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GreekWarrior12345
#218731460Monday, June 12, 2017 5:07 PM GMT

My name is Eric. If you are reading this right now, I've either died in a sad, dark crevice while going down and my body was found, or I've made it from the summit and decided to share this to the world. This journal entry will contain the story of my journey climbing up Mount Everest. I was brought here by my best friend, Brandon. I had been friends with Brandon since the 5th grade. If I were to risk my life for anyone, it would be him. I was the more adventurous and daring of the two, if there were a huge earthquake, I'd be the one filming it, but even Mount Everest was a stretch for me. One day on a Friday night, he called me, and when I answered him, all I heard was, "Let's climb Mount Everest." Initially, I declined. I read stories about large groups of people dying there on that very mountain, but after a few minutes, he was able to convince me. Now looking back at it, I should have never even picked up. I was given a deep, dark blue suit, and a neon blue backpack. Brandon chose a suit made up of different shades of red, and a neon red backpack. We walked through the Khumbu Icefall. It was an area filled with deep, deadly holes. I looked in one hole and saw a frozen body. I looked in silence, wondering how that person got there. I felt uneasy. Just making 1 mistake like a small trip or slip would result in your death. When we passed it, we were met with a few steep, or narrow pathways. Brandon was far ahead of me, almost as if he'd been there a thousand times before. We passed camp 1 and 2, thinking nothing of them. After climbing for what seemed like centuries, we arrived at a large series of ladders, leading only up. They were fairly easy, but there was one particular group that would result in one of the most scarring moments of my life. I chose to go first, which was the worst mistake of my life. I saw when I reached the top, that if you attempted to transfer to the other set of ladders, you would most certainly fall. I shut my eyes, made a leap of faith, and landed with a thump. I opened my eyes, expecting to be dead, but I had landed. I sat up and shouted to Brandon, "I made it!". What I didn't know, was that when I landed, I cracked one of the bars of a ladder. I kept walking forward, expecting Brandon to make it as well and follow me. As I was walking, I hear a snap. I turned around to see Brandon, holding on to a single bar and calling my name for help. I ran to him, my goal being to grab his hand and pulling him up. I almost had him, but before I could grab ahold of him, he fell. He screamed, and then silence. The silence was deafening. I sat there, crying. It should have been me. Brandon and I were like brothers. We looked out for each other, and now he was gone. After my tears were spent, I continued my climb. I finished the remaining ladders and made it to camp 3. After refilling my air tank and refilling my empty water bottle, I came across a bridge made almost entirely of unstable, unpredictable ladders. I was about halfway through when It flipped upside down. I fell face first into the snow below. I was knocked out by the impact of my face colliding with the ground, and when I woke up, I was all alone. I needed to find a way out, and I saw a very narrow, and small way I could escape. I attempted to climb it hundreds of times before I felt as if it was hopeless. I was going to die there, alone. I decided that no, I wasn't going to stay there hopelessly. I had a family that expected me to return home. I tried one more time, and my luck paid off. I was able to grab a rock at the top and pull myself up to the other side. I went on to climb until I reached a group of ladders. It was like nothing I had climbed before. Some had none underneath, some were just broken. I made it slowly but surely across, until I met Austin. Austin was crying next to a snow mound. I talked to him, and decided to help him get the the top with me. Austin's friends decided it would be a great idea to climb Mount Everest together, and that it would be fun. Austin was the only one left. Austin was reluctant, fearful, and shy. I imagine he would be after witnessing his friends die. Austin and I found a bridge made of a relatively thin layer of ice. I decided that him and I go together, since the last time I went first resulted in the death of my best friend. We crossed slowly together, when we heard a small snap. I looked at Austin's feet and found a large crack under him. I realized that the bridge couldn't support both of us, and that I'd have to push him off or we'd both die. "Buddy?" Austin whispered to me. "I'm sorry." I said. I thrust my hands out and pushed him off. I heard his terrified and agonizing scream as I walked to the other side. I reached the summit alone, a murderer, a soulless monster. I write this entry now while leaning on the flag post. Help me.
Wackywesley1203
#218737523Monday, June 12, 2017 6:37 PM GMT

*clap clap clap* Very good
NuclearBronco
#218742651Monday, June 12, 2017 7:50 PM GMT

Extremely good. I love your stories.
GreekWarrior12345
#218743538Monday, June 12, 2017 8:02 PM GMT

Thanks, really. If you want, you can check my about for more of them. I'm always working on another one.
Valphike
#218745025Monday, June 12, 2017 8:22 PM GMT

the grankids love this book
SeptKill
#218834388Wednesday, June 14, 2017 12:20 AM GMT

Very nice story.
SeptKill
#218839019Wednesday, June 14, 2017 1:21 AM GMT

I don't see how you were "banned" from this..
GreekWarrior12345
#218840796Wednesday, June 14, 2017 1:46 AM GMT

I don't know why either! They said it was inappropriate and spam. It's BS!
SeptKill
#218847878Wednesday, June 14, 2017 3:38 AM GMT

Maybe someone thought it was too much violence? I don't know but I don't care it's still a fantastic story. Tragic end though.
SeptKill
#218847914Wednesday, June 14, 2017 3:39 AM GMT

I'm going to make a story too.
GreekWarrior12345
#218847940Wednesday, June 14, 2017 3:39 AM GMT

Hey, I'll check it out!!
SeptKill
#218872366Wednesday, June 14, 2017 3:47 PM GMT

This is it, it's my first story so tell me if I did good. https://forum.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=218849399
JAYJAYJAYJAY21349
#218893067Wednesday, June 14, 2017 9:20 PM GMT

Epic story you should be an author. My dad climbed Mount Everest once, and broke his arm.. :( but he was lucky cause he didn't die like Brandon or Austin.
thenightowl1
#218894265Wednesday, June 14, 2017 9:45 PM GMT

Amazing
DailyRoLord
#218894551Wednesday, June 14, 2017 9:50 PM GMT

Amazing story, love the conflict, the character development, the word choice, and the overall mood. This is really an interesting story.
ironblox112
#218897840Wednesday, June 14, 2017 10:46 PM GMT

That twist at the end really had me shocked. Good job. "Ze healing is not as rewarding as ze hurting"
SeptKill
#218901522Wednesday, June 14, 2017 11:49 PM GMT

I know right, it's really good.
SeptKill
#218901800Wednesday, June 14, 2017 11:54 PM GMT

It's the best story I've seen so far to be honest.
SwedishLemon
#218901974Wednesday, June 14, 2017 11:57 PM GMT

"It's the best story I've seen so far to be honest." I'm guessing this is the first story you've read, then.
GreekWarrior12345
#218950608Thursday, June 15, 2017 7:34 PM GMT

Well, I only spend 40 minutes to an hour on these. This WAS my first ever actual story too.
JAYJAYJAYJAY21349
#219019501Friday, June 16, 2017 6:44 PM GMT

I joined u on a game and I got banned why did I get banned was it because I wasn't in the group? I was just saying that I liked this story
GreekWarrior12345
#219042771Saturday, June 17, 2017 12:22 AM GMT

My group is strict.
Pawnzie525
#221085033Tuesday, July 11, 2017 9:08 PM GMT

Hey Eric! do not know if you remember me but I was an old friend of yours, I was in your at the time primary group French army. We were good friends.
GreekWarrior12345
#221148327Wednesday, July 12, 2017 6:31 PM GMT

Keyword: "Old" It's not personal, but it's personal.
DavitiAGelloshvilli
#221734997Wednesday, July 19, 2017 12:54 AM GMT

This is disgusting!

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