -What are some tips you have for me? -How can I make the gameplay better? Things I dont wanna hear: "UR BUILDS SUK" "Ur idea is crap" "Nooblet" "It suks"
guest63474
#184898014Sunday, March 06, 2016 11:42 PM GMT

Bro, no need to give me a tutorial. Feedback/Comments: - You need a loading screen - Too dark - Lobby isn't that conformable - Maybe add a hit indicator? - The gun and hands are great. BOOM! I just did that.
zachzachk1999
#184898610Sunday, March 06, 2016 11:51 PM GMT

Ideas: Needs a new lobby Quests (Ex: Kill # enemies, survive round without killing anything, ect) Outfits. (Suit color, weapon skins)
zachzachk1999
#184898927Sunday, March 06, 2016 11:56 PM GMT

More things: money for kills knife
Pyracel
#184909430Monday, March 07, 2016 2:25 AM GMT

I dont know if I wanna add a mele weapon :/
zachzachk1999
#184916571Monday, March 07, 2016 4:25 AM GMT

No, like, press F to use the knife while holding a gun. Maybe an insta kill or a lot of dmg, but it's dangerous to get close.
Pyracel
#184925826Monday, March 07, 2016 11:43 AM GMT

While holding the gun? I thought I should make it a different tool.
RePlayableEvents
#184926121Monday, March 07, 2016 12:02 PM GMT

The game quickly becomes repetitive, with no quests or other things to aim for, it only lasts for around 5 minutes. You also need your own GUI.
iKalmah
#184929758Monday, March 07, 2016 2:45 PM GMT

Okay heres what I got, -Good arms and gun, if i were you, i would make the gun shoot lasers, because the whole neon, robot theme would be better with lasers. -LOBBY NEEDS REDONE. The neon is a good design, but if you have cyan in the middle, at least make the neon cyan too. -You might also want a loading screen, or animations for the enemies. Aside from that, the game isn't too bad. Maybe with some PvP it would be better.
Pyracel
#184942350Monday, March 07, 2016 8:40 PM GMT

@Replayableevents Those are my guis... What the heck do u mean by that
Pyracel
#184942480Monday, March 07, 2016 8:43 PM GMT

And there is something to aim for, its earning cash tp buy better weapons. I just havent made the gun shop yet ._. also there will be more gamemodes. There will be something to aim for, besides all I am asking you for is advice on how the gameplay works, not my concept. .______.
Pyracel
#184957447Tuesday, March 08, 2016 12:50 AM GMT

Bump
Rakonus
#184961469Tuesday, March 08, 2016 1:48 AM GMT

Things to add: Custom inventory, shows ammo, make there either be more of the mobs or make them damage more. I'm so breezy
Pyracel
#184979025Tuesday, March 08, 2016 11:39 AM GMT

Bump
guest63474
#184982093Tuesday, March 08, 2016 2:19 PM GMT

Hey, dude you got enough info for your game. Are you trying to advertise it now? BOOM! I just did that.
Pyracel
#184996365Tuesday, March 08, 2016 9:29 PM GMT

._. I mostly got feedback I have gotten before. Besides, what if someone has something I didnt think of. #NeverStopCreating If I wanted to advertise it, I would advertise it... ;-;
guest63474
#185010765Wednesday, March 09, 2016 1:20 AM GMT

So that means you should stop asking for feedback and change what people asked. BOOM! I just did that.
Pyracel
#191170309Tuesday, June 14, 2016 3:51 PM GMT

This was from a loooooong time ago. I was very rude, sorry about that.

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