NDaisy111Join Date: 2010-02-21 Post Count: 204 |
Yikes O_O |
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catzrcuteJoin Date: 2008-09-18 Post Count: 22858 |
I know. O_O |
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MINARD777Join Date: 2008-07-25 Post Count: 2266 |
lol... this is a lil off topic... |
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catzrcuteJoin Date: 2008-09-18 Post Count: 22858 |
lolz. |
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MINARD777Join Date: 2008-07-25 Post Count: 2266 |
haha. I'm sorry I'm slacking with this new series. If you run out of stuff to read I have old threads. here they are:
http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=22025150
http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=14773087
http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=22025150
O.K. all of these threads are a few pages long but some have poems you have already seen... but i guarantee they will also have some other ones. Sometimes it won't let you go to the next page so if it is doing that just post a comment saying something like "cool" so it will let you go to the next page cuz it does that to me. I have to post to see the other pages. |
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catzrcuteJoin Date: 2008-09-18 Post Count: 22858 |
I am VERY busy with other threads at the moment but I'll probably look at them some other time. |
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MINARD777Join Date: 2008-07-25 Post Count: 2266 |
That's ok. |
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catzrcuteJoin Date: 2008-09-18 Post Count: 22858 |
Hey I'm making a new song. I'm not very good at writing songs, so when it's done, it'll probably still stink. |
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MINARD777Join Date: 2008-07-25 Post Count: 2266 |
It is time for... the new series!
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Refuge In The Dark
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-[Refuge In The Dark]-
The clock is ticking as we wait
The bell shall ring at the darkest hour
Our hearts are burning, full of hate
Run towards the highest tower
People taking refuge in the graves
Dwelling in the pit within
People selling themselves as slaves
Giving in to hidden sin
Every single broken warrior
Looking for a refuge in the dark
Waiting in the dark forever more
On this journey we embark
Off the edge of the highest mountain Searching for the crown
Thirsting for an enchanted fountain
We're on a path that's twisted down
No hope at all
Not a horror to compare
Another time I fall
Into the pit of my despair
A search is pointless
No end I find at all
But when I am lifeless
I can here the kingdom call
"Come to the tower
I will guide you with my ever burning flame
The time has come for a brighter hour
We have come to see the end of this game!
Rise again from the burning ashes
Fire never burning out
Though broken down by a thousand lashes
Never again will you be in doubt"
Beyond this world of hate
Is a land no man could create
And I will come to see
All the visions of eternity
Life after death
I take my final breath
I will live forever
In the kingdom of the light
Never fading, ever
To the end, for God I'll fight
The king of kings
Is king of all
Ruler of all things
Savior for the fall
-[Glory]-
Glory be to God forever
The greatest name of all
Never falling, never
The one who lifts us when we fall
Let all creation reflect your heart
This gift of life is your work of art
And when I fall
I hear the father call:
"Come to me
Give me your all
I'll set you free
This is your call"
Deserving of damnation
You died to let me live
You died to bring salvation
LORD what can I give?
Because of you
And the gift you gave
When there was nothing I could do
You bled, my soul to save
In every action
Glory be to God above
With much satisfaction
I lift my hands in never fading love
Glory be to the creator of all
The one who died to save us from the fall
God all-knowing
Your mercies ever flowing
-[Visions of The Insane]-
Whisper in my ear
Bringer of death
You can feel the presence of fear
In my every shaking breath
Blood I cry in pain
In this world of sheer confusion
Clearly I'm insane
Is there a way to escape every illusion?
Illusions that I can't ignore
Attempting to shut my eyes
I try to slam the creaking door
To cover up the lies
Enemies of the kingdom of the LORD
In the land of a lonely soul
Raising high the fiery sword
Taking strike in the night so dull
Leave the living dead behind
When the sun begins to rise
From the shadows I am blind
The terror in my eyes
When the night comes
Return I must in fear
I can hear the gallow drums
Why can't you see my tear?
When I close my eyes
I can see you even more
Echoing in sorrow, cries
I can see you at my door
I try to sleep but there you are
Why can't you leave my life?
Rising from the pits of hell so far
You hold the killing knife
Trapped in the dream
The horrors that find
Though so vivid it may seem
I know it's in my mind
Endless grey
Eyes of Nowhereland
It is never day
The key is never in my hand
So come to me
And set me free
For you are the keeper of the key
LORD of all
I come and fall
What is my call?
I am but a useless soul
Wandering the night so dull
You lift me high
And never let me die
You shed your blood
For a fallen nation
Dripping into mud
To bring me salvation
-[Set Me Free]-
Washed away from all that I have done
Every sin erased
The price is payed by God's only son
My sinful heart replaced
So set me free
For all eternity
When blood was shed
A hope you made
Announced as dead
The price was payed
Rested in the tomb behind a rock
You resurrected in three days
The guards, they fled in shock
Forever he lives, forever and always
He lives forever
And he gives us breath
Never fading, never
Even in the moment of death
So set me free
For all eternity
There is no greater gift to give
Than to crush your son for me
So that forever I might live
Forever, for eternity
So set me free
For all eternity
A sinner's blood could never pay the price
For there is but one sacrifice
Set me free
In your hands
Now I see
Beyond wastelands
So set me free
For all eternity
-[Killing Game]-
Cast into a game with death
The blood is on my hands
Every single guilty breath
Another lifeless body lands
Forced to fight against all my desire
Cast into the raging fire
Either kill or die
The people shout my name
Every second passing by
Is killing my soul in this pointless game
Though my fame is great
I'm a prisoner in this land
Locked behind the prison gate
Blood is dripping from my hand
The killing game
In which I am cast
Though great in fame
I pray, these times to pass
The only thing that I live by
Is what comes next, after I die
Heaven ahead
Far beyond the fire
After I am dead
I will rise on higher
Free at last
For death is past
-[Night To Day]-
[I- Darkness]
Waiting on this endless winter night
Waiting for the break of day, the light
But darkness came
Into my life
He played his game
He raised the knife
Say goodbye to sunlit skies
Say goodbye to times we've past
Say goodbye to the world of lies
Take a breath, it just might be your last
When the night riders come
They tear me down
Beating hang man's drum
Mockery's the crown
In the black land
Time is passing by
The bleeding death hand
Waiting for his wounds to dry
To pull me into worlds unknown
Making me a servant of the Devil's throne
Winds so cold sing silently
Songs of death they sing to me
[II- Light]
Taking a step beyond the nation
Taking a step into a better land
A leap I take from my damnation
With all the burdens in my hand
So cast my burdens on the bloody cross
To refuse this opportunity would be my greatest loss
Blood to live
The life you gave to me
Blood you give
To give us all eternity
What can I give to you?
Nothing more!
Nothing more!
What is there left to do?
In this war!
In this war!
Though night is dull
And sometimes I fall
I will give you my soul
I will give you my all
All that I have is a gift from above
A gift you sent through your bleeding hands of love
Oh your blood
Cleansed my soul of sin
Dripping into mud
Creating the seed of life within
Taking a step beyond the nation
Taking a step into a better land
No more can I see my damnation
All that I've done is in your hands
And every sin is cast away
Forever in this brighter day
-[To Heaven]-
[God]
Have faith in me
And you will see
That you are free
Free from this age
Within the cage
I'll never let you whither away
Forever in your heart I'll stay
Fading never
In my hands forever
And when you die
With you I'll fly
To heaven we ride
The world set aside
Come to me
And you will live for eternity
Rise to the sky
To heaven we fly
[Sinner]
I will give you everything
But all I have is sin to bring
My hands bring lust
Temporary, fading into dust
I turn around
I'm heaven bound
To heaven we ride
Emotions I can't hide
Gain I see in death
Life I see in my final breath
Rising to the sky
I will rise, today I die
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MINARD777Join Date: 2008-07-25 Post Count: 2266 |
So what do you think? |
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dog00Join Date: 2008-08-02 Post Count: 7872 |
Its amazing. I haven't quite finished them all. But its breathe taking seeing your abbility to ryme. |
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MINARD777Join Date: 2008-07-25 Post Count: 2266 |
Thanks man. Any personal favs? |
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[Plays instrumental rock]
Lawl. |
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MINARD777Join Date: 2008-07-25 Post Count: 2266 |
Um... ok? |
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catzrcuteJoin Date: 2008-09-18 Post Count: 22858 |
I haven't read it yet. I'm not even done reading all the poems on the first page. |
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MINARD777Join Date: 2008-07-25 Post Count: 2266 |
Good thing page 2 has nothing but comments and updates and spam lol |
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dog00Join Date: 2008-08-02 Post Count: 7872 |
@ MINARD,
I really have to say that new one. -[Visions of The Insane]-. |
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MINARD777Join Date: 2008-07-25 Post Count: 2266 |
Ya... I'd say so myself. BTW the new series is coming together really fast. Even though I already have 6 poems so far it will probably take a bit longer. I want at least 8 this time around, maybe 10+ even. And I will go over it again and again fixing stuff till it is publishable. |
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catzrcuteJoin Date: 2008-09-18 Post Count: 22858 |
Uh oh. I'm writing a bookk right now! Wow that was random. But I am! I can't think of a name for it and I don't care if any of you think you can help because only two people know what it's about and I don't plan on telling anyone else. GOD I hate how when I just mean to write a short messege it always turns out longer than I want it to be!! |
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MINARD777Join Date: 2008-07-25 Post Count: 2266 |
I wanna read it lol |
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catzrcuteJoin Date: 2008-09-18 Post Count: 22858 |
I just finished the first chapter. MAYBE I'll post it here later. Well, on a different thread, but you know what I mean. |
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MINARD777Join Date: 2008-07-25 Post Count: 2266 |
ya. make sure to give me a link. |
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catzrcuteJoin Date: 2008-09-18 Post Count: 22858 |
kk it won't be till a little later when i finish chapter 2, and they're long chapters than what i normally write. |
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catzrcuteJoin Date: 2008-09-18 Post Count: 22858 |
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MINARD777Join Date: 2008-07-25 Post Count: 2266 |
GUYS! NEW SERIES COMING SOON! Be prepared for... Farewell To Blackened Skies! |
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