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tell anything and everything wrong with this
https://gyazo.com/9f7bf8fd7086ec321261c6c473f893b9
https://gyazo.com/77463b2fd516069e7a82dae1dacc7e49 |
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F18ACEJoin Date: 2015-06-24
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the wheels look undersized, but overall it's a decent job |
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Looks nice. The sides seem to have no details like the rest of the tank, so it looks a bit awkward.
The wheels seem a bit small.
Also, what are you going to shoot out of that tank??? A bullet? |
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pidgeyJoin Date: 2008-01-16
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the conveyor for the wheels needs to be more thick, the black box at the side of it looks very out of place my my perspective
maybe make the lights neon also, you could also add a bit more detail at the sides since the frontside of the tank is packed but the sides are empty
hope i helped
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yes but more pls i need all the criticism i can get
also no need to be polite about it idc |
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pidgeyJoin Date: 2008-01-16
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give me all the angles ill judge it
beep beep +1 post woohoo |
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this is the only one i could find cri
http://prntscr.com/bqvn76 |
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pidgeyJoin Date: 2008-01-16
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what are those black boxes nitro lol
the antenna is 2 big also never seen a door at the back of a tank before wtf lol but like i said before add stuff to the sides of the tank its bland
beep beep +1 post woohoo |
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Ocks67Join Date: 2009-03-07
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Did you base it off anything?
Any reference image?
Also, the canon barrel is too small to look pretty.
Enlarge the wheel and you got something looking nice. |
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the m2 bradley, just google it |
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Overall, I give it a 9/10.
The wheels look extremely small to me.
Also the tank looks a bit too small to be a tank.
Other then that, I like it~! |
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ty for feedback, anything else?
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Add a bit more detail to the sides and the wheels should be larger.
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line_arJoin Date: 2012-03-02
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"no holding back"
> chassis has little to no detail
> sides have absolutely zero detail,save for that completely unneeded/useless black box thingie
>threads are lazy
>wheels have no detail
>headlights aren't neon
>cannon is poorly done and way too small for shooting anything other than BB pellets
>idk what the grey plate on the front is for
>why are the small eye-slits purple
> i don't see any exhaust
> i don't see any fuel jerricans ( unless they're inside idk )
> i don't see any way this thing could be going over a small rock due to the ridiculously low ground clearance
you said no holding back idk
but it's pretty good for a first build,considering it's your first ground vehicle |
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pidgeyJoin Date: 2008-01-16
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so i wasnt the only one to think that the tank looks harmless
when i think of a tank i think a massive gun which shoots a huge explosive to kill every1 not a pellet gun
good to know
pidgey is my name sh##posting is my game |
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Ocks67Join Date: 2009-03-07
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Well, the M2 Bradley does look like it has a weeny tiny barrel. |
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its not a first build lmao |
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ultrabugJoin Date: 2012-03-30
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Do the tracks actually work as if it were a real tank? It looks a whole lot better than the one my friend and I quickly threw together to script with. http://www.roblox.com/games/398689982/FredeyFlys-Place-Number-41 |
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no its a fm script
and also tank tracks dont turn like that... ever
they turn by having the one on the right go forward, the one on the left go backwards, sometimes the left doesnt do anything and idles, and the tank turns right, vice versa |
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