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You are normal kids/teens minding your own buisness, you step through a wardrobe and hope to find narnia. But instead you find the Dark World, filled with evil shadows. Curiously, you step into it, and then something very strange happens...
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N.ame: Xilon
@ge: 14
Gender:Male
Weapon : Many
Bio: Born in the dark world, good shadow.
From: Dark world
Appearence: Black overcoat, black jeans, black eyes, black hair, red shirt. Hair comes over one eye. Wears black gloves. |
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TAKER38Join Date: 2008-04-08
Post Count: 15210 |
(Grammar please.) |
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(Oh, I used a comma where there should be a period. Oops.) |
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(Hey, guess what! I'm plotting a storyline! So, I can't come in until you get to the Dark Platue! So, get going! Come on!)
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TAKER38Join Date: 2008-04-08
Post Count: 15210 |
(I misread it somewhat, you did mispell a few words, you were trying, I appluad you for trying.) |
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(Alright, what did I mis-spell? Because I can't fix it unless I start COMPLETELY over.) |
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TAKER38Join Date: 2008-04-08
Post Count: 15210 |
(You mispelled appearance and business, you also forgot to capitalize Narnia.) |
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N.Ame: Ashley
@GE: 14
Gender:female
Weapon: pocket kni.fe and Swiss army
Bio: liv.ed whole lif.e alone with a large piece of cheese
From: Australia
Appearance: Bleach blond hair over the shoulder, warm blue eyes covered by contacts, a cheap transformers tee shirt that is practically see-through with holes on the bottom and top, ripped jeans that only cover half of her legs, the other bare, black hiking boots that are 2 ye.ars old, but you cant tell at all. No matter where she is, she always has her locket her mother gave to her as a chi.ld. If she takes it off ever, she will be cursed. Literally, her mother was a witch. And finally she always has her nails colored black. :) |
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ExpheusJoin Date: 2008-01-08
Post Count: 2413 |
N.ame: New Born
@ge: 1000+
Gender: Male
Weapon: Immortality
Bio: God's first creation was The New Born a creature more than a human. Emotionless, it doesn't have what humans have so therefore no love, no heart and no soul. God felt ashamed to make such a monster almost as powerful as him, so he banished the first born from existence aka The Dark World, therefore he couldn't harm anything that god ever loved. The Firstborn has no reason to fight because of it's Immortality but it does like to follow and lead enemies into traps laid by other monsters. The NewBorn also doesn't age.
From: Non Existence-Dark World
Appearence: A plain grey shadow in the form of a small boy. Grey mist comes from below the Newborn. |
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(I didn't capitalize Narnia because it was just a joke. The other one must have been a typo, and Buisness is faster than buisiness. And yes, I am aware that I used a capitalization where there shouldn't be one. I jUsT wAnTeD tO.) |
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(Okay, so we have two poeple. Ashley, you now find a wardrobe and try to escape to Narnia. Happy? I capitalized it that time.) |
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(And the roleplaying starts... NOW!) |
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(Hmm. And everyone magically left.) |
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(and m i in the wardrobe or just found it?) |
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(It's okay, just please start roleplaying so people won't be intimidated to join.) |
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ExpheusJoin Date: 2008-01-08
Post Count: 2413 |
-Firstborn-
The Firstborn was walking along a mountain side until he reached a point where the mountain ended. He walked off the mountain and evaporated into thin air and his black mist slowly disappeared. |
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(LordOfGooh, you have just found the wardrobe. You can run inside of it screaming "NARNIA!!!!!!" or just think about it and go in. |
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(OK)
I walk into a room, slamming the door behind me. I lean against the shut door, eyes closed sliding down it. Once i reach the ground i open my eyes. I see a beautiful wardrobe with embroidery and fine art on it. I stand up and walk over to it. I look at it in awe as i touch it. I open the door, chuckling thinking it is Narnia inside. I step inside and push the coats away from my view. I hear the door slam shut and I turn around. I rush back to the door to open it. I felt terrifyingly scared. I jiggled on the doorknob but it would not budge. I started to scream for help, but i realized i closed and locked the door to this room. So i screamed louder for help. OI was grabbed by something in the world behind me as it dragged me to see what the land looked like. To m, it looked like, He.ll. |
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(Ok, good. I like it. Darkness wraps around you and pulls you in.) |
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(And, for future referance, I think it lets you say hell. Yup. It does.) |
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