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R_qD
#185712610Sunday, March 20, 2016 4:02 PM GMT

I'v made a game called Sparta Hill, a fighting type of game, but sitting around with 128 visits makes me feel disappointed when it has NO free models a huge battle map and fortifications for each team. It seems life it should be getting more attention. I wanna know what you think about.
Wrathsong
#185712758Sunday, March 20, 2016 4:06 PM GMT

Constructive criticism: - The mountains are too thin - You can see outside the map - I think you should reduce the CameraMaxZoomDistance - The building is simply mediocre. The metal doesn't fit the theme of the time period it sounds like you're going for - The map isn't *huge* like you said and the fortifications really don't fortify much
YuukiKokoro
#185712820Sunday, March 20, 2016 4:07 PM GMT

Low quality game. Needs better gameplay and build. The undefeated King sings aloud the name of the miracle she holds in her hands.
R_qD
#185712975Sunday, March 20, 2016 4:10 PM GMT

Ok so far my list has work on mountains, better fortifications (wooden) and max, zoom out, i'll get to work
Wrathsong
#185714019Sunday, March 20, 2016 4:29 PM GMT

To expand on what yuuki said, it does need more gameplay. Perhaps you could add different round types to it..
Xstarlight
#185716003Sunday, March 20, 2016 5:02 PM GMT

Maybe you should make ads for the game, Using gimp you can make an ad for roblox with some simple tools.
Ocks67
#185717622Sunday, March 20, 2016 5:28 PM GMT

Ask senpai.
Viicari
#185717716Sunday, March 20, 2016 5:29 PM GMT

you need ads to get your game noticed. i suggest around 10k robux? bye | add 2.3k

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