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Lazar0o
#226114025Sunday, October 08, 2017 4:50 AM GMT

sup! i made my game so go play it and tell me what u think about it :D https://www.roblox.com/games/581816740/INFECTION-Beta
Lazar0o
#226114223Sunday, October 08, 2017 4:55 AM GMT

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jkspoons
#226115065Sunday, October 08, 2017 5:22 AM GMT

Pretty cool concept, but a lot could be added. Spawning into a game with no idea on what to do can be confusing. Maybe add an intermission or a random person selector for which they can be the infected and have to hunt other players. Also you have a lot of grammatical mistakes in your screen gui. You spelled through wrong and forgot to capitalize a lot of words which makes it look unprofessional, try enhancing your sentences and make them short and to the point. Overall it seems to be a good start, but could use more work
Lazar0o
#226145400Sunday, October 08, 2017 7:54 PM GMT

thank you so much I will fix all the errors ,don't worry .I was thinking about making a cinematic but I'm not that level at scripting yet :/, and thanks for telling me the errors on the GUI ,I'm trying to get better with my English and that stuff .

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