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warrior5646
#20656690Sunday, February 07, 2010 4:05 AM GMT

|Dark Reckoning| Warriors Fan-Fic Baseline Looking up at the Full moon, Fernstar then looked at Brackenstar, “We need your support, Brackenstar” He paused, then continued “We suspect Riverclan of stealing prey, yet with the surge of their Warriors they could outnumber us”. Going over to Brackenstar, he gave a flick of his tail, “We will give you half of our prey” Smiling, Brackenstar replied “You are admitting your weakness, Fernstar.” She paused, and then looked at the Moon. “Yet, Riverclan has stolen our prey--” Being cut-off, a large Black shape smashed into Brackenstar, braking her spine and sending her limp body rolling. The cat hissed at Fern star then muttered “Brackenstar was Weak, and so are you” Hissing at the cat, it sprang, and bite into Fernstars back, then cuffed his Neck, and snapped it. Jumping off, the cat then sprang over to the log, crossing over and rolling in mud, and sprinting to the Shadowclan Camp. I might continue. Who knows.
snowdapple
#20656748Sunday, February 07, 2010 4:06 AM GMT

Good one! ^^
bchunter
#20656788Sunday, February 07, 2010 4:07 AM GMT

Nice :D
warrior5646
#20657344Sunday, February 07, 2010 4:20 AM GMT

|Dark Reckoning| Warriors Fan-Fic Baseline Looking up at the Full moon, Fernstar then looked at Brackenstar, “We need your support, Brackenstar” He paused, then continued “We suspect Riverclan of stealing prey, yet with the surge of their Warriors they could outnumber us”. Going over to Brackenstar, he gave a flick of his tail, “We will give you half of our prey” Smiling, Brackenstar replied “You are admitting your weakness, Fernstar.” She paused, and then looked at the Moon. “Yet, Riverclan has stolen our prey--” Being cut-off, a large Black shape smashed into Brackenstar, braking her spine and sending her limp body rolling. The cat hissed at Fern star then muttered “Brackenstar was Weak, and so are you” Hissing at the cat, it sprang, and bite into Fernstars back, then cuffed his Neck, and snapped it. Jumping off, the cat then sprang over to the log, crossing over and rolling in mud, and sprinting to the Shadowclan Camp. Braking into the entrance, he made his way to the Warriors den, and yowled inside “Brackenstar was killed” a few shocked yowls emitted, then he ran to the middle of the camp, and yowled into the camp “Brackenstar was killed!” a Warrior ran up, and looked to Greyfoot “He was killed?!?” he said, in a panicked voice. An elder stepped in, and said “That makes Greyfoot, GreySTAR” he said calmly, emphasising the “Star”. Then, the elder looked to Greystar “Who killed him?” faking Panic, Greystar replied “Thunderclans Leader, Fernstar!” enraged yowls rang out, then as one Warrior piped out “We should attack them!” Agreement flooded over the cats, as some charged through the entrance, and other followed Greystar, who went to the front of the charge and sprinted to Thunderclan territory, and went over, leading his cats to the camp. Some more.

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