A song a wrote... <_<

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#21461436Sunday, February 21, 2010 8:09 PM GMT

I never thought I’d see the day When you’d leave me in dismay The day you came into my life Was the best day ever And now you’re gone I don’t need the money I don’t need the car You can have it all Just let me have you I know, I fail at writing songs... <_<

JayFeather9

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#21463830Sunday, February 21, 2010 8:45 PM GMT

It was ok...

MrEpicSauce

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#21464416Sunday, February 21, 2010 8:53 PM GMT

More A poem than a song. It's average I guess. >.>

tonymontana67

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#21473029Sunday, February 21, 2010 11:09 PM GMT

good poem meng.....but i still feel paranoid...