New song ****read**** please dont laugh

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#4076023Thursday, December 04, 2008 1:13 AM GMT

Im in a band called Black DiamondZ. here is one of our songs This is how a heart breaks This is how a heart breaks I'm sitting at home so depressed and alone I'm thinkin' of you and cryin' too you broke my heart and I'll never forgive you Why you gave up on me Why So suddenly This is how a heart breaks Ya Ooo ya I've got a million questions too But none of the answers Do you Do you It seems like day after day the world's spinning around me to fast alast Ya That is how a heart breaks ya

cutieKT9

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#4076563Thursday, December 04, 2008 1:42 AM GMT

good song I bet your band roxs :D

zorkoidtheman

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#4077200Thursday, December 04, 2008 2:12 AM GMT

seems pretty good but this sons is good too: hi sup yo

musicman7

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#4079955Thursday, December 04, 2008 4:59 AM GMT

Pretty Kewl. I wish I could write lyrics like that =P. [MM7]

zeds

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#4081450Thursday, December 04, 2008 1:50 PM GMT

*points and laughs 4 little*no its good

sk8r09

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#4081967Thursday, December 04, 2008 4:07 PM GMT

I SAID DONT LAUGH!!! IF YOU DIDNT LIKE IT YOU COULD JUST SAY SO!!! >:-ll (sorry about caps being on totally mistake);)

DerProgrammierer

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#4084384Thursday, December 04, 2008 9:04 PM GMT

i cant really say i like it or not....i like lyrics but i like to listen to em...play the song record it (voice) and upload it to youtube :p

flamingmonkey

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#4085677Thursday, December 04, 2008 10:05 PM GMT

it would be a good corus i guess

FreonFreddy

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#4124197Saturday, December 06, 2008 6:50 PM GMT

Awesome :o It could be a little longer.

whisperwitch

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#4124373Saturday, December 06, 2008 6:56 PM GMT

its not terrific but its not awful

FreonFreddy

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#4124451Saturday, December 06, 2008 6:58 PM GMT

Neeeeeeeee D: I'm trying to fill up the first page with my name :P

gageaz

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#4125328Saturday, December 06, 2008 7:34 PM GMT

Well, being in a upcoming band myself, I would say that this isn't great but isn't terrible. It uses too many Oohs and Aahs and never gets down to it's point. Plus, since I'm not reading and sheet music, I'd say that this is about as long as the average lengh of a Pixies song. (Pixies songs are usually from 1:30 to 2:00 minutes long. Maybe three minutes on a rare occasion such as Debaser. But I'm not a hardcore fan so this is based off the songs on the album Doolittle.)