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2016 July 4, was the day our government turned against us, sent us into concentration camps. Our president now a dictator. We were no longer a democracy. We tried to fight the government. But with the technology we failed. But things got worser. 20 years later, The New Order invaded our country. Some say they saved us from the government, some say they didn't. The New Order was all part of a plan that the government made. We found out. We fought. We tried but failed. They didn't care about freedom or the citizens of their own country. They cared about themselves. They dropped bombs on our country. They killed nearly all the population. But we, the Founding Fathers, didn't give up. We survived in bases our old government made these bases were surround by large walls that contained the blast. 5 years later, we left the place we called "The Walls". We wanted to rebuild civilization..... We- rest classified. "So this is what happened?" said Jason. "Guess so.." said Cayde his best friend. "Well if we want to rebuild civilization we gotta do it now!" Exclaimed Lina. Cayde tossed the file away "We aren't the only ones who aren't rebuilding civilization......." said Jason as they all walked away.
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Hey guys this is the storyline to Ghosts. The Deadzone Expansion will be covered soon and the rest of them. The 3 people aren't the only Ghosts. You may be wondering what happened to the other countries. Well they're still present. Only America is going through these problems. So goodbye! -Pixel |
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MrStiltsJoin Date: 2012-11-07
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Pal, this story makes absolutely no sense. Trump doesn't become president until next year! |
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wait what?
was this backstory literally written by some call of duty developer's kid on the back of a chuck e cheese napkin? |
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.... Trump isn't president. |
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...I bet you can't make a storyline, so why are you criticizing this story? |
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I don't get it. Who are the Ghosts?
Why didn't America successfully fight back? I sincerely doubt the military would go along with it, or at least very little. But I'm nitpicking.
What's the point of the file if it doesn't finish?
Who are these three characters? Are they the Ghosts? Do we get any explanation of who they are?
What's the point of this post? A short story? Lore for an RP?
I have many questions. |
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LNG257Join Date: 2012-06-13
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Judging from the postcount, I would rule out that last "Lore for an RP". |
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Good point.
I still have many questions. Not all of them about this post. |
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Unless the Founding Fathers pulled a Quentin Trembley, I don't think they could survive that long. |
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The Ghosts are an elite squad formed by the Founding Fathers. The New Order didn't exist in the present. |
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Flyboy the 3 characters are Ghosts who find a ripped up file about the past the reason why the file isn't completed is because the file was ripped up. |
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MrStiltsJoin Date: 2012-11-07
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Just an FYI, I was making a quip by comparing the events here to a Trump presidency. However, you have proven to be far more incompetent than I thought you were if I had to explain the joke to you. |
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Oh, this is bad. I've written better stories about card games. |
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AbsxlveJoin Date: 2012-06-21
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OP, please, you're only embarrassing yourself more.
If you can't write a decent story or even an RP, you have to partake in RPs, simple as.
Reisfeldz, making people cringe on TS3 since 2015. |
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oooo i am the spooky ghost |
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Its quite funny how you people make a big deal about this story. Its not like it is COD, and like I said the Deadzone will cover the rest of it. So stop it. If you can't make a story than stop thinking this is a horrible story. I don't care about the haters. You haters are just making a fool out of yourselves. I doubt you can make a story. If you people made a story its probably going to be about going to space and fighting aliens on a ring. This story isn't finished. I hope you fools know that. Go judge COD IW. I'm done replying to ignorant people who make me cringe hearing their stupid comments on MY story. |
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AbsxlveJoin Date: 2012-06-21
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Oh boy, another one bites the dust.
He used the generic term of 'hater', lads! Run!
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MrStiltsJoin Date: 2012-11-07
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I can just taste his saltiness from over here. |
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randomly aggravating people because of our group's ego on writing topics
10/10 would be apart of this community again
end me now |
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If you can't make a story than stop thinking this is a horrible story. I don't care about the haters. You haters are just making a fool out of yourselves. I doubt you can make a story. If you people made a story its probably going to be about going to space and fighting aliens on a ring.
We can write good stories here. And, they aren't these piles of trash crafted from words, they're actually quite good sometimes. The best example is Zorrow, read some of his (Zorrow is a he, right?) stories, they are quite good. So, what you have now learned, don't judge someone's abilities because they do yours. I learned that one the hard way.
The last man on earth sat alone in a room... There was a knock at the door... |
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AbsxlveJoin Date: 2012-06-21
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Praise Z0rr0w. Senpai doesn't notice me fully yet :(
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@sk8er, I'm actually completely capable of writing a story. I'm actually working on a series of short stories titled "John Quin's Equestrian Adventures," of which I have no idea if it is a good title.
As for hating, I only had questions about what exactly this is. It's about 3 people who are the "Ghosts". Which tells me nothing about who they are, why they're here, what their goals are, what they look like, what the setting is, who the antagonist(s) (is/are), or much anything else.
It's like he pulled out a few paragraphs from a book with no context. |
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Flyboy, I was replying to pixel's earlier comment.
The last man on earth sat alone in a room... There was a knock at the door... |
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At this point I don't care about this old storyline. I already made different storylines. If you don't like this story than why are you replying to this forum? |
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