Would anyone help me out with some fine-reading?

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#207262177Sunday, January 15, 2017 6:31 AM GMT

I have some post I'm about to make but I feel like it can be improved on, I'd like to message it to someone so they can go over it themselves and edit it where appropriate

Pyrosan

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#207262330Sunday, January 15, 2017 6:33 AM GMT

i hate that i rant when i make large posts aa

Aerofall

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#207262396Sunday, January 15, 2017 6:34 AM GMT

whats it about

Everlasting_Night

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#207262511Sunday, January 15, 2017 6:35 AM GMT

Send it to me, I'll edit accordingly. Somehow we still carry on... || HAIL THE SOVEREIGNTY

Pyrosan

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#207262518Sunday, January 15, 2017 6:36 AM GMT

It's just general guide lines for this group I'm starting up but whenever I make a large post I tend to rant on about stuff I don't need to

Everlasting_Night

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#207262739Sunday, January 15, 2017 6:39 AM GMT

Or don't then. Somehow we still carry on... || HAIL THE SOVEREIGNTY

Pyrosan

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#207262879Sunday, January 15, 2017 6:41 AM GMT

#### I'm still typing it up lol I'm just finding people who are interested in helping I'll send it to you when it's done

Everlasting_Night

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#207262998Sunday, January 15, 2017 6:43 AM GMT

ok i may have to look at in the morning then Somehow we still carry on... || HAIL THE SOVEREIGNTY