I have a song... please dont laugh.

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#18242184Wednesday, December 23, 2009 12:17 AM GMT

good flow.

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#18242690Wednesday, December 23, 2009 12:23 AM GMT

Hold On By: Miley01804 About: Well, this is my FIRST love song, so wish me luck *Finish later* ________________ When you smile, I smile, When we talk, I want to stay, I don't wanna go away, from you, It just so hard to do, becasue You love me too... Just let me love you more and more, You are alway no bore, I wanna hold on forever, don't give me up, I want to stay holding on, To you, and keep me close, don't push me away, I wanna hold on, All day...

tee3000

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#18248445Wednesday, December 23, 2009 1:52 AM GMT

dude it is ice man i mean ice

miley01804

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#18275957Wednesday, December 23, 2009 3:17 PM GMT

"Liar" By: Miley01804 Dec. 10th 2009 __________________ I hear footsteps beind me, I thought you were quitting, But it wasn't the right fittin' Don't you dare lie to me, I know it will never be, So give up what you have been hiddin'. Oh, you just did a sin. You are just a plain ol' liar, Tring not you loose, Oh Liar, it's you, You put yourself on fire, Just to commit, You Lair, You did it, you did to me, You did it to him, just go ahead and confess, you Lair. You're pulling me away, Just don't talk to me today, I'm busy fixing your case, Before we talk face to face. C'mon and tell me the truth even though I know oyu won't this is why.... You are just a plain ol' liar, Tring not you loose, Oh Liar, it's you, You put yourself on fire, Just to commit, You Lair, You did it, you did to me, You did it to him, just go ahead and confess, you Lair. Forget I even said it, Liar, You just did it, Liar, C'mon, C'mon, c'mon You Liar... You are just a plain ol' liar, Tring not you loose, Oh Liar, it's you, You put yourself on fire, Just to commit, You Lair, You did it, you did to me, You did it to him, just go ahead and confess, you Lair. Why didn't you tell me at first, you could've just told me, so now I'm calling you a You are just a plain ol' liar, Tring not you loose, Oh Liar, it's you, You put yourself on fire, Just to commit, You Lair, You did it, you did to me, You did it to him, just go ahead and confess, you Lair. Liar.... -M0 *Note: Didn't spend much time on this.*

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#18276055Wednesday, December 23, 2009 3:19 PM GMT

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#18276814Wednesday, December 23, 2009 3:33 PM GMT

I can't escape this hell.... So many times i've tried.... But i'm still caged inside... Somebody get me through this nightmare I can't (control myself) So what if you can see the darkest side of me? No one will ever change this animal I have become Help me believe it's not the real me Somebody help me tame this animal (This animal, this animal) I can't escape myself (I can't escape myself) So many times i've lied (So many times i've lied) But there's still rage inside Somebody get me through this nightmare I can't (control myself) So what if you can see the darkest side of me? No one will ever change this animal I have become Help me believe it's not the real me Somebody help me tame this animal I have become Help me believe it's not the real me Somebody help me tame this animal Somebody help me through this nightmare I can't (control myself) Somebody wake me from this nightmare I can't escape this hell (This animal, this animal, this animal, this animal, this animal, this animal, this animal) So what if you can see the darkest side of me? No one will ever change this animal I have become Help me believe it's not the real me Somebody help me tame this animal I have become Help me believe it's not the real me Somebody help me tame this animal (This animal I have become)

sebastiendog

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Padrona

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#18282409Wednesday, December 23, 2009 5:14 PM GMT

Picture Perfect - (To be finished, I'm just a bit boreda nd I don't want that to rub off on my song) Love comes, love goes. My broken heart starts to show, Breathe in, breathe out; Awake, but can't hear a sound. Months pass, time flies, Why can't my love for you pass by? Wait. Not gonna give up, I'm not gonna give in. I'm gonna keep fightin', Until this feeling leaves me, We'll be picture perfect, Don't you see?

fugato

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#18349344Thursday, December 24, 2009 4:42 PM GMT

not my style of songwrtiting,im into AC/DC and GreenDay and im in a band called:Molotov good song thow

miley01805

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#18455633Saturday, December 26, 2009 10:33 PM GMT

(It's miley01804. This is my alt. I got banned. But i'll be back on my old account tomorrow.) "Bad Girl" _______________________ You just made me mad, You were acting crazy, and then super lazy, Make up your mind, Or you'll pay a big fine, So be quiet and move, I guess, I got the groove, in the Banland. I'm a Bad Girl, I don't what I'm supposed to, I don't care, just relax, don't get on my nerves, I get mad, and then youll be sad, In the hospital, so be careful, I'm a Bad Girl. I'm stuck here for a day, I really want to go away, Just don't go bein' mean, Or you'll be cream, So I won't go nice, Becuz I aint that fool, I'm cool just the way I am... I'm a Bad Girl, I don't what I'm supposed to, I don't care, just relax, don't get on my nerves, I get mad, and then youll be sad, In the hospital, so be careful, I'm a Bad Girl. I like to do what I want, If you do something bad It really ain't so sad, I rather be somewhere, then be stuck here, nowhere. C'mon I'm stuck here, This ain't my biggest fear, I know how to do it, And I will do it.. So... I'm a Bad Girl, I don't what I'm supposed to, I don't care, just relax, don't get on my nerves, I get mad, and then youll be sad, In the hospital, so be careful, I'm a Bad Girl. Bad girl (Bad girl) Bad girl. -Miley01804 aka miley01805

Blizzard1699

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#18693354Wednesday, December 30, 2009 4:48 PM GMT

You are amazing Leia

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#18713739Wednesday, December 30, 2009 9:14 PM GMT

Wow, it's actually good :P

MINARD777

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#18721369Wednesday, December 30, 2009 10:43 PM GMT

bad girl is NOT your best.

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#18790533Thursday, December 31, 2009 8:23 PM GMT

I'm gonna start a band called sacred hearts. but it plays rock music.

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#18796071Thursday, December 31, 2009 9:33 PM GMT

make sure no one makes a parody of that song

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#18801097Thursday, December 31, 2009 10:38 PM GMT

You could be famous.

miley01804

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#18866138Friday, January 01, 2010 7:19 PM GMT

If I Say No - A guy wants to get back together. Read it and you'll understand. ----------------------------------- Finally, everything's in place, But it ended when I saw your face, You were a big disgrace, Since I tohught it was over, But I didn't have my four-leaf clover. So when you came to me, I said, 'Chill, it won't be.' Well he said, 'Too bad, I wanna get back together, I thought this was good weather, Should we go for a walk?' I still couldn't talk, I don't want to, just leave Let me think about it, And don't make a fit, If I say no. I didn't understand, When you reaached for my hand, But I pushed him away, I don't wanna see you today, I wanna have my own way, Just go, and I'll think about it, When he left, I thought about him acting like a baby, never ever, and maybe, will I get back together, Again... Well he said, 'Too bad, I wanna get back together, I thought this was good weather, Should we go for a walk?' I still couldn't talk, I don't want to, just leave Let me think about it, And don't make a fit, If I say no. When you came tomorrow, And you asked me again, I shook my head, and reminded him, yesterday... Well he said, 'Too bad, I wanna get back together, I thought this was good weather, Should we go for a walk?' I still couldn't talk, I don't want to, just leave Let me think about it, And don't make a fit, If I say no. If I say no... If I sayyyy NO. -M0 What do you think?