NDaisy111
#23283287Tuesday, March 30, 2010 5:38 PM GMT

Yikes O_O
catzrcute
#23283332Tuesday, March 30, 2010 5:39 PM GMT

I know. O_O
MINARD777
#23291760Tuesday, March 30, 2010 8:31 PM GMT

lol... this is a lil off topic...
catzrcute
#23337414Wednesday, March 31, 2010 6:43 PM GMT

lolz.
MINARD777
#23449080Friday, April 02, 2010 12:33 PM GMT

haha. I'm sorry I'm slacking with this new series. If you run out of stuff to read I have old threads. here they are: http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=22025150 http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=14773087 http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=22025150 O.K. all of these threads are a few pages long but some have poems you have already seen... but i guarantee they will also have some other ones. Sometimes it won't let you go to the next page so if it is doing that just post a comment saying something like "cool" so it will let you go to the next page cuz it does that to me. I have to post to see the other pages.
catzrcute
#23489316Friday, April 02, 2010 9:39 PM GMT

I am VERY busy with other threads at the moment but I'll probably look at them some other time.
MINARD777
#23696322Monday, April 05, 2010 12:40 PM GMT

That's ok.
catzrcute
#23863644Wednesday, April 07, 2010 8:19 PM GMT

Hey I'm making a new song. I'm not very good at writing songs, so when it's done, it'll probably still stink.
MINARD777
#23904747Thursday, April 08, 2010 12:42 PM GMT

It is time for... the new series! -------------------------------------------- Refuge In The Dark -------------------------------------------- -[Refuge In The Dark]- The clock is ticking as we wait The bell shall ring at the darkest hour Our hearts are burning, full of hate Run towards the highest tower People taking refuge in the graves Dwelling in the pit within People selling themselves as slaves Giving in to hidden sin Every single broken warrior Looking for a refuge in the dark Waiting in the dark forever more On this journey we embark Off the edge of the highest mountain Searching for the crown Thirsting for an enchanted fountain We're on a path that's twisted down No hope at all Not a horror to compare Another time I fall Into the pit of my despair A search is pointless No end I find at all But when I am lifeless I can here the kingdom call "Come to the tower I will guide you with my ever burning flame The time has come for a brighter hour We have come to see the end of this game! Rise again from the burning ashes Fire never burning out Though broken down by a thousand lashes Never again will you be in doubt" Beyond this world of hate Is a land no man could create And I will come to see All the visions of eternity Life after death I take my final breath I will live forever In the kingdom of the light Never fading, ever To the end, for God I'll fight The king of kings Is king of all Ruler of all things Savior for the fall -[Glory]- Glory be to God forever The greatest name of all Never falling, never The one who lifts us when we fall Let all creation reflect your heart This gift of life is your work of art And when I fall I hear the father call: "Come to me Give me your all I'll set you free This is your call" Deserving of damnation You died to let me live You died to bring salvation LORD what can I give? Because of you And the gift you gave When there was nothing I could do You bled, my soul to save In every action Glory be to God above With much satisfaction I lift my hands in never fading love Glory be to the creator of all The one who died to save us from the fall God all-knowing Your mercies ever flowing -[Visions of The Insane]- Whisper in my ear Bringer of death You can feel the presence of fear In my every shaking breath Blood I cry in pain In this world of sheer confusion Clearly I'm insane Is there a way to escape every illusion? Illusions that I can't ignore Attempting to shut my eyes I try to slam the creaking door To cover up the lies Enemies of the kingdom of the LORD In the land of a lonely soul Raising high the fiery sword Taking strike in the night so dull Leave the living dead behind When the sun begins to rise From the shadows I am blind The terror in my eyes When the night comes Return I must in fear I can hear the gallow drums Why can't you see my tear? When I close my eyes I can see you even more Echoing in sorrow, cries I can see you at my door I try to sleep but there you are Why can't you leave my life? Rising from the pits of hell so far You hold the killing knife Trapped in the dream The horrors that find Though so vivid it may seem I know it's in my mind Endless grey Eyes of Nowhereland It is never day The key is never in my hand So come to me And set me free For you are the keeper of the key LORD of all I come and fall What is my call? I am but a useless soul Wandering the night so dull You lift me high And never let me die You shed your blood For a fallen nation Dripping into mud To bring me salvation -[Set Me Free]- Washed away from all that I have done Every sin erased The price is payed by God's only son My sinful heart replaced So set me free For all eternity When blood was shed A hope you made Announced as dead The price was payed Rested in the tomb behind a rock You resurrected in three days The guards, they fled in shock Forever he lives, forever and always He lives forever And he gives us breath Never fading, never Even in the moment of death So set me free For all eternity There is no greater gift to give Than to crush your son for me So that forever I might live Forever, for eternity So set me free For all eternity A sinner's blood could never pay the price For there is but one sacrifice Set me free In your hands Now I see Beyond wastelands So set me free For all eternity -[Killing Game]- Cast into a game with death The blood is on my hands Every single guilty breath Another lifeless body lands Forced to fight against all my desire Cast into the raging fire Either kill or die The people shout my name Every second passing by Is killing my soul in this pointless game Though my fame is great I'm a prisoner in this land Locked behind the prison gate Blood is dripping from my hand The killing game In which I am cast Though great in fame I pray, these times to pass The only thing that I live by Is what comes next, after I die Heaven ahead Far beyond the fire After I am dead I will rise on higher Free at last For death is past -[Night To Day]- [I- Darkness] Waiting on this endless winter night Waiting for the break of day, the light But darkness came Into my life He played his game He raised the knife Say goodbye to sunlit skies Say goodbye to times we've past Say goodbye to the world of lies Take a breath, it just might be your last When the night riders come They tear me down Beating hang man's drum Mockery's the crown In the black land Time is passing by The bleeding death hand Waiting for his wounds to dry To pull me into worlds unknown Making me a servant of the Devil's throne Winds so cold sing silently Songs of death they sing to me [II- Light] Taking a step beyond the nation Taking a step into a better land A leap I take from my damnation With all the burdens in my hand So cast my burdens on the bloody cross To refuse this opportunity would be my greatest loss Blood to live The life you gave to me Blood you give To give us all eternity What can I give to you? Nothing more! Nothing more! What is there left to do? In this war! In this war! Though night is dull And sometimes I fall I will give you my soul I will give you my all All that I have is a gift from above A gift you sent through your bleeding hands of love Oh your blood Cleansed my soul of sin Dripping into mud Creating the seed of life within Taking a step beyond the nation Taking a step into a better land No more can I see my damnation All that I've done is in your hands And every sin is cast away Forever in this brighter day -[To Heaven]- [God] Have faith in me And you will see That you are free Free from this age Within the cage I'll never let you whither away Forever in your heart I'll stay Fading never In my hands forever And when you die With you I'll fly To heaven we ride The world set aside Come to me And you will live for eternity Rise to the sky To heaven we fly [Sinner] I will give you everything But all I have is sin to bring My hands bring lust Temporary, fading into dust I turn around I'm heaven bound To heaven we ride Emotions I can't hide Gain I see in death Life I see in my final breath Rising to the sky I will rise, today I die
MINARD777
#23925927Thursday, April 08, 2010 8:58 PM GMT

So what do you think?
dog00
#23926591Thursday, April 08, 2010 9:07 PM GMT

Its amazing. I haven't quite finished them all. But its breathe taking seeing your abbility to ryme.
MINARD777
#23926687Thursday, April 08, 2010 9:08 PM GMT

Thanks man. Any personal favs?
Kingddd333
#23928139Thursday, April 08, 2010 9:26 PM GMT

[Plays instrumental rock] Lawl.
MINARD777
#23932496Thursday, April 08, 2010 10:22 PM GMT

Um... ok?
catzrcute
#23968262Friday, April 09, 2010 4:05 PM GMT

I haven't read it yet. I'm not even done reading all the poems on the first page.
MINARD777
#23973478Friday, April 09, 2010 6:31 PM GMT

Good thing page 2 has nothing but comments and updates and spam lol
dog00
#23974312Friday, April 09, 2010 6:50 PM GMT

@ MINARD, I really have to say that new one. -[Visions of The Insane]-.
MINARD777
#23974768Friday, April 09, 2010 6:59 PM GMT

Ya... I'd say so myself. BTW the new series is coming together really fast. Even though I already have 6 poems so far it will probably take a bit longer. I want at least 8 this time around, maybe 10+ even. And I will go over it again and again fixing stuff till it is publishable.
catzrcute
#24036620Saturday, April 10, 2010 5:22 PM GMT

Uh oh. I'm writing a bookk right now! Wow that was random. But I am! I can't think of a name for it and I don't care if any of you think you can help because only two people know what it's about and I don't plan on telling anyone else. GOD I hate how when I just mean to write a short messege it always turns out longer than I want it to be!!
MINARD777
#24044144Saturday, April 10, 2010 7:24 PM GMT

I wanna read it lol
catzrcute
#24122985Sunday, April 11, 2010 9:40 PM GMT

I just finished the first chapter. MAYBE I'll post it here later. Well, on a different thread, but you know what I mean.
MINARD777
#24156016Monday, April 12, 2010 3:58 PM GMT

ya. make sure to give me a link.
catzrcute
#24159072Monday, April 12, 2010 6:16 PM GMT

kk it won't be till a little later when i finish chapter 2, and they're long chapters than what i normally write.
catzrcute
#24297077Thursday, April 15, 2010 6:22 PM GMT

MINARD777
#25547950Monday, May 10, 2010 10:33 PM GMT

GUYS! NEW SERIES COMING SOON! Be prepared for... Farewell To Blackened Skies!