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macblack20
#37854985Tuesday, November 30, 2010 12:30 AM GMT

The Story of Survival :Chapter 1 ‘The Breakout’ -Prologue- READ TO UNDERSTAND THE BACKGROUND First things first, this is NOT a ‘Robloxian Story’ The Characters are a real people. (Fiction) wise. So don’t imagine this as Robloxian Characters, There will be real places, but this is in the future, about 2034, 5 Teenagers, (Joe (the person who is the main character), Will, Marcus, Abbey, and Danny.) All Seventeen. This is the story of their survival. Also Don’t expect the City Maps etc. geographically are legitimately correct. As this IS 2034, But most will be close to geographically correct. Oh the whole book will be written in ‘Acting Script’ Chapter 1: ‘The Breakout’ Location: Albany, New York, Union Public School, Basketball Gym 5:45 P.M. I knew this was coming, Just not when, I also didn’t think it would happen during my Basketball Championship Game. Just My luck. I quickly see the stands obliterated--almost--with the undead, I see Abbey’s parents, they sadly don’t notice the to undead maul them, I hope Abbey Didn’t see it. I Don’t know about my parents. Like I would care after everything they have done to me. There had been Class 1 Outbreak for about the last two Weeks, This morning I knew it hit Class 2, So me and the buds decided if it got worse it would be time to scram. The Outbreak at the School was really unexpected, even for me. First One, then two, then three, all scramble--limping--out of the hallway that leads to the Cafeteria. The Place is in Total Chaos, I quickly am able to locate Abbey, We run out the side of the building, get onto our bikes and race to the rendezvous, Which is my house, Will and Marcus are close behind and Danny knows where to go. Poor Abbey, Being a cheerleader she has to be freezing out here as we race home, All make it there without problems, the five are in the house, I’m quickly searching for the key to our basement, Joe: Ah, There it is. Will: Jeez, Clean your room sometime, will you? Danny: Doesn’t matter now. I quickly open up the basement to reveal to all of my friends of the base. I took my college money and blew it, Well Not exactly, as all this is very useful to us now. The room is full of solar-powered Computer Monitors, Televisions, Which I have several news Channels on, and a wall of weapons. We have our packs already packed with ammo, flares, food, water, and some other stuff I don’t want to mention, Including a tent and matches. And water Purifiers, We our combat knives already packed in the heavy-duty bag. So all is ready, I grab a Beretta(As we all do, very good neutralizers) I finish by grabbing a crossbow, Which I have hunted with a since I was Thirteen, And two sheets of arrows, holding 15 each, Abbey grabs the .22 and a machete, The others finger around with the rifles and swords I have out. We all change into the clothes that I had them bring about a month ago, Warm Tight Jeans, Long sleeved Under Armor, A tight Fitting Jacket. And a hiking boots. Abbey: It’s a shame we have to leave the good ole’ place behind. Danny: Well, We might be able to make it back-- I quickly cut in. Joe: There is no coming back. I lock the place up again, keeping the key in my pack. We head outside, even from here, you can hear the screams, the gunfire, It’s too late, too many have risen, We mount onto our Off-road bikes and head off, Thank God I packed the maps of nearby states in my bag. Joe: Ok guys, Head Southwest, I don’t want to go through New York, Marcus: Fine with me, Let’s hit the Gun store owned by Mikey Palmetto, it’s on the way out of town. They head off without further conversation, Reaching The City Limits in less than a hour. Marcus: Here it is. Mikey, Who owns the shop was mauled during the basketball game. Abbey: Stupid English Government, It seems like the sci-fi books like my dad use to read are all coming true. Joe: Oh, Great. End of Chapter 1. The Story of Survival was written by Macblack20, Reply, Sorry for any typos, fragments, etc.
Panduz
#38564003Sunday, December 12, 2010 1:23 PM GMT

WHOA!!! My Heart was racing, Sweat was dripping. That was intense man! It felt like I was reading a James Patterson!!! Epic!!! Keep it up! This should really become a real book!
dinogreen
#38570397Sunday, December 12, 2010 3:47 PM GMT

It looks good.

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