How's this intro look?

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#193954107Monday, July 18, 2016 3:04 PM GMT

https://www.roblox.com/games/182179455/Speeders I plan to make it better, and add more scenery, and gui animations, but right now I just want to see if this is OK. This is a revamp of an old crappy free modeled game I made 2 years ago... Policeman of OT

Divlish

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#193964522Monday, July 18, 2016 5:35 PM GMT

Good bad? Policeman of OT

icewinglord71

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#193968082Monday, July 18, 2016 6:16 PM GMT

pretty good maybe u can make it where u see your player spawn

Divlish

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#193968193Monday, July 18, 2016 6:18 PM GMT

Well, it's a driving game and this is just the starting menu and you'll be teleported to the game where you are spawned and get your car. Policeman of OT

ItsWayne

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#193968424Monday, July 18, 2016 6:21 PM GMT

I would suggest you zoom in on the car a little bit and add some background decor

Divlish

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#193968495Monday, July 18, 2016 6:22 PM GMT

Yeah, I will make it a garage type thing. Policeman of OT

Divlish

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#193981311Monday, July 18, 2016 9:14 PM GMT

It goes to my building place for now, but I'll change that when the map is finished. I'm building map stuff and cars there. Policeman of OT