LeiagirlJoin Date: 2008-11-02
Post Count: 419 |
Thanks for the good comments! |
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LeiagirlJoin Date: 2008-11-02
Post Count: 419 |
My thread is dying.... |
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I do not think that "Happiness" is the best song out of all of these. The later songs are much better. |
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Lonely
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If i had a wish,
I would want it to come true,
I would wish for a guy
like you, but I can't,
I'm just bad,
I'm so sad .... I cant
stop myself
from cryin'
CHORUS
I'm Lonely, I can't help myself,
this is how I feel, this is totlally
real, I can't help it,
I can't help it, I'm just so Lonely.
I'm left last, I'm left alone, No friends,
no help just meself, My shadow left me,
My dark side is now gray, my happy side is gone,
I will not listen unless they help me soon ...
So please stop askin how i'm feelin'
CHORUS X2
I'm so lonely don't even ask how,
I know why, I just don't wanna talk, just go,
and start to walk ....
-M0 (This is how I REALLY feel) |
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Nice song. I don't like that kind of music, but it's good if you like that kind of stuff. Im more of an AC/DC fan myself. |
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So far Leiagirl is winning "Who is the most popular songwriter in ROBLOX" |
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birksJoin Date: 2008-07-25
Post Count: 2542 |
i dont like alternative but nice creativity |
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KewlGuy3Join Date: 2009-04-20
Post Count: 3830 |
i am not cr@p compared im nothing! |
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Ichigo507Join Date: 2009-06-02
Post Count: 1293 |
Better than I could do in a MILLION years.I like the first one better then the second one though.I like them.(If alexisanelstupido come to this thread,say I was hacked by somebody andd I didint say that stuffy,ok?) |
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JAXONCJoin Date: 2008-10-01
Post Count: 1441 |
Why would I laugh? I have to give you loads of respect, at the aspect of me not being able to write any good lyrics any time soon. lol. Good Job. Although I have never actually tried to write lyrics, I am scared too. I like to make up guitar riffs and progressions, but can't much sing. |
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Hmm, no bad song.really good songs :) I like your songs, and anyone who doesnt like the songs just dont understand talent...Anyways, if you ever sighned up for a writing contest or Song Writing Contest, u'd surely win. Im not much of a writer, Im taking up writing classes in Junior High this year,im practicing writing poems though. :D |
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josh747Join Date: 2008-07-14
Post Count: 1726 |
If somebody laughed they are complete jerks. |
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josh747Join Date: 2008-07-14
Post Count: 1726 |
If somebody laughed they are complete jerks. |
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dats a good voice the words just trap me in the song its very good u should be in a band ^^
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( l l )>>O i give u cookie for wonderful performance
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wweguy64Join Date: 2008-10-10
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You can write songs,but what you need now is a band to play music to go with it. |
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ZjechyJoin Date: 2008-08-18
Post Count: 55 |
my response to your songs? WOAH. you're AMAZING!!!! |
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ZjechyJoin Date: 2008-08-18
Post Count: 55 |
song:stay
artist:Zjechy
oh no, girl
you're my entire world
if you walk out that door
i won't be the same
anymore!!
(chorus)
please stay please stay!!
don't go away
don't go away
no way no way!!
please stay please stay!!
don't go away
don't go away
you gotta stay you gotta stay!!
girl, you took my heart away
you took it away
took away took away!!
and girl!!
if you leave now
i don't know how
i'll stay okay stay okay!!
(chorus)
pleeeeaaaase doooooon't
leave meeeee!!!
pleeeeaaaase doooon't
leave meeeee!!
yeah!!!
(chorus)
yeah!!
(chorus)
yeah!!
(song ends)
i hope you liked my song |
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ZjechyJoin Date: 2008-08-18
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-directions for clueless people- in the lines that just say chorus, the chorus goes there. the chorus is the set of lines with the word chorus directly above them |
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wolf576Join Date: 2009-04-06
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ya its ok.. |
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♫Record and post to YouTube♫ Really good! P.S I'm a guy not girl k? |
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picasoJoin Date: 2008-06-27
Post Count: 1874 |
Verse 1
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1 for the money
2 for the show
3 for my homies
thats stuck behind that door
locked up.
for dumb crap
as a matter a fact
forget what i said
lets leave it like that
Chorus
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this is the joke song.
i bet its phat
its the joke song
omg theres a rat XD |
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picasoJoin Date: 2008-06-27
Post Count: 1874 |
This is roblox.
For My Real Rymes That Are Fresh P.M Me |
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picasoJoin Date: 2008-06-27
Post Count: 1874 |
Heres a sample:
The Death Of Hip Hop
Is comin alive
monin and gronin
so keep so kids
inside.
lock ur doors
shut the lights
the storm is comin
and its bringin fright.
my sample entry. |
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zone553Join Date: 2008-08-22
Post Count: 678 |
why would anyone laugh |
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