CpFreak01Join Date: 2009-11-28
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This is my first story! I hope you enjoy!
Chapter 1: The Encounter
One day at Sword Fight on the Heights IV, Telamon decided to visit his awesome swordfighting place and to get some of his kills from noobs who don't even know how to lunge. "Ah.. What a wonderful server with no hackers.." Telamon said. "OMG HI TELAMON!!" Says a random robloxian who attempts to pull out his sword in front of Telamon. Sadly, he did not get the chance because Telamon had his Illumina out before he pressed number 1. "Hehe. Nice try." Telamon said yawning. "What does it take to get a real challenge around here?!" Telamon yelled. "Hmph..Its so quiet in this server....." "Too quiet.." Telamon finished off as he spun around deflecting a blow from an unknown player who came crashing down on him with a darkheart. "Haha, nice try, but you're no match for me! Hahahaha!" Telamon laughed as he blocked another blow from the unknown player. Telamon lunged, but found his move get countered and his sword went flying off into the deep never ending abyss.
"Huh.. You're worth something there.." Telamon said, as he pulled out his normal sword. "I might actually try now." Telamon huffed. The unknown player jabbed at Telamon but Telamon blocked his attack and slashed at him. The unknown player jumped over Telamon and tried lunging from the back. Telamon caught the player's sword and tried pulling it out from his grasp. But then the player did an amazing move.. He jumped up kicked Telamon's only sword out of his hand and slashed Telamon. "Aaagghh! Down to 60 health.." Telamon mumbled. Telamon backed up and found himself hit a wall. The player pulled out Telamon's Illumina. "What!? No.. THAT'S IMPOSSIBLE! AH-" Telamon broke off as the player had stabbed Telamon. "Noo!! Who.. Are.. You..!!?" Telamon said has his body shined and turned white. "Pwned..." The unknown man said.
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CpFreak01Join Date: 2009-11-28
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Please tell me if you like it and I will consider making chapter 2 right now. |
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CpFreak01Join Date: 2009-11-28
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No one?
D: |
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I've heard that story before. Make Chapter 2, I'm interested. |
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mbestJoin Date: 2009-05-09
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INCOMING WORD-WALL AT 12 O' Clo-*splat*
jk, great story. :P |
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Vincent55Join Date: 2009-03-21
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Epic story. |
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Chapter 2: Humiliated
Telamon was sitting in his office in the Roblox HQ, feeling down about the impossible kill. "No.. No.. No No NO!" Telamon shouted. "That was SO Impossible!" Telamon yelled as he watched the killcam over and over again on the television screen. "I'm ruined, what will everyone think of me? That stupid player caught it on tape and now everyone is watching it!" Telamon cried. "Oh no. What will people say on the forums?!" Telamon said has he goes onto the "Forum" page. There were titles saying "TELAMON GETS PWNED BY NOOB?", "TELAMON DIED! LOL!", "TELAMON PWNT", and more. "Oh.. No..!" Telamon said. "I should have banned him! GAH! But no... Thats against the rules. He didn't break a rule. Ugh.." Telamon said. Telamon went back to his famous Sword Fighting game. "Hey guys!" Telamon said happily. "HAHAHA U GOT PWNED" a noob said. "YEAH HAHA UR SO NOOBISH" another noob said. Telamon left the game and sat there. "I must get REVENGE..." Telamon thought..
The next day...
Telamon walked down to the meeting room of the ROBLOX HQ. "Telamon, how could you lose to that guy? You so could have owned him!" Clockwork yelled. "Dude he was seriously HACKING" Telamon said. "Nope. According to killcam and In-game radars, it did not indicate any use of exploiting" Said Builderman. "No... That was hacking. And I'll prove it some how." Promised Telamon...
{TO BE CONTINUED} By: CpFreak01
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CpFreak01Join Date: 2009-11-28
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Bring
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CpFreak01Join Date: 2009-11-28
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SOMEONE GIVE ME FEEDBACK IF YOU WANT CHAPTER THREE!
D:< |
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xzbobzxJoin Date: 2008-09-17
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Make a book, like a mesh with scripts as chapters.
just a --[story]-- script. :3 |
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CpFreak01Join Date: 2009-11-28
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@xzbobzx
Erm.
I can't script. |
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HandsDownJoin Date: 2010-09-09
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I cant read much because I currently have an eye infection. |
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CpFreak01Join Date: 2009-11-28
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@HandsDown
I hope you get better.
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Read it, awshum. But I'm still raging bout' teh Lose Connection glitch. |
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MHXJoin Date: 2008-12-08
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Nice story. You did some grammar (?) mistakes int he first chapter, but the story is well written. Make more! And please, add some breaks next time. |
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Chapter 3: Getting Proof
Telamon walked around in circles. "Hmm. I must get proof to prove that he is a hacker. But.. How?" Said Telamon. "I'll need an administrator's help. Someone who believes me." Telamon thought. Telamon sat and thought for hours until he decided he must ask the admins if they believe the mystery player was a hacker....
The next day...
Telamon walked into Clockwork's room. "Hey clocky, do you think that the guy was an exploiter?" Telamon said. "Hmm. Well it looked like a real kill to me" Said Clockwork. "Gah. I need someone to help me get proof so I can prove to everyone he was not a normal player." sighed Telamon. "Can I borrow one of your Teapot cam's for a while?" Telamon asked Clockwork. "Hm. Well if you can't prove it in a week using my trusty Teapot cam, you owe me 500,000 robux, Haha!" Clockwork said. "I'll see what I can do now.. I think I need to take a trip into Banland, wanna come with?" Telamon asked. "Oh alright. I might as well come to see what those banned peeps are doing anyways" Said Clockwork.
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chapta 3!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 |
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CpFreak01Join Date: 2009-11-28
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Gosh, I love making these stories! I'm ready for chapter 4! Someone give me feedback and I will start working on it. |
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winJoin Date: 2007-10-20
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If he sees my older account in banland, send my regards. |
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winJoin Date: 2007-10-20
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The story is great - one thing, Clockwork isn't an admin. He does have the admin badge, but he still works at a different company. |
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CpFreak01Join Date: 2009-11-28
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@Win
Oh yeah, I forgot.
But it's too late now.
T_T |
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winJoin Date: 2007-10-20
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He can be living outside of the ROBLOX suite, in a bush, begging them for a job. |
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CpFreak01Join Date: 2009-11-28
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I'm gonna pretend he's still an admin.
:P
I'm gonna start working on chapter 4. |
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Chapter 4: Banland
Telamon and Clockwork flew through many robloxian-made maps. Telamon on his Illumina hovercraft, and Clockwork on his Teapot surfboard. "Why can't we just teleport to Banland?" Clockwork said. "Well this is more fun!" Telamon shouted as he jumped off his Illumina and parachuted toward the polluted area of Banland. Telamon and Clockwork landed at the gates of Banland. "ID please" The guard asked. Telamon and Clockwork showed the guard their Administrator badges. "Permission Granted" The guard said. The gates of Banland flew open and an eerie silence echoed throughout the entire area. Telamon shouted "Do any of you know this person from the Temporarily Banned area?" as he held up a picture of the unknown player. "No one..? Well. This must be a new hacker then." Telamon said. "Something feels left out here" Clockwork said while looking around. "Huh. Sure feels empty here" Telamon said. "Wait.." Telamon and Clockwork said at the same time. "WHERE'S THE FOUR HACKERS?!" They both yelled. "Teapot Cam GO! Look for Dignity and the others!" Telamon shouted as he threw the teapot so far no one could see it. "I believe you now Telamon! I'll help you all the way. We need Teapot barriers around the Roblox HQ so they can't steal the special passcode to operate ROBLOX" Clockwork said. "Alright lets go!" Telamon said as he jumped onto his Illumina and flew away toward Roblox HQ.
(Meanwhile, at the Roblox HQ)
"Huh. Wonder why Telamon and Clockwork aren't here." Builderman said. "Yeah. They must be sleepyheads today!" Reesemcblox said while sipping coffee. THUD. "..." THUD. "What was that?" Builderman said. THUD. Reesemcblox's coffee shook. "I don't know. But it sure isn't the Pretty Pink Pony army coming to make us cupcakes" Reesemcblox said. BOOM! The Roblox HQ roof broke off and there stood towering above was a giant MechSuit robot. "WHAT IS THAT?!" Builderman said as he got up. "EEEP!" Reesemcblox cried. "HEY! Sorry I'm late today, I had to fix a bug in a game at home!" Vibhu said as he walked through the front door. "OH MAI GOSH WHAT IS THAT!" Vibhu shouted as he saw the MechSuit. The mechsuit robot held up his hand facing the three administrators and charged a powerbeam. ZzzzZzzzzzZzz.... "AHHHH!!!" They all cried standing in fear.
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Make chapter 4, out of all threads on the forums, these types are the only ones that are worth noticing, your an awesome story maker, so please keep doing what your doing! |
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