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ImitaterJoin Date: 2012-08-17
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Heh I Hate Reggie From Hi Skool |
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5ancuJoin Date: 2015-12-31
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Already gave you my opinion, make a better gate, the wall around the gate looks more detailed than the gate, that's a no-go.
Improve the terrain by refraining from using the SHII meshes, and make your own instead. Remember TSU's fort called Galaxy Sector? Take inspiration for the trees from there, should help you balance out the planned new vehicles.
Link to Galaxy Sector (now called Outpost Elysium, because it's only the first map): https://www.roblox.com/games/188100828/TSU-Outpost-Elysium |
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5ancuJoin Date: 2015-12-31
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lihava join u stupid narwhal-looking kid |
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ArkitekJoin Date: 2015-05-09
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did somebody say arkitek |
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5ancu
why so rude my love
Obt
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WavyBankJoin Date: 2016-06-10
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robb12Join Date: 2009-07-09
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dont worry bro ill check it out |
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robb12Join Date: 2009-07-09
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ValhalasJoin Date: 2011-09-24
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fog is dense and cba to waste time walking around the whole thing to see it all but
overall decent looking pretty above average in terms of the actual building which is a step in the right direction
if you're looking for straight up cover and shoot gameplay its spot on but this doesnt really seem like the type of map to be very dynamic
excessive tree spam (theyre all the same) and banner spam too; personally id add at least 2 more tree models so its not tedious
ground terrain is pretty solid; something id do tbh
id be happy to judge the rest if there wasnt so much fog rn
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ValhalasJoin Date: 2011-09-24
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o found the wall
pretty neat style id probably remove the cone spikes on the wall itself just because i think itd look better but its all a matter of what youre going for i guess so it doesnt bother me too much
actual buildings are neat and straight to the point, i assume its not done because of the gaping hole in the back but yeah it looks cool
cave to base is neat but the slide leading up to the mountains should probably be improved because it just stands out as half-assed
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ValhalasJoin Date: 2011-09-24
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only thing id work on is making the map overall more interesting
idk how id do that with ur clan because i dont know what ur going for but when i raid a base i prefer it actually be fun to discover things as opposed to seeing something and saying "yeah definitely something id expect in a clan base like this"
its really basic and bland overall but again if thats what ur going for by all means dont let me get in ur way lol
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LaedereJoin Date: 2013-06-17
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The gate at your showcase reminds me of TGI gates
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