of     1   

mangetsu
#39677303Monday, December 27, 2010 11:43 PM GMT

The day i was born was know as a egypt demon day, i always caused trouble, and i always have been strong. i grew up to be 3 months when my parents tried to kill me because of their troubles. they stabed me, and i was fine, they tried to burn me in fire, i just rose higher and stronger, at last they did the unthinkable, they used the only forbidden spell they could use. it was supposed to burn the soul and destroy the body. good for me i was the god of night, when they did they ritual it was night time, first they took my blood and drew a dragon on my forhead. then they, together, sealed my soul into the pits of hell. they thought i was dead, until i sai8d my first word: frost. the god of the fire came up to my parents and burned them to ash. Frost held me as his own until i was powerful enough on my own. i took the body of a strong human figure and moved on. one day when i woke up my house was on fire, i smirked knowing this was from frost. after the fire the only thing that wasnt ash was a sword, a sword like no other. i picked it up and put it in the case my mother gave me when i was born, and i walked out of the ashs to find... Chapter one END
mangetsu
#39678776Tuesday, December 28, 2010 12:00 AM GMT

When i walked out of the ash's i found a group of people...they had puzzled faces. i said "what...why are you looking at me like that?" the group had on uniforms and guns on their backs. The people made a gap in the formation, a general walked out from behind the group. "hello who are you and what do you do here? you seem pretty fine after a fire like that." he said. i replied back "i am...uh.i- my name is...nick." "well then 'nick' would you be interested in serving this world in war?" he held a contract and gave it to me "what is this?" i said "it is a contract.sign it if you wish to serve this nation." he said. i close my eyes and in my mind i write the word "nick" on the contract, when i open my eyes it was written. i gave the paper back to the general. "well then" he said "how did you do that without a pen?" i didn't know what to say so i spit out the only words i could think of "oh i didn't sign it your eyes must be seeing things from the brightness of the fire." he looked at me with the most strong face i have even seen and said "well then here is a pen and the paper" he gave the paper back to me and a pen. i acted like i signed it and he brought me to his tent. "so where do you come from" he said "i don't really know..." i replied. he was puzzled. then he asked the hardest question for a guy like me "so frost raised you right?"
mangetsu
#39736058Tuesday, December 28, 2010 6:26 PM GMT

I had no idea any one knew about frost. i didn't want him to be right if he knew my power and who frost is then he would have infinite strength. so i lied to him. "uh, no i...i must of left the oven on or something." "OK then" he said."lets head out!" "Where are we going?" i asked. "ha ha ha ha, foolish child" i got a little mad but i didn't let it go to my head. "we are going to a R.A.T. base." "what is R.A.T." our strongest Allie." i had no idea that these were mass armies. "well...then what is our armies name?" he must of thought i would've know by know but he still replied "we are F.E.A.R." i had the worst feeling of that name. not just because of the name...it had origins from my family, it had to. so i just said "super..." he didn't listen to me and he said "move out!" i barley knew what that meant, hey i was almost killed by my parents and this is my first run of society. i just followed my higher ranks like the others. we took boats. a higher rank named "kyleOlantern" decided to tell us again where we are going. "we are going to RAT fort Celeste!" When we finally got there i saw an intruder sneak in, he looked, different than other humans. i saw another get in as well, this time with armor.. that one showed me that, they were vampires.
mangetsu
#39744068Tuesday, December 28, 2010 8:00 PM GMT

As the vampire got in they had a very specific look on their faces that said to me "don't tell or we will get you." so i didn't. as i walked inside of the fort the vampire had the base under control. my fellow friends were on their knee's except the general. he was next to me. the leader of RAT came and helped. when i saw the vampires struggling to get out of jail...i knew i had to help. but i couldn't. i asked the RAT leader if i could talk into the speaker phone. he let me, then i said "why did you come here?" one of them sat up and yelled "this war will be won by vampire knights!" and like that they vanished. i left there soon. one day i was defending a FEAR HQ when i heard a loud noise like a gun shot. i ran over to see what happened and the general that i have been along side was killed. my sadness grew to anger, then to power. i started to glow with a Erie red light. i got so mad the i teleported to the killer and i put him in jail. i started to ask him questions. "are you a vampire?" he replied back saying "almost, but that's not why im here." i decided to talk to him more, he seemed to have alot of information. "well then, why do you hate this group?" i said "because all the leader wants is money! they will never care about you! you have been doing so good and oh look your still a private!!" i saw now what he meant. i felt so used...so dead....but so mad. he saw that i had a red eye and he was scared "uh...why is your eye red?" he said "i will never be used again" i said and with that i opened the jail and let him out and decided to kill all the FEAR members who decided to use me. after that we met up again and i asked "what is your name?" he had a funny look on his face. "my name is scar. what is yours?" i had to of looked like a complete fool. his name was scar and mine was supposed to be nick. so i said. without lieing. "my name is Mangetsu god of the night."
mangetsu
#39761787Tuesday, December 28, 2010 11:21 PM GMT

he was Happy because he knew that i am a god. "well i would of been better if i knew i was with a god." he said. "well im not a god. at least not yet." i said. he was scared that if he got me mad then he would die." well. your strong and that's good enough." i followed him to his house. "well, that general was good. i can see why you liked him so much." he said. "well he was just like the rest of them...*sips*" i said. "so what clan are you in?" i asked. "well...im in many different clans but i am trying to make a clan called 'G.U.N.' i felt the need to help him and join the clan imidietly. i asked him if i could join and he just nodded his head. the day passed and my dreams were crazy. i kept waking up and getting scared. when i woke up in the morning i realized some thing, "my sword!" i yelled. scar woke up and ran up to the room he gave me with a gun. "what happened did some one die!?" he said "no...your still half asleep aren't you?" he laughed and asked what happened. "so what sword?" he asked. "well...never mind ill tell you later."i said. he pulled out my sword and said "is this it? i found that general using it."
mangetsu
#39826989Wednesday, December 29, 2010 7:38 PM GMT

i wasnt as mad as i would be but i was still mad. i took the sword from him and put it in the case. "thats a pretty good sword there." said scar. "well im going to hunt and train. im gonna do a raid soon too." he said. "you should go too clan some times try to burn down the house but i sare them away i want to show you." he said. i grabbed a gun and said "ok lets go". he walked through the grass without making a sound. regularly i could float and not make any sound but i would need the moons power. so i just walked like he did. we saw a bunch of fear troops walking twords the house and scar said "watch and learn..." as he aimed at a members head. a fellow FEAR troop saw the red dot and told him. they got out snipers and guns, along with grenades. apparently scar had the aim of an eagle because he was able to shoot a grenade and kill most of the troops. unfourtenetly they knew where we were now. so we jumped out of the bushes and i took out my sword and started slashing at members. scar was apparently better with a gun than a sword because he had two Thompsons on his shoulders and he was shopoting a shot gun. after we defeated the raid we started a little hunt. scar was suprised by how many kills i got. we decided to do the raid another time. we brought home a few male adult deer, and a few different animals. we had a feast celebtating the raid nwe topok out today then we fell right asleep. i woke up and went down stairs just to see scar was gone. i didnt know what to feel but all i could do is protect the house. and that is what i did. scar came back at about 5:00 PM. i wasnt mad so i just asked him where he was. he said "well, i just made G.U.N. and your the first general we will ever have."
frostfighter2
#39835303Wednesday, December 29, 2010 9:21 PM GMT

This is such a fascinating story I love it
mangetsu
#40243388Monday, January 03, 2011 2:35 AM GMT

i walked with scar to the HQ. i noticed that no one was there/ but i knew some one was here. scar shouted like he was announcing to the whole world "here is our new member, he is going to be very helpful to us!" a bunch of people in forest camo walked out. one with a rocket launcher on his back and holding a m16, he said "oh hi scar, whop is this?" "didnt you hear me?"scar said "he is out new member and he is very powerful." the soldier seemed surprised and both jealus at the same time. "hi im rocke" he said. "i am the second leader of GUN." i looked at him. he had on the wieredest clothes ive ever seen. it was a uniform but it was different. then a spark in the back of my head said something. it said "he is wearing a FEAR uniform!" i put my hand on my knife and asked "why are you wearing a FEAR uniform?" "oh i am a great spy i was able to extermanate a general useing my spy skills." he replied. "well then" i said letting go of my knife "nice to meet you." chapter 7 END Chapter 8 START so me rocke and scar were eating breakfast in the leaders room. when we start to exgange storys. "well the only reason they call me scar is because..." scar moved his shirt by his neck to reveal a huge scar "...when i was a kid my parents were killed and they-" we heard a explosion out side the biulding. we took guns swords and more and went out side. we heard marching but all we could see was dead GUN members and a cloud of smoke. soldiers came from the smoke in FEAR uniforms. i had tons of emotions in that one moment. i was angry, sad, scared, and i just didnt know what to do. thats when i saw a FEAR member pointing his gun at us. "ha ha ha good job guys very good job" said scar. "what? whats going on guys?!" scar and rocke wanted to say the same thing at the same time but scar was the first to talk. "oh this is our spy nation they are amazing at acting, spying, and disguises." he said. "so this is just all an act?" i asked. "yup, see look." scar said. i looked at the scene and the fallen GUN members stood up and brushed the dust off them, and the FEAR members helped them up. "this is an amazing clan scar." i said. "thanks" scar replied. "ok are you ready for the biggest war of your life?" chapter 8 END Chapter 9 START I was puzzled but i was ready as always. "what?" i asked "what war?" i said. "woah woah calm down. its fine this isnt much as a war as it is a raid." scar said. "well, just be carful." said rocke "we cant lose another, like frost." he turned around and a tear dropped on the ground. i knew frost came because he wanted to see me. frost thought that i would've found scar long ago. but all i said was "uh, who's frost?" rocke turned back to me saying "well, he was a great fighter, and, he was the biggest loss of our's" "well..." i didnt want to say this but i didn "... how did he die." apparently rocke couldt talk about it any more so scar kicked in. "he was fighting a FEAR specialist and when he was about to win..." scar had a tear in his eye. "... the leader of fear sniped him it his neck" i felt mad but all i could do is get back at him.We went to the raid in disguise. we had guns and we were treated by FEAR privates. i guessed that we were wearing general clothes. rocke whispered in my ear "all we need to do i get in the biulding then we will have a victory." i liked his plan. so i followed with him. i saw gun members following us but also blending in with FEAR. we got in the biulding just in time. our distraction came in at the perfect time. gun members acted like they were shot down. some members got suspicious because we didnt fight. we were sent to a tiny jail in the biulding. the leader of FEAR came to the cell only to find a bunch of replica's of us. chapter 9 END Chapter 10 START we had escaped but the leader was gaining. we were to much in a rush to pull a wepon on him, but he could. he shot scar. scar fell to the ground and the leader left. scar said to us with his last breath. "the second year *cough cough* the second year is when *cough* is when we live *cough cough cough* mangetsu *cough* take care of the members. they will need you and rocke to survive. *cough* *cough* *cough*" with his last breath he said "i know you are combined with frost, now belive it." and with that he died. rocke couldnt talk or move. he wanted scar back more than anything. rocke said to me "he is gone, how will we survive, whats the second year,how will we survive with out the leader?! mangetsu say something about him please!" i was speechless. i said nothing. my eyes glowed and my hair fell apart. my clothes tore. and i rose up surrounded by a red dusty shpere. i had no emotion. when the shpere turned white it turned to night but there was no moon. and every this flew twords me like im a black hole. when the leader of FEAR hit my shpere he had the most pricless look on his face. and thats when his bodie fell apart and the HQ fell to ash. and all the FEAR members disapeared. rocke and scars body were still there. i fell to the ground, my eyes went back to normal, it was day again but all of the FEAR members and the HQ were still gone. rocke seemed not to notice any thing but he looked at me and he seemed happy. "hi mangetsu, frost is coming. i didnt know that you guys were so close." i guess during that whole time i was in the shpere he was looking at my whole life history. "frost has really been good to you hasnt he?" rocke said, then next to me frost appeared. we were automaticly teleported to scars hide out. frost told his life story, i told mine, and rocke told his. i saw a FEAR general trying to snipe us from the trees. he shot the bullet and it hit my skull. Thats when i woke up with an alarm ringing and birds were singing, and i felt very wiered. the door to my room opened and scar came in saying "you were in a coma for two years!" that is my story and here are the starring charicters: Frostfighter2 as Frost!! Scar96 as scar!! Rocke97 as rocke!! and me mangetsu as the star mangetsu!

    of     1