itZAKUJoin Date: 2016-04-02
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Possibly an entry for EBR, only thing is, i'm not liking it as it doesn't have much detail, due to it being the certain building genre it is I can't add much detail, unlike gothic buildings, so i'm most likely not going to use this, but feedback would still be very nice.
https://www.roblox.com/games/1141293756/unnamed
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cbsqueastJoin Date: 2011-04-16
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really nice, i suggest making the rain sound effect a little less loud.
also don't copy+paste that much, for the windows there's a lot of copy and paste
by the way, you don't have to follow the building genre you're doing exactly. you can add whatever you want as long as it looks good
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WoodFlareJoin Date: 2011-05-21
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super cool, reminds me of tot3m
with that style, keeping map design condensed is a great way to make it feel more detailed + functionality (light switches working, lights flickering, small things like that) are very good on an entry
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Just showcase a story with your building and no words and you'll get accepted. |
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itZAKUJoin Date: 2016-04-02
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Alright, thanks for the feedback i'll be sure to look out for those. |
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ScottiflyJoin Date: 2011-01-30
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It's a good quality build, it would just need to be bigger with a sense of story or emotion behind it.
If you continue with this or other another build to a completed state then submit it to me and I'll take a look to see if can be submitted to the other EBR members. |
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itZAKUJoin Date: 2016-04-02
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Yeah, definitely will do. I just started a couple days ago, so i haven't gotten to go in depth with the story. I'm planning on making more 3D graffiti art to tell a hidden story. |
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itZAKUJoin Date: 2016-04-02
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Bump :) |
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REKINJoin Date: 2008-08-08
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I love it! |
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REKINJoin Date: 2008-08-08
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The lo-fi works so well with this haha |
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REKINJoin Date: 2008-08-08
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How'd you make those decals glow? |
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itZAKUJoin Date: 2016-04-02
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That's because they're not decals, it's a mesh(.fbx), and glad you like it so far! |
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itZAKUJoin Date: 2016-04-02
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Bump. |
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I scripted it, just btw...lol
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itZAKUJoin Date: 2016-04-02
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You sound socially awkward |
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itZAKUJoin Date: 2016-04-02
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Dammit Baylor |
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KlovodJoin Date: 2012-07-10
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Looks good, fix the lighting.
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itZAKUJoin Date: 2016-04-02
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Lighting settings were disabled so I can build with ease. |
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Wich song is that?
Roblox Scripter Not For Hire Only On Special Occasions. |
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PLEASE TELL ME I'm ADDICTED TO THE SONG...
Roblox Scripter Not For Hire Only On Special Occasions. |
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itZAKUJoin Date: 2016-04-02
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tickle me pickle |
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I,would love to help with the showcase.
I don't even think it's possible i just wan't to be part of the project.
Not even in the description/credits.
It would be a pleasure if i could help too.
:D
Roblox Scripter Not For Hire Only On Special Occasions. |
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I,would understand that i can't be part of the showcase.
It was just a little idea.
To see how a pro-builder builds showcases.
Well,bye for now.
I would be happy to be part of it though.
Roblox Scripter Not For Hire Only On Special Occasions. |
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