VevicusJoin Date: 2009-05-03
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(Based off of the events of PoL vs TEG. Please don't judge too harshly).
There was a time in the galaxy where things were a lot more quiet. Powerful space empires existed, yet not much really happened. People assumed wars had died out. It was a time where people spoke more than they fought. For once, it became quiet.. too quiet.
That silence soon ended.
One day, after coming under attack on various fronts, a few nations merged into a coalition to resist. This coalition was named the Proponent of Liberty. These nations stood up for the liberty of all citizens, and believed that people should be free to make their own choices with minimal intervention.
On the other side stood The Egalitarian Front. This band of nations believed in the ideology that laws should be set in place in order for everyone to be considered fair. These two sides fought each other, the PoL being at the war torn outpost Fort Fang, and TEG defending the lava-filled Kopervich.
At first, both coalitions consisted of fewer nations. But soon, civilization after civilization joined in. Before people knew it, more than half the galaxy was at war and it seemed like there was no ending to the chaos. At first PoL had the upper hand, but TEG would soon gain their own advantages. The war came at the cost of many lives, and it seemed that the victor wasn't very clear.
This all changed when the great enemy came. Swiftly and single-handedly, THEY delt a decisive blow to both massive coalitions. Their troops came in like wild-fire, carrying their red banners to glory and gave mercy to none. Shocked and outraged, many of TEG and PoL didn't stand much of a chance against this enemy.
That enemy was Vaktovia.
With more lives lost than ever, and resources becoming scarce, TEG and PoL under dire circumstances decided to call a cease fire against each other and unite under one coalition to resist Vaktovia. With the fury of many nations at Vaktovia's doorstep, there's no telling what can happen next...
This is how the Coalition war truly begins.
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Some great feedback we got here.
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VevicusJoin Date: 2009-05-03
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not nearly close to being detailed enough
nice outline but give it a narrative, give it focus
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VevicusJoin Date: 2009-05-03
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FIXED VERSION:
(Based off of the events of PoL vs TEF. Please don't judge too harshly).
There was a time in the galaxy where things were a lot more quiet. Powerful space empires existed, yet not much really happened. People assumed wars had died out. It was a time where people spoke more than they fought. For once, it became quiet.. too quiet.
That silence soon ended.
One day, after coming under attack on various fronts, a few nations merged into a coalition to resist. This coalition was named the Proponent of Liberty. These nations stood up for the liberty of all citizens, and believed that people should be free to make their own choices with minimal intervention.
On the other side stood The Egalitarian Front. This band of nations believed in the ideology that laws should be set in place in order for everyone to be considered fair. These two sides fought each other, the PoL being at the war torn outpost Fort Fang, and TEF defending the lava-filled Kopervich.
At first, both coalitions consisted of fewer nations. But soon, civilization after civilization joined in. Before people knew it, more than half the galaxy was at war and it seemed like there was no ending to the chaos. At first PoL had the upper hand, but TEF would soon gain their own advantages. The war came at the cost of many lives, and it seemed that the victor wasn't very clear.
This all changed when the great enemy came. Swiftly and single-handedly, THEY delt a decisive blow to both massive coalitions. Their troops came in like wild-fire, carrying their red banners to glory and gave mercy to none. Shocked and outraged, many of TEF and PoL didn't stand much of a chance against this enemy.
That enemy was Vaktovia.
With more lives lost than ever, and resources becoming scarce, TEF and PoL under dire circumstances decided to call a cease fire against each other and unite under one coalition to resist Vaktovia. With the fury of many nations at Vaktovia's doorstep, there's no telling what can happen next...
This is how the Coalition war truly begins.
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VevicusJoin Date: 2009-05-03
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Send it again. I'll accept you in.
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VevicusJoin Date: 2009-05-03
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Rather not have anyone hold grudges against each other. I'll be sure that everyone is treated as comrades in TIE. Rest of it is up to you.
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VevicusJoin Date: 2009-05-03
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Forget the mistakes of the past. Raviz is here to stay, he's helped me a great deal and I keep in contact with him very often.
I would rather like to have everyone get along. A bright future is in store for TIE. Don't let it be dampened by former grudges.
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I'd like to believe this time will be different. All the officers are hyped for the release.
If bad things come to pass, it will not effect the overall vision I have for TIE.
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