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#224519960Friday, September 01, 2017 3:17 PM GMT

Here I have little game I made in like 1.30 hours maybe. https://www.roblox.com/games/1007328739/The-Memory It's just a small built I made. Give me some feedback, not on scale. Say what I should improve to the next time! Have a great day!!!

Dorkyhat99

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#224520293Friday, September 01, 2017 3:24 PM GMT

Decent place, maybe add a light to the lamp and a little more shrubbery? Just for the scenery's sake

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#224520565Friday, September 01, 2017 3:31 PM GMT

Shrubbery? What is that?

Dorkyhat99

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#224520640Friday, September 01, 2017 3:32 PM GMT

Shrubbery is a synonym for bushes and foilage like that.