46eyre73nJoin Date: 2008-09-01
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A happy couple,just married,walked down a path in the park holding hands late at night.A knife flew across the field,killing the husband.The woman scream,crying.Another knife flew and hit her in the neck.She died moments later.The police arrived later."Another murder.This is awful."One of the detectives said.I grinned menacingly from the bushes.My work,so beautifal.It had caused so many tears.I walked away slowly,meeting Ashley in the forest."More tears,More police.We need a new city.Soon."She hopped down and walked in step with me.We were an odd pair.A young woman with bright brown hair and green eyes with tanned skin and black clothes,then a young man with silver hair and eyes and black clothes.Thats Me.Im Acuroe Raeku,And Im a murderer. |
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46eyre73nJoin Date: 2008-09-01
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(above post:Screamed*)
Im guessing this was rejected? |
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46eyre73nJoin Date: 2008-09-01
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I stopped in town,looking around before entering the mini-mart.Ashley nudged me."Where we gonna go?I mean we live in Newyork.Where CAN we go?"She asked,sounding afraid.I grabbed a liter of soda water and started drinking it inside the store.I whiped my mouth and dropped the empty bottle a few seconds later."Virginia.I gotta cousin.He'll house us for awhile until he gets busted again.Get some stuff in your coat and pockets and lets go."I seperated from her,going into a secluded part of the store and stealing some food.I met her outside.We walked home and dumped our loot into bags."Pack your crap and meet me at the bus station."I said.I packed my bag and carried my food there,waiting for her. |
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46eyre73nJoin Date: 2008-09-01
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(-_-)
Ashley arrive just intime for the bus.We got on and sat in the back.We had a long bus ride.I sighed and leaned back against the broken seat.She nudged me again."What if we get caught?"She asked."We wont."I said,my eyes closed.She sighed and leaned against the window.After a few hours we got off to stay at a hotel.We got a room with two beds.We were siblings and found it kind of weird to share a bed.I sat up,awake.Ashley did have a point,What if we did get caught?I'd get death and she'd get prison.She was too fragile for that.I fell asleep with worries on my mind. |
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46eyre73nJoin Date: 2008-09-01
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I awoke with a thump as I hit the floor.I had rolled off the bed.I got up and showered and ordered room service.I woke ashley up so she could get ready.The food arrived while she was in the shower.I ate mine and put the plate on the counter.Ashley ate in a hurry and we grabbed our bags and split,taking some 'fr.ee' towels with us.We got on another bus.Then we had to get on a plane.Then take a Ta.xi to My cousins house.Easy enough.I settled in on the seat,tired from lack of sleep.Ashley on the other hand was leading the whole bus in The fros.ted fla.kes Chant thing.I moa.ned and smashed my head into the window.This was going to be a long bus ride. |
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46eyre73nJoin Date: 2008-09-01
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(My story is Dieing 3:)
I sighed when the song was over.The bus lurched to a stop.I hopped off and walked into the airport.Going through security quickly we boarded the plane.Ashley had to be slightly sedated.She was afraid of planes.The plane took off and I got out my I-pod,Listening to music to pass the time.Ashley Helped a family keep control of their many children by playing with them.I smirked.She was so soft.I needed to get her off the criminal trail.I looked out the window.It was going to storm.I pulled Ashley into her seat and gave her another sedative."Take it,its going to rain."She swallowed it and fell asleep later.I buckled her up and leaned her chair back.I did the same,planning to sleep through the storm. |
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IT'S ALIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIVE! |
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46eyre73nJoin Date: 2008-09-01
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(HOHOHOHOHO!)
I woke up when the plane landed.I nudged Ashley As i pushed through the crowd,leaving the plane with a few new wallets.I left the airport and waited for Ashley.We climbed in the cab.I gave the guy the adress and he drove.I spoke with Ashley as we went."Play it cool,dont look,talk,breathe,think about the dealers when we get there.Just follow me to the room."She nodded.We drove for a bit longer before her stopped and we got out.I kicked open the door to my cousins house and bassicly dragged Ashley behind me,past a group of guys,down the hall and into our room.
(I gtg) |
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Move in! Set up camp! We could be here for awhile. |
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46eyre73nJoin Date: 2008-09-01
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(Gewd morning)
I looked at Ashley."Stay in here until they leave.They all have anger issues and guns and its not a good thing to be in there when they combine them."I chuckled.I sat down on the bed and ate some of the food we got in newyork.It was still ok.I looked at Ashley.She looked sad and torn.I sighed."I'll get you to mom and dad.They dont know your doing this so they'll take you in."She nodded,looking quiet happy.I smirked and waited for the guys to leave.After awhile they shoved off and I got a chance to talk to my cousin,Crane.Tall Blonde haired dude with dark brown eyes.Mostly heaving grey clothing.I nodded at him."How you been doing?"I asked him.He shrugged."So So I guess.How's Ashley?"He asked in return."Upset."I said,to the point.He nodded."Ok.You guys have to be on the move again soon.You can stay for about..Three days maybe."I nodded,walking back to the room. |
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46eyre73nJoin Date: 2008-09-01
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Thanks.You can Add a member if you'd like
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I Walked out a bit later.My cousin always had a job for me."Crane,who do i get to torture while im here?".I yelled across the house.He walked into the main room and handed me a paper."This guy.Take my car to his adress,kidnap him and torture him here."He said."Will do."I gave a quick salute and was off to beat a man with a wife and kids.I snuck into his house.The kids werent home.Knocking the wife out quickly I ran up the stairs.The man was at him computer.I grabbed him from behind and knocked him out with a loud struggle.I cursed under my breathe and threw him in a bag.I ran out of the house,barely being a block away before the police arrived at the house.I wiped my forehead and continued driving.Arriving at my cousins house I took the man out of the bag and tied him to a chair.I went to go get Crane's supplies for torture.What a twisted family.. |
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CoolNoahJoin Date: 2008-10-04
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(A murderer story how original! :D)
Name: James Stars
A.ge: 28
Gender: Male
Appearance: My Robloxian
Raeku Family?: No
Personality: Secretive and Gun-Trigger Happy
Weapons: Glock 18, Pepper Spray, and Shotgun
Criminal?: No
Bio: Undercover cop. 'Nuff Said.
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46eyre73nJoin Date: 2008-09-01
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(Accepted)
I grabbed the bag and walked in the room.The man had just woken up.He was begging for his life.I smirked and cut his arm open with an old knife.I took some rock salt out of the bag and put it in the wound.He screamed in pain."Did that hurt?So sorry.You should pay next time."I pulled out a gun and shot him in the leg.I shoved a finger in the new wound and twisted it.The man started crying.After a few more minutes of torture I knocked him out again and put him in my car.I dumped him at an empty gas station and drove back home.Little did I know The This man would go to Hire James Star.Me and him had some history.And I hated him.He wouldnt get me again.. |
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CoolNoahJoin Date: 2008-10-04
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(YAY! Thank you for including me I will now go RP so more.) |
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46eyre73nJoin Date: 2008-09-01
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I arrived back at my cousins house to find a shoot-out going on.I helped out until the people ran away.I got out of the car."Go."Crane said."What?"I asked,surprised."Go now.The cops will show up soon and you and Ashley need to go."He threw my bags into the car,along with Ashley and her bags.I hopped in and drove off to a train station.We were taking a lot of different methods and transportation on this run away.I looked at Ashley briefly while driving.She looked upset.I shook my head and kept driving.Once i got her home She'd be safe.I sighed and sped up.I wanted to get her there quickly.I stopped at the train station and rushed her onto the train.Once it started i handed her a phone."Whats this for?"She asked."Call mom and dad.Tell them to pick you up at the train station."I told her coldly.She looked hurt,but obeyed.Meanwhile James Star was arresting Crane."You are under Arrest for the murder of Three people,running from the police,Dealing drugs and hiding fugitives."He said.Crane fought but was shoved into the car.He looked angry,And since he was so tall his head was pushed against the ceiling of the car.Crane Sighed.He guessed everyone was having a bad day. |
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CoolNoahJoin Date: 2008-10-04
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(Great Job so far but do you think you could space after commas? Because Its hard to read it but other wise awesome so far!) |
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( Good story just remeber spaces between Full stops and such, Besides that it is a good story) |
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46eyre73nJoin Date: 2008-09-01
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(Thanks :3)
I Took the phone from Ashley when she finished her call and threw it out the window. I didnt want the to find me. Cellphone signals were easy to track. The train came to a stop, but it wasnt ours. I stayed in my seat. Ashley went to the dining cart to get something to eat. In a few states over James was focused on finding the Notorius criminal,Acuroe. He had been known to run and change his name. We dont even know his real name. Crane Wasnt saying a word, And Acuroe was careful not to leave DNA. James ran a hand through his hair. "It doesnt make sense. How can he hide for so long?" He pulled his gun out of his pocket and shot at a bottle of water. That always made him feel better. Crane, however, did not feel any better. He was going to jail. For a LOONG time. His buddies looked at him. He sighed."I cant help you anymore. It aint like Acuroe's gonna come to our rescue. He's got other things to focus on." He lay on the bench in the holding cell, feeling abandoned for the millionth time. |
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CoolNoahJoin Date: 2008-10-04
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(Just keeping your sprits up :D |
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46eyre73nJoin Date: 2008-09-01
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(x3)
I leaned against my seat. A little while later Ashley came back.She handed me a bag of rolls and chicken. I nodded and dug it. I threw the bag out the window also. Ashley glared at me for littering. I waved her off. When our stop came I snuck out behind her and watched her visit with my parents. I took a taxi to a hotel before they noticed me. I lay on the bed in my room, thinking deeply. Meanwhile James had sent Crane off to federal prison and continued searching for me. He had picked up my trail and followed my to Nevada. He knew I could pick up any Face, Name, Or age I wanted here. He had to find me before I found a plastic surgeon. |
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