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Skylanderqusa86
#227623771Friday, November 17, 2017 2:33 AM GMT

Please give me advise on improving this! Criticisms are welcomed too! https://web.roblox.com/games/1179420145/Adopt-A-Cute-Baby-Boy-or-Girl
Skylanderqusa86
#227624019Friday, November 17, 2017 2:44 AM GMT

Bump Not copied,completely done by me today!
TheShadowMessage
#227624049Friday, November 17, 2017 2:45 AM GMT

I like the direction you're going in. But consider that lakes and natural formations don't appear as a single square. Work with more complex, abstract shapes while retaining that jagged building style and it will look natural in no time.
Skylanderqusa86
#227624105Friday, November 17, 2017 2:46 AM GMT

sure.
TheBlankTurtle
#227624843Friday, November 17, 2017 3:08 AM GMT

well something you really need to look for in big objects are glitches. for example, alot of the rocks are phasing through each other. as fr the water quite a few bits are missing, try making all the water at once as to avoid having to remove some to make it even.
Skylanderqusa86
#227624971Friday, November 17, 2017 3:12 AM GMT

ok

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