Rebel562Join Date: 2009-05-05 Post Count: 6049 |
I did a story once about a group, and it was pretty fun. But then the group stopped doing what I was writing about, so I had to stop writing about it. I'm deciding to write another story. I'f you see one of my notes (ex. Note: this paragraph is not part of the story) then read it. It may be important.
Note: no, the "war" is not like two musicians in a sing-off or whatever, it is an actual Robloxian war, that was started by music.
Note: seeing as Roblox won't let me indent, I'm going to use a dash to signal the start of a new paragraph.
Chapter 1
- Lucas668 was trembling with excitement as the shiny black limo he was in pulled up to the grey brick building. As he stepped out of the limo, he looked at the sign over the door. It said "Rebel562 Records". Lucas668 couldn't stop trembling. He just couldn't believe that he had been deemed by Redmars12, one of Rebel562 Records's talent scouts, as one of the best guitar players Redmars12 had ever seen. Lucas668 walked to the door, and was greeted by the stone-hard stares of two guards.
- There were more guards inside, but Lucas668 didn't pay any attention to that, because as soon as he stepped into the building, Rebel562 himself walked up to him. They exchanged some idle conversation, but soon Rebel562 was leading Lucas668 to a recording room.
- As Lucas668 got into position behind the sound-proof glass wall, and Rebel562 sat down at the machinery, Rebel562 said "Now, we're not going to be actually recording this, Lucas668. We're just seeing how good you are. Feel free to start whenever you like."
- Lucas668 took a moment to choose a song, then started. He immediately knew that he his dicision in song had been the right one. He could feel the music as his fingers swiped over the strings.
- When Lucas668 was done, he asked "How was that?"
- Rebel562 just sat there thinking for a moment, and then responded. "Lucas668," He said, "I think you're going to be famous."
Note: for those of you that think this is a horrible story because there's no villian, the villian will be introduced in Chapter 3.
Note: Chapter 2 takes place several weeks later in the story.
Chapter 2
- The limo Lucas668 had rode in many weeks before now pulled up in front of the concert stadium, with Lucas668 in it. Lucas668 knew that the stadium was packed. This concert had sold out, even though it was Lucas668's first concert. Rebel562 Records had released a demo of his music, and it had become a hit.
- Lucas668 entered through the backstage entrance, which was guarded. all throughout backstage, there were various guards as well.
- When the concert was scheduled to begin, Lucas668 stepped onto the stage. He had his favorite guitar with him. Rebel562 Records had written a few songs for him to perform. He was playing the first one now.
- The crowd had silenced itself as Lucas668 started to play. There was no wild cheering. However, once Lucas668 was done with the first song,, it started up again. Again, the crowd was silenced when he started the second song.
- Lucas668 was loving it. He didn't even notice when a very angry Robloxian stormed out of the stadium.
Note: all of the opinions expressed in Chapter 3 are solely the views of the characters introduced.
Chapter 3
- When Ractal stormed out of the concert, he was already plotting. The only reason he had been in the concert was to see who the next star from Rebel562 Records was. Oh, how he loathed Rebel562 Records. They didn't know good guitar playing when they heard it. Sure, the new kid was good, but Ractal had been better. But they had rejected him. Ractal had been mad then, but now he was seething with anger at this new kid.
- But now, he had an army. Ever since he had been rejected, he had been going around finding all the rejects and traitors and dopplegangers of Robloxia, and he had recruited them all for his army. Yes, Ractal's Renegade was soon going to help Ractal get his revenge on Rebel562 Records. And they were going to start with Lucas668.
Note: Yes, I know what "renegade" means. I used it for a reason. |
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Chapter 4
- Lucas668's next music CD sold even faster than his demo after that first concert. His second concert sold out twice as fast, as well.
- During his second concert. Lucas668 played different songs, unaware that Baxter9, a Ractal's Renedgade sniper, was standing on the catwalk above him.
- With his sniper rifle, Baxter9 took aim at Lucas668, and fired. However, the bullet got jammed in the gun. Baxter9 was mad, and slammed the butt of his sniper rifle against the catwalk floor. This unjammed the bullet, and the gun fired, hitting a spotlight above him. The spotlight fell and landed on Baxter9, killing him.
- Both the crowd and Lucas668 had grown silent when they heard the gunshot. Now bodyguards rushed to the catwalk, along with Rebel562. As they got the remains of the spotlight off of Baxter9's dead body, Rebel562 read aloud the words on Baxter9's clan uniform. "Ractal's Renegade" he said, and fell silent. |
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Chapter 5
- There was whispered conversation all over the meeting room of Ractal's Renegade. It was jam-packed with RR soldiers. As ractal stepped up to the microphone, one of the soldiers asked "Is Lucas668 dead?" A hushed silence fell upon the meeting room.
- "No, unfortuantely. Baxter9 is dead." Ractal responded. The whispered conversation started up again.
- "But!" Ractal said, silencing the crowd, "I should have known a single soldier wasn't going to stop Rebel562 Records. Not when they have bodyguards, fans, and Rebel562 himself there. So, this time, we're going to try more soldiers, and try to get them when they're alone. Our spies have reported that Rebel562 is planning an out-of-town concert for Lucas668. We're going to ambush them while they're driving their, in a limo. No, who's good at driving?"
Chapter 6
- "Come on, Lucas668." Rebel562 said as they got into the limo. "This concert will be far away from Ractal's Renegade."
- "Good." Lucas668 said as the started driving. "What is Ractal's Renegade?"
- "I have no idea what Ractal's Renegade is. However, I do know who Ractal is." Rebel562 answered. "He tryed to audition for a demo by playing guitar. We rejected him. He was so mad, the guards had to carry him out of the building." Rebel562 got to say no more before they heard gun shots.
- They looked out the back window. A car was chasing them. Two Robloxians named Christian1357 and Blabmovies were leaning out the car windows, holding machine guns. Christian1357 fired his, and it went through the back window on the limousine. It hit the driver in the back of the head.
- Rebel562 quickly climbed into the driver's seat, pushing the dead driver into the passenger's seat. He started driving, and definitely exceeding the speed limit. The other car sped up to match their speed, and continued to pursue them.
- "Hold on!" Rebel562 said as he made a sharp left turn. The RR car behind them did the same.
- Rebel562 spotted a narrow alleyway up ahead to the left, barely wide enough for a single car. He made a turn that should have been impossible for a limousine, and safely came out the other side. The driver of their pursuers, however, turned his car a little too soon, and crashed into a building.
- Christian1357 sat up in the wreckage. He looked over and saw Blabmovies was dead, along with the driver. He couldn't pursue Rebel562 and Lucas668 anymore, because they were to far away and Christian1357 didn't have a vehice. Rebel562 Records had won this battle. |
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Wait, what? |
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Chapter 7
- Lucas668 was sleeping in the hotel he was staying at before his third concert. He was on the 13th floor, in room 37 of that floor. Room 13-37 had a window that overlooked the busy city street. It was also the perfect access point for an assassin, which was what it was currently being used for. A Ractal's Renegade assassin was standing on the outside window ledge, leaning through the window with a knife.
- The assassin bumped his head on the window top, which woke Lucas668 up. Just as the assassin was about to stab him, Lucas668's hand curled into a fist and shot up, knocking the assassin out of the window and falling to his death. The assassin landed on a car, setting off the alarm. Bodyguards, along with Rebel562, burst into the room.
- Lucas668 went over the situation. "Congratulations!" Rebel562 exclaimed.
- "What for?" Lucas668 said. "An assassin just tryed to kill me."
- "Yes, but you fought him off yourself." Rebel562 responded. "That's going to be important, seeing as they're targeting you."
- "How do you know they're targeting me? They could just as easily be targeting you." Lucas668 said.
- "Have you not noticed? Ractal's Renegade has attacked three times, and two of those times I haven't been there. But you have been. They're targeting you. And you know what that means?" Rebel562 aasked. Lucas668 shook his head. Rebel562 continued. "It means, we're going to have to teach you how to fight." |
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kdog5301Join Date: 2009-11-19 Post Count: 7700 |
FORGOT MEH IM MTER! |
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Rebel562Join Date: 2009-05-05 Post Count: 6049 |
OK, what? |
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Lucas_LuaJoin Date: 2008-06-18 Post Count: 7521 |
Epic story so far. |
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Rebel562Join Date: 2009-05-05 Post Count: 6049 |
Even though you're being hunted by an army of jealous outcasts? |
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Lucas_LuaJoin Date: 2008-06-18 Post Count: 7521 |
Yes, its very entertaining. Wait a minute... Is that why people always stalk me into games and don't talk??? |
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Rebel562Join Date: 2009-05-05 Post Count: 6049 |
I dunno. Still creating the next chapter. |
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Rebel562Join Date: 2009-05-05 Post Count: 6049 |
Chapter 8
- Rebel562 led Lucas668 through the military base. "Welcome to one of my forts." Rebel562 called back.
- "One of YOUR forts?" Lucas668 questioned.
- "Yes, this fort belongs to my military, the White Swarm Squadron." Rebel562 said. He stopped at a building, then went inside, along with one of the two soldiers escorting them. Rebel562 came out holding a pistol, and the soldier came out holding a punching bag.
- Rebel562 led Lucas668 out of the fort and into a wooded area. They came to a clearing. The guard put down the punching bag across the clearing from Lucas668. Rebel562 handed Lucas668 the gun. "Now, try shooting that bag." He said.
- Lucas668 fired six shots. Four of them hit the punching bag.
- "That's pretty good, considering your a beginner." Rebel562 said. Now, for the next part of your training-" Rebel562 was cut off by a man in a Ractal's Renegade uniform appearing from behind a tree.
- "Mind if I help out?" He asked. The man, a soldier Rebel562 disliked from the Robloxian Elite Forces, was named Miiil. He was grinning madly and was holding a machine gun.
- "Ah, this is perfect." Rebel562 said calmly. "Take him down."
- "What!?!" Lucas668 screeched. "He has a machine gun! I have a pistol!"
- "Oh, don't worry kid. I'll even let you take a shot before I start shooting. I doubt you'll actually hit me." Miiil said.
- Lucas668 held up his trembling hand, and pulled the trigger. Miiil fell, a hole in his chest.
- "Great work!" Rebel562 said. "Now how about we resume our training in the fort, where it's guarded."
- As they walked back to the fort, Christian1357 watched them from the top of a nearby tree. He picked up his radio. "Miiil is dead." He said into it. "Execute Plan D." |
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Rebel562Join Date: 2009-05-05 Post Count: 6049 |
I finally made Chapter 8! |
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Rebel562Join Date: 2009-05-05 Post Count: 6049 |
What? I'm only including people that are either my friends or my enemies, and then killing off my enemies. :) |
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GrolalaTop 50 PosterJoin Date: 2007-11-09 Post Count: 30599 |
If only I knew you.
Also, happy 2k posts. |
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Rebel562Join Date: 2009-05-05 Post Count: 6049 |
Thanks, 4 more until 2010! |
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cheese678Join Date: 2008-07-02 Post Count: 5082 |
Even though I don't know who the heck you are, put me in your story. |
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Rebel562Join Date: 2009-05-05 Post Count: 6049 |
OK. I'll find a place for you. My story must be good if so many people want to be in it. |
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GrolalaTop 50 PosterJoin Date: 2007-11-09 Post Count: 30599 |
Everyone wants to be in a story, it makes you feel a part of something. |
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Rebel562Join Date: 2009-05-05 Post Count: 6049 |
Then why don't they make their own stories and put themselves in it? |
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cheese678Join Date: 2008-07-02 Post Count: 5082 |
Wut. |
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Rebel562Join Date: 2009-05-05 Post Count: 6049 |
Eh well, back with the story. Seeing as it's getting popular, let's do something special. Create-a-Chapter! I'm allowing you fans to create your own Chapter 9 to this story, then send it to me in a PM! The one that I think best fits the story will be made the official Chapter 9! You're allowed to include Rebel562, Lucas668 yourself, and any soldiers, bodyguards, fans, or enemies you want, as long as you don't give a name to anyone but yourself. Remember, if you post your chapter on this thread, it will not get accepted. Send your entries to me in a PM. Thanks! |
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Rebel562Join Date: 2009-05-05 Post Count: 6049 |
PM me your entries! |
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